Post by InnerVenom123 on Jul 10, 2011 3:56:22 GMT -5
Page 1
Panel 1:
Show Werewolf By Night slammed onto the ground with his eyes shut.
CAPTION(Moon Knight): I smell his burning fur.
Panel 2:
Side view. Moon Knight walks past Jack Russell’s (human form of Werewolf By Night) body.
CAPTION(Moon Knight): His body stinks like death and blood.
Panel 3:
Show the taser crescents strewn about on the ground next to Jack’s face.
Page 2
Panel 1:
Show Bushman looking up at Black Spectre.
BUSHMAN: We can take him down at the same time if we work at it.
BLACK SPECTRE: Indeed.
Panel 2:
Show Black Spectre looking down at Bushman.
BLACK SPECTRE: Kill her.
Panel 3:
Show Moon Knight’s eyes, wide.
MOON KNIGHT: WAIT!!
Panel 4:
Show Bushman’s clawed finger pulling the trigger.
SFX: BLAM
Page 3
BIG IMAGE:
Show Bushman kneeling down next to Marlene’s body. She has a bullet hole in her head, and her eyes look terrified as they did before. Khonshu is standing behind her, hovering over the scene.
MOON KNIGHT(From off panel): NO!!!! NOOOOOO!!!!!!!
Page 4
Panel 1:
Side view. Black Spectre holding a large battle axe and rushing at Moon Knight with it.
BLACK SPECTRE: THAT’S for killing me!
Panel 2:
Front view of Moon Knight as Black Spectre swings his axe down and barely misses chopping Moon Knight’s arm off.
BLACK SPECTRE: The REST is gonna be for FUN!!
MOON KNIGHT: YOU @#%#ING SON OF A @#%#!!!!!!!!
Panel 3:
Show Bushman standing up from Marlene’s body holding twin pistols.
BUSHMAN: It all ends here, Spector!
Panel 4:
Show Moon Knight ducking under Bushman’s gunfire, and a stray bullet hits Black Spectre’s chest armor and bounces off.
SFX: BLAM BLAM BLAM
SFX: PING
BLACK SPECTRE: WATCH IT!
Page 5
Panel 1:
Show Bushman tossing aside his pistols.
Panel 2:
Show Black Spectre tossing his axe aside.
Panel 3:
Show Moon Knight looking at Black Spectre.
MOON KNIGHT: YOU KILLED HER! YOU @#%ING MONSTERS!!!!
Panel 4:
Show Black Spectre’s hand gripping the mace strapped to his back.
BLACK SPECTRE: You’re one to talk.
Panel 5:
Show Bushman’s hand taking out a machete from a strap.
BUSHMAN: You cut off my face and shoved him off a building, “hero”.
Page 6
Panel 1:
Side view. Bushman coming at Moon Knight from one side, Black Spectre slamming the mace into Moon Knight’s face from the other.
SFX: WHAM
CAPTION(Moon Knight): I cough up blood and my mask is torn.
Panel 2:
Show Moon Knight’s face, the mask is torn off of his mouth, and blood is dripping from his lips.
MOON KNIGHT: GGH!!
Panel 3:
Show Moon Knight punching Black Spectre in the side of the head.
SFX: CLANG
CAPTION(Moon Knight): My bones vibrate.
Page 7
Panel 1:
Side view. Bushman stabbing Moon Knight in the back with the machete.
SFX: SHKK
MOON KNIGHT: AGGH!!!
Panel 2:
Show Moon Knight’s face thrown to one side as Black Spectre’s mace hits him, tearing off more of his mask and some of his cloak and hood.
SFX: WHAM
SFX: RRIP
SFX: GSHKT
MOON KNIGHT: NYAGH!!
Panel 3:
Side view. Bushman kicking Moon Knight and using his body being pushed forward as leverage to rip the knife out.
SFX: GSHKT
MOON KNIGHT: @#%#!!!!
Page 8
Panel 1:
Show an aerial view. Moon Knight is sprawled out on the ground, his cape tattered and his hood and mask mostly destroyed. Black Spectre stands to one side, Bushman stands to another.
