Post by primepower53 on Jul 11, 2011 9:43:54 GMT -5
Page One
Panel One: Show a man in a room full of lighted candles, the man is Asian, shirtless, wearing sweatpants.
Panel Two (Smaller, inner panel): Show the man's eyes.
Cap: My name is Duncan Theron.
Panel Three: Show the man's foot in mid kick, the candle's flames are snuffed out.
Cap: It's an odd name I know.
Panel Four: Show a punch, more candles are snuffed out.
Cap: I was once shipwrecked in the middle of the Pacific Ocean, where I washed ashore on an island unknown to mankind.
Panel Five: A punch
Panel Six: A tornado kick
Cap: They taught me the art of hunting, it was their life. They once spoke of a man...the ultimate hunt....
Panel Seven: A kick, focus on the foot.
Panel Eight: a punch
Panel Nine: A punch
Page Two:
One Page Image: the man stands there, all candles snuffed out, in a martial arts stance
Cap: ....A SPIDER Man.
Inner Panel: Show is eyes (again)
Cap: I was raised in what he called the Savage land.
Page Three:
One Page Image: Spider Man in mid swing across two skyscrapers, make it a heroic pose (It should be nighttime)
Cap: My name is Peter Parker. People call me Spider Man.
Cap: It's been three years since I was bitten by a radioactive spider and gained spider-like powers. I'm a sophomore in High School...
Page Four:[/b
Panel One: Only show the back of Spidey's head. The real focus is what he's staring at. Seven men (between ages thirteen and seventeen) Mugging an old man.
Cap: ....and I've just found trouble.
Panel Two: Spider Man is swinging in, kicking a man ( Age 15) while swinging. He falls into a trash can.
SFX: Crrsh!
Panel Three: Spider Man sticking to a wall.
Spider Man: Well, excuse me, folks, but isn't it past your bedtime?
Panel four: Show three of the six men left.
Man #2: Kill 'im!
Page Five:
Large Image: Show spiderman swinging across multiple bodies, lightly shaded "ghost images" to show how he dodges. Solid image should be behind man #2
Spider Man: Well. Excuse. Me. for. Trying. To Be. An. Upstanding. Citizen!
Panel Two: Man #2 in mid turn
Panel Three: Spider Man takes the man down with a punch to the face.
Panel Four: Two men go at him
Page Six:
Panel One: Spider Man does a split kick, knocking the two men back.
SFX: CraAACK
Panel Two: The remaining three men stare aghast.
Man #5: How'd you do that?
Panel Three: Spider Man does a heroic pose
Spider Man: You haven't heard, I'm Spider Man!
Page Seven:
Panel One: Just show the face of man #7
Man #7: Who?
Panel Two: Spider Man bowing his head in shame.
Spider Man: ugh.
Panel Three: Two men in mid swing, Spidey has a web attached to the roof of the building, he swings his feet up and hits the two men.
Panel Four: Spider Man smashing the last Man's face into a wall.
Cap: typical.
Page Eight:
Panel One: Show a far away image of Spider Man, dwarfed by his AUNT MAY'S house.
Panel Two: Peter Parker going up the stairs to his room (he should be in the background.) Aunt May is in the forefront of this, watching the TV.
Aunt May: Peter, where have you been? I was worried sick!
Peter: Sorry, Aunt May, I was...uhh...at the library, studying, and I, uh, kinda lost track of time.
Panel Three: Peter opens the door to his room. Photos from the DAILY BUGLE and his pictures of Spider Man are all around the room.
Panel Four: Peter flops onto his bed.
SFX: FLOMMP
Panel Five: Peter's face
Peter: ugh, what night.
Page Nine:
Panel One: Show boots zipping up
Panel Two: Show a black leather shirt being put on.
Panel Three: Show A leather half mask being put on.
Page Ten:
A one page image of Duncan Theron, dressed in a black leather uniform, with a sword strapped to his side, and a gun on his back, and escrima sticks on his other side.
Cap: My name is Duncan Theron....
Cap:....The hunt has begun
Page Eleven:
Panel One: Show Punisher's van.
Cap: Hours Later
Cap: Hideout of the Punisher
Panel Two: Show Punisher from shoulders and above, we can see he's shooting a gun.
Punisher: GONNA KILL YOU, YOU SONUVA--"
Panel Two: Just an escrima stick, the background should make it clear it struck something.
SFX: CRAACK!
Panel Two: Show the ruins of the Punisher's van, we have seen the very end of the fight. It has been brutal.
Duncan: Now.....tell me where the Spider Man is....
Panel Three: Punisher is sitting on the floor against a wall. One of Duncan's hands is on his neck, the other holds a gun to his head.
Punisher: ooohhh God.
Page Twelve:
Panel One: show Duncan's determined eyes.
