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InnerVenom123's Batman Comic Thread! Apr 21, 2011 14:31:27 GMT -5

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Post by InnerVenom123 on Apr 21, 2011 14:31:27 GMT -5

Artist: www.comicvine.com/myvine/captaincockblock/

My take on Batman. It's a wee bit different from most interpretations, and yet similar. It was just me doing a re-do because I can.

My advice? Forget everything you know about Batman before you read these. That'll probably help if you want to murder me for some of the changes.

BATMAN #1

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BATMAN #2

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Anyway, I'll add more when more gets done. Hope you enjoyed! ;D

For the love of all that's holy/unholy/awesome, please only give constructive criticism if you've got something negative to say/gripe about. Also, a smiley emoticon wouldn't hurt!

AS MUCH AS I WOULD LOVE TO, I DO NOT OWN BATMAN, DC AND WARNER BROS. DO, SO I OBVIOUSLY DO NOT INTEND TO PROFIT FROM THIS AND I OBVIOUSLY DO NOT, ETC

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Admin Administrator Posts: 29,036	InnerVenom123's Batman Comic Thread! Apr 21, 2011 14:38:59 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Admin on Apr 21, 2011 14:38:59 GMT -5 Can't check this at work, but will later.

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InnerVenom123's Batman Comic Thread! Apr 21, 2011 22:46:14 GMT -5

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I read #1. So far so good, I'll read #2 later when I'm not sidetracked lol. My only criticisms would be that on page 4 where the man sitting says "Y'all all---" You don't need that second all and also on page 8 the little text boxes should be blue instead of black since thats his inner monologue but things like that are simple mistakes that can be avoided with a review of the script.

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InnerVenom123's Batman Comic Thread! Apr 22, 2011 2:36:47 GMT -5

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Apr 21, 2011 22:46:14 GMT -5 Purrpura Bastette said:

I read #1. So far so good, I'll read #2 later when I'm not sidetracked lol. My only criticisms would be that on page 4 where the man sitting says "Y'all all---" You don't need that second all and also on page 8 the little text boxes should be blue instead of black since thats his inner monologue but things like that are simple mistakes that can be avoided with a review of the script.

1- I fail at punk/thug talk. Like a boss.

2- Nope, that's still Bruce's inner monologue. He and Batman have two different ones. Why will be explained later.

3- THANK YOU FOR THE FEEDBACK AND STUFF! ;D

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InnerVenom123 Team Buster Ledger Venom: Lethal Avenger! Posts: 2,570	InnerVenom123's Batman Comic Thread! Apr 22, 2011 2:37:29 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by InnerVenom123 on Apr 22, 2011 2:37:29 GMT -5 Apr 21, 2011 23:04:04 GMT -5 Power NeXus said: You wrote these yourself? Daaang. ;D I wrote the script, CCB drew it, and I did the lettering.
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Matezoide Team Buster Ledger Elephants! Posts: 2,240	InnerVenom123's Batman Comic Thread! Apr 22, 2011 6:59:36 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Matezoide on Apr 22, 2011 6:59:36 GMT -5 awesome

InnerVenom123 Team Buster Ledger Venom: Lethal Avenger! Posts: 2,570	InnerVenom123's Batman Comic Thread! Apr 22, 2011 13:04:22 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by InnerVenom123 on Apr 22, 2011 13:04:22 GMT -5 Apr 22, 2011 6:59:36 GMT -5 Matezoide said: awesome Thanks ;D

spidey_17 The Unstoppable Ledgernaut With Great Power Comes Great.... suffering? Posts: 4,961	InnerVenom123's Batman Comic Thread! Apr 23, 2011 5:12:50 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by spidey_17 on Apr 23, 2011 5:12:50 GMT -5 Cooooool

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InnerVenom123 Team Buster Ledger Venom: Lethal Avenger! Posts: 2,570	InnerVenom123's Batman Comic Thread! Apr 23, 2011 11:51:06 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by InnerVenom123 on Apr 23, 2011 11:51:06 GMT -5 Apr 23, 2011 10:33:20 GMT -5 Admin said: Page #14 for issue 1 wouldn't load, but that was a really fun read I fixed it! Thanks for pointing that out! Also, thank you! ;D

InnerVenom123 Team Buster Ledger Venom: Lethal Avenger! Posts: 2,570	InnerVenom123's Batman Comic Thread! Apr 23, 2011 11:51:22 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by InnerVenom123 on Apr 23, 2011 11:51:22 GMT -5 Apr 23, 2011 5:12:50 GMT -5 spidey_17 said: Cooooool Thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaanks! ;D

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InnerVenom123 Team Buster Ledger Venom: Lethal Avenger! Posts: 2,570	InnerVenom123's Batman Comic Thread! Apr 23, 2011 14:54:53 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by InnerVenom123 on Apr 23, 2011 14:54:53 GMT -5 Apr 23, 2011 12:04:20 GMT -5 spidey_17 said: Both of you did a great job. =] ;D Thanks again!

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InnerVenom123's Batman Comic Thread! Apr 23, 2011 17:23:06 GMT -5

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Apr 23, 2011 14:59:19 GMT -5 nelomaxwell said:

I think it'd be cooler if you created your own character and did a comic. You have a good knack for the voice of a person with either DID or a MPD. I like it though.

Yeah, I'm not in that mindset yet, but maybe one day!

Also thanks! ;D

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