Post by yaujtapool on Feb 23, 2011 14:51:42 GMT -5
I'm no literary genius (Which is one of the main reasons i dont make fan fics) but out of boredom and inspiration from a novel ive been reading and a battle thread i made, I've decided to write something.
Part 1
Midnight on a remote highway in Nevada, a single vehicle speeds across the lonely desert highway. Riddled with bullet holes, missing its front bumper this injured beast finally sputters its last dying breathe and pulls to the side of the road. The two occupants exit the beaten remains of their vehicle. One a young male in his early 20's wearing a bloodstained duster coat with messy dark hair, a bleeding shoulder and a sawed off shotgun slung around his good shoulder. The other a Woman who looks to be of a similar age, wearing a tank top and military style cargo pants with matching boots. The woman had a beautiful symmetrical face that looked as if it was manufactured with the highest precision. The man broke the silence between the two "So now what ? Our car is shot to pieces, and the only weapon is this fucking shotgun with only two slugs in it!". The woman replied in a surprisingly cold and monotonous voice "There is an establishment approximately 2.57 miles from our location, we will go there now, the T-X model should reach us in 40 minutes". The man sighed and let the woman lead the way.
Elsewhere in Las Vegas a large man in a police uniform that seems to small for him enters a parking lot. He inspects the lot looking for "a vehicle of optimal performance", and soon spots what he is looking for in the form of a convertible Porsche with a young man and his girlfriend inside. The officer quickly stops the vehicle, with the driver promptly smirking and telling the officer "What gives man, I havent been doing nothing!". The mans face soon changes from mild annoyance to pure horror as the officer pulls out a pistol and promptly shoots him and his girlfriend in between the eyes, throwing the drivers body out of the seat he ignores the dead passenger, revs the engine and speeds off.
The sound of a gunshot catches the attention of a huge being crouching on the top of a large casino, it has been viewing the bustling glowing orbs of life below with amusement at their depravity and desperation . The being stands up to its full 7 foot height and swiftly makes its way down the building, it seems too fast for a creature that weighs 500 lbs whilst wearing heavy armor and moves more swiftly than the best human acrobat. Its helmet tracking the location of the gunshot triangulates it to a parking lot 200 yards away. Exiting the area is a Porsche with a large police officer driving it, the being has relocated its prey and this time it will not lose it !
I may or may not make more of these, it really depends if you guys want more. And criticize the shit out of it (I really dont mind), i know i havent written much but i hope it helps give you a general idea of what this thing might be like. I know its not brilliant but maybe with time i can improve....
Anyhow hope you enjoyed it
Part 1
Midnight on a remote highway in Nevada, a single vehicle speeds across the lonely desert highway. Riddled with bullet holes, missing its front bumper this injured beast finally sputters its last dying breathe and pulls to the side of the road. The two occupants exit the beaten remains of their vehicle. One a young male in his early 20's wearing a bloodstained duster coat with messy dark hair, a bleeding shoulder and a sawed off shotgun slung around his good shoulder. The other a Woman who looks to be of a similar age, wearing a tank top and military style cargo pants with matching boots. The woman had a beautiful symmetrical face that looked as if it was manufactured with the highest precision. The man broke the silence between the two "So now what ? Our car is shot to pieces, and the only weapon is this fucking shotgun with only two slugs in it!". The woman replied in a surprisingly cold and monotonous voice "There is an establishment approximately 2.57 miles from our location, we will go there now, the T-X model should reach us in 40 minutes". The man sighed and let the woman lead the way.
Elsewhere in Las Vegas a large man in a police uniform that seems to small for him enters a parking lot. He inspects the lot looking for "a vehicle of optimal performance", and soon spots what he is looking for in the form of a convertible Porsche with a young man and his girlfriend inside. The officer quickly stops the vehicle, with the driver promptly smirking and telling the officer "What gives man, I havent been doing nothing!". The mans face soon changes from mild annoyance to pure horror as the officer pulls out a pistol and promptly shoots him and his girlfriend in between the eyes, throwing the drivers body out of the seat he ignores the dead passenger, revs the engine and speeds off.
The sound of a gunshot catches the attention of a huge being crouching on the top of a large casino, it has been viewing the bustling glowing orbs of life below with amusement at their depravity and desperation . The being stands up to its full 7 foot height and swiftly makes its way down the building, it seems too fast for a creature that weighs 500 lbs whilst wearing heavy armor and moves more swiftly than the best human acrobat. Its helmet tracking the location of the gunshot triangulates it to a parking lot 200 yards away. Exiting the area is a Porsche with a large police officer driving it, the being has relocated its prey and this time it will not lose it !
I may or may not make more of these, it really depends if you guys want more. And criticize the shit out of it (I really dont mind), i know i havent written much but i hope it helps give you a general idea of what this thing might be like. I know its not brilliant but maybe with time i can improve....
Anyhow hope you enjoyed it