Panel 2:
Side view. Bushman ripping Moon Knight’s mask off.
MOON KNIGHT: N-NO!!
Panel 3:
Side view. Black Spectre holds Moon Knight up by his neck.
CAPTION(Moon Knight): I beg for what seems like years….
Panel 4:
Close up of Moon Knight’s chest crescent logo. Black Spectre’s hands are gripping it.
Page 9
Panel 1:
Show Black Spectre tossing Moon Knight aside, holding the chest logo. He’s torn it off.
SFX: RIIPP
CAPTION(Moon Knight): My prayers go unanswered.
BLACK SPECTRE: Your symbols are dead.
Panel 2:
Side view. Moon Knight slamming into the ground, his face first. He doesn’t have a mask, and his hood is in tatters, barely even staying on him at this point.
BLACK SPECTRE(from off panel): Your castle has been burnt down.
Panel 3:
Show Bushman licking the blood off of the machete.
BLACK SPECTRE(from off panel): Your queen is dead.
Panel 4:
Show Black Spectre standing over Moon Knight. He is shadowed and all we see are his glowing red eyes and the red moon in the sky. Khonshu stands in the distance.
BLACK SPECTRE: The Moon Knight is dead.
Page 10
Panel 1:
Show Khonshu’s face.
MARC: True…. >hghk<….
Panel 2:
Khonshu’s face. He’s smiling.
MARC: But Marc Spector….the mercenary…
Panel 3:
Show Black Spectre’s leg. Marc is jamming a crescent dart into the calf.
SFX: SHKK
MARC: LIVES!!
BLACK SPECTRE: GYAGH!!
Page 11
Panel 1:
Show Black Spectre’s face, he’s being uppercut by Marc’s fist. The Moon Knight clothes are gone, ripped and torn to shreds that are falling off.
SFX: WHAM
Panel 2:
Show Marc’s hand grabbing onto the hilt of one of Black Spectre’s strapped weapons.
MARC: And Marc Spector--
Panel 3:
Back view of Black Spectre as Marc slashes his throat open with a sword.
SFX: GSHKT
MARC: FIGHTS DIRTY!!!
BLACK SPECTRE: NGGHHH!!!!
Panel 4:
Bushman’s smile.
BUSHMAN: I always knew it would come to this.
Page 12
Panel 1:
Side view. Marc running at Bushman with the sword. Bushman running at Marc with the machete.
MARC: YOU KILLED HER!!!
BUSHMAN: YOU KILLED ME!!!
Panel 2:
Show Marc’s face as blood flies up from off panel.
SFX: SHKK
Panel 3:
Show Bushman’s face. His eyes are wide open. There’s blood spraying up from off panel.
BUSHMAN: GHK--!!
Panel 4:
Show Bushman looking down at his chest. There’s a large gash going across it.
BUSHMAN: Da…dammit….
Page 13
Panel 1:
Show Marc’s hand reaching onto the but of one of Bushman’s strapped pistols.
MARC: We both knew this is how it would always end. You said so yourself.
Panel 2:
Front view of Marc holding the gun and aiming right at us (Bushman off panel).
MARC: We were always meant to kill each other.
Panel 3:
Show the red moon.
SFX: BLAM
Page 14
Panel 1:
Side view. Marc is limping toward Marlene. Bushman’s corpse is turned over. Khonshu is standing in the background.
Panel 2:
Side view. Marc collapses onto his knees at Marlene’s body. Khonshu is in the same spot.
Panel 3:
Show Marlene’s face. Blood streaming down.
MARC(from off panel): You look so beautiful…
Panel 4:
Side view of Marc’s face. Tears streaming from his eyes.
MARC: … in this moonlight…
Page 15
Panel 1:
Side view of Marc, as he holds up the pistol.
MARC: You really do.
Panel 2:
Side view of Marc, as he shoves the pistol in his mouth.
Panel 3:
Show Marlene’s face. Still with that terrified look, covered in blood.
SFX: BLAM
Page 16
Panel 1:
Show the red moon.
Panel 2:
Closer up on the red moon.
Panel 3:
Closer up on the red moon. It’s all we can see.
