spidey_17
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Sept 9, 2011 15:59:55 GMT -5
Post by spidey_17 on Sept 9, 2011 15:59:55 GMT -5
Well, this is what i meant. I thought it was obvious..... hehe Thanks PN!
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Sept 9, 2011 16:27:29 GMT -5
Post by Crom-Cruach on Sept 9, 2011 16:27:29 GMT -5
Thanks crom. Do you have anything to criticize, something that you think that is needed to be improved? Your faces are what needs the most work at the moment, they seem "one-dimensional" is the best way to put it. Wizard put up a manuel to teach how to draw super-heroes you might want to check up given the Micheal Turner and Jim lee were the ones contributing the the chapters about facial expressions.
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Sept 9, 2011 22:31:41 GMT -5
Post by spidey_17 on Sept 9, 2011 22:31:41 GMT -5
Thanks crom. Do you have anything to criticize, something that you think that is needed to be improved? Your faces are what needs the most work at the moment, they seem "one-dimensional" is the best way to put it. Wizard put up a manuel to teach how to draw super-heroes you might want to check up given the Micheal Turner and Jim lee were the ones contributing the the chapters about facial expressions. I might check it. Thanks crom.
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Sept 9, 2011 23:12:29 GMT -5
Post by Supreme Marvel on Sept 9, 2011 23:12:29 GMT -5
Wizard put up a manuel to teach how to draw super-heroes you might want to check up given the Micheal Turner and Jim lee were the ones contributing the the chapters about facial expressions. Damn, my 2 and 3 favourite artists.
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Sept 9, 2011 23:39:46 GMT -5
Post by spidey_17 on Sept 9, 2011 23:39:46 GMT -5
@crom: Btw, apart from faces, what else do you think it needs be improved?
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Sept 10, 2011 16:19:19 GMT -5
Post by Crom-Cruach on Sept 10, 2011 16:19:19 GMT -5
@crom: Btw, apart from faces, what else do you think it needs be improved? your hands need definite work. A human finger has three mobile portions, but many of your drawing show hands with only two.
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Sept 10, 2011 16:32:04 GMT -5
Post by ckal on Sept 10, 2011 16:32:04 GMT -5
I like it spidey. It looks like you have a pretty good understanding of musculature.
I would agree that your hands and feet need work, but that is understandable as those are two of the hardest things to draw on a person.
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Sept 10, 2011 20:55:48 GMT -5
Post by spidey_17 on Sept 10, 2011 20:55:48 GMT -5
@crom: LOL, this is something that i have just noticed. Thanks for that crom, i'll try to be more careful when drawing fingers next time. ckal: Thanks man. I have been practicing on muscles for a long of time. As for the finger problem, as i said, i'll try to be more careful while drawing them.
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Sept 26, 2011 20:35:55 GMT -5
Post by spidey_17 on Sept 26, 2011 20:35:55 GMT -5
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Sept 27, 2011 17:06:11 GMT -5
Post by Crom-Cruach on Sept 27, 2011 17:06:11 GMT -5
Your shoulders and neck proportions need definite work, not natural. Seems almost, dare I say it... Liefieldian.
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Sept 27, 2011 19:54:46 GMT -5
Post by spidey_17 on Sept 27, 2011 19:54:46 GMT -5
Could you elaborate more on that please?
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Sept 27, 2011 20:50:12 GMT -5
Post by Crom-Cruach on Sept 27, 2011 20:50:12 GMT -5
The lenght from head to shoulder of the neck is off. There are strange bulges to the muscles around that area and frankly some of them seem to have legs and hips too small for their immense torso. Classic liefieldian anatomy Best one proportionally speaking is Batman, worse if king.
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Sept 27, 2011 21:07:27 GMT -5
Post by spidey_17 on Sept 27, 2011 21:07:27 GMT -5
Thanks for the tips crom, but i have a plenty of questions to make, so i think i would PM you if you don't mind! Thanks again!
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Sept 27, 2011 21:10:47 GMT -5
Post by Crom-Cruach on Sept 27, 2011 21:10:47 GMT -5
sure go ahead if you like.
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Oct 2, 2011 12:20:40 GMT -5
Post by spidey_17 on Oct 2, 2011 12:20:40 GMT -5
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Oct 2, 2011 17:18:32 GMT -5
Post by Crom-Cruach on Oct 2, 2011 17:18:32 GMT -5
Keep up the good work
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Oct 2, 2011 20:52:36 GMT -5
Post by spidey_17 on Oct 2, 2011 20:52:36 GMT -5
Thanks man!
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