Duncan (shouting): TELL ME!
Panel Two: Punisher's broken, bloody face.
Punisher: I..swear, I don't know!
Panel Three: Duncan's lips
Duncan: You're lyyyYYing.
Punisher: His....he lives in New York....his name is Peter Parker....
Panel Four: Duncan leaving.
Duncan: Gooooood.
Page Thirteen:
Full page splash: the Punisher's wrecked van, Duncan goes to leave.
Cap: My name is Duncan Theron....
Cap:....The hunt has begun.....
Cap: You may call me the Hunter.....
Panel One: Show a man in a room full of lighted candles, the man is Asian, shirtless, wearing sweatpants.
Panel Two (Smaller, inner panel): Show the man's eyes.
Cap: My name is Duncan Theron.
Panel Three: Show the man's foot in mid kick, the candle's flames are snuffed out.
Cap: It's an odd name I know.
Panel Four: Show a punch, more candles are snuffed out.
Cap: I was once shipwrecked in the middle of the Pacific Ocean, where I washed ashore on an island unknown to mankind.
Panel Five: A punch
Panel Six: A tornado kick
Cap: They taught me the art of hunting, it was their life. They once spoke of a man...the ultimate hunt....
Panel Seven: A kick, focus on the foot.
Panel Eight: a punch
Panel Nine: A punch
Page Two:
One Page Image: the man stands there, all candles snuffed out, in a martial arts stance
Cap: ....A SPIDER Man.
Inner Panel: Show is eyes (again)
Cap: I was raised in what he called the Savage land.
Page Three:
One Page Image: Spider Man in mid swing across two skyscrapers, make it a heroic pose (It should be nighttime)
Cap: My name is Peter Parker. People call me Spider Man.
Cap: It's been three years since I was bitten by a radioactive spider and gained spider-like powers. I'm a sophomore in High School...
Page Four:[/b
Panel One: Only show the back of Spidey's head. The real focus is what he's staring at. Seven men (between ages thirteen and seventeen) Mugging an old man.
Cap: ....and I've just found trouble.
Panel Two: Spider Man is swinging in, kicking a man ( Age 15) while swinging. He falls into a trash can.
SFX: Crrsh!
Panel Three: Spider Man sticking to a wall.
Spider Man: Well, excuse me, folks, but isn't it past your bedtime?
Panel four: Show three of the six men left.
Man #2: Kill 'im!
Page Five:
Large Image: Show spiderman swinging across multiple bodies, lightly shaded "ghost images" to show how he dodges. Solid image should be behind man #2
Spider Man: Well. Excuse. Me. for. Trying. To Be. An. Upstanding. Citizen!
Panel Two: Man #2 in mid turn
Panel Three: Spider Man takes the man down with a punch to the face.
Panel Four: Two men go at him
Page Six:
Panel One: Spider Man does a split kick, knocking the two men back.
SFX: CraAACK
Panel Two: The remaining three men stare aghast.
Man #5: How'd you do that?
Panel Three: Spider Man does a heroic pose
Spider Man: You haven't heard, I'm Spider Man!
Page Seven:
Panel One: Just show the face of man #7
Man #7: Who?
Panel Two: Spider Man bowing his head in shame.
Spider Man: ugh.
Panel Three: Two men in mid swing, Spidey has a web attached to the roof of the building, he swings his feet up and hits the two men.
Panel Four: Spider Man smashing the last Man's face into a wall.
Cap: typical.
Page Eight:
Panel One: Show a far away image of Spider Man, dwarfed by his AUNT MAY'S house.
Panel Two: Peter Parker going up the stairs to his room (he should be in the background.) Aunt May is in the forefront of this, watching the TV.
Aunt May: Peter, where have you been? I was worried sick!
Peter: Sorry, Aunt May, I was...uhh...at the library, studying, and I, uh, kinda lost track of time.
Panel Three: Peter opens the door to his room. Photos from the DAILY BUGLE and his pictures of Spider Man are all around the room.
Panel Four: Peter flops onto his bed.
SFX: FLOMMP
Panel Five: Peter's face
Peter: ugh, what night.
Page Nine:
Panel One: Show boots zipping up
Panel Two: Show a black leather shirt being put on.
Panel Three: Show A leather half mask being put on.
Page Ten:
A one page image of Duncan Theron, dressed in a black leather uniform, with a sword strapped to his side, and a gun on his back, and escrima sticks on his other side.
Cap: My name is Duncan Theron....
Cap:....The hunt has begun
Page Eleven:
Panel One: Show Punisher's van.
Cap: Hours Later
Cap: Hideout of the Punisher
Panel Two: Show Punisher from shoulders and above, we can see he's shooting a gun.
Punisher: GONNA KILL YOU, YOU SONUVA--"
Panel Two: Just an escrima stick, the