Panel 4:
Pan out from the red moon. The rest of the sky is black.
Panel 5:
Pan out from the red moon more. It’s not the red moon. It’s Khonshu’s eye. We see his face, he’s smiling.
KHONSHU: Finally….
Page 17
Panel 1:
Show Moon Knight’s eyes, wide open.
MOON KNIGHT: AGH!!!
Panel 2:
Pan out to show Moon Knight leaning against a brick chimney on a building outside of the main districts of NYC (it’s more urban). His clothes are normally, fully clean, shimmering in the moon light. The moon is full.
MOON KNIGHT: Wh…wha….
Panel 3:
Show Moon Knight looking down at his open palms.
MOON KNIGHT: What…
Page 18
Panel 1:
Show a side view of Moon Knight, utterly confused. Khonshu is standing before him. Moon Knight is looking at Khonshu, surprised.
MOON KNIGHT: What’s going on?!
KHONSHU: Clear your thoughts. You were sleeping, Moon Knight.
Panel 2:
Show Moon Knight. He’s pointing at Khonshu (off panel).
MOON KNIGHT: Moon Knight?! Wh-who or WHAT are you!?
Panel 3:
Show Khonshu, twice as large, glaring down at Moon Knight as if he was an angry parent scolding a child.
KHONSHU: You will be told what your purpose is, and when to perform it.
Panel 4:
Side view of Khonshu’s face.
KHONSHU: Do not remove the vestments you wear. They are your flesh. Without them, you will die. There’s no question.
Page 19
Panel 1:
Side view. Moon Knight looking up at Khonshu’s enormous form.
MOON KNIGHT: But…
KHONSHU: Silence.
Panel 2:
Back view of Khonshu. Demonic wings made of bone and human flesh start to unravel.
KHONSHU: You are now the perfect avatar….no “human” attachments.
KHONSHU: I’m so glad I invented the “red moon” to make it like this.
KHONSHU: When I return, you’ll know all there’s to know.
Panel 3:
Show Khonshu’s red, glowing eyes.
KHONSHU: For now, enjoy the scenery.
Page 20
BIG IMAGE:
Show from behind Moon Knight. He’s looking up at Khonshu. Khonshu’s disappearing into a thick black fog, as his wings flap.
CAPTION(Moon Knight): And like that….the creature was gone.
Page 21
Panel 1:
Side view. Moon Knight looking over the side of the rooftop (it has a raised brick wall to prevent people from falling over).
CAPTION(Moon Knight): My name is Moon Knight. That’s all I know.
Panel 2:
Close up on Moon Knight’s hands. He’s gripping the brick rather tight. Cracks are forming.
CAPTION(Moon Knight): And then I feel something…
Panel 3:
View from behind Moon Knight. The building is overlooking Jean Paul and Rob’s restaurant, and Marlene is walking out, completely unharmed. As if the entire saga didn’t even happen. She looks like her entire world is looking up.
CAPTION(Moon Knight): A feeling of intense longing….and sadness.
Page 22
Panel 1:
Side view of Moon Knight’s face as he’s looking down and off panel at Marlene.
CAPTION(Moon Knight): Who is she?
Panel 2:
Show Marlene stopping in her path, as if she senses something.
CAPTION(Moon Knight): My insides turn over.
CAPTION(Moon Knight): And I have to disappear.
Panel 3:
View from behind Marlene. She’s looking up at the rooftop and around. There’s no visible trace of Moon Knight.
Page 23
BIG IMAGE:
Moon Knight is sitting up with his hands around his knees, curling himself up behind a brick chimney. Khonshu’s eyes are in the sky, watching. The moon’s light is partially showing on him.
CAPTION(Moon Knight): Who am I, really?
THE END
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(MAKE NO MONEY OFF OF THIS)
(Fear not! There will be a followup to this story that will explain the (intentionally) unclear ending, I decided to leave it a bit ambigous to keep the reader (you, genius) guessing! Fear my mindtrickery! BWWEEEEEEEOOOOOOO~!! ..... Nah but seriously, I hope ya enjoyed it! This was my first attempt at a mindfuckish story.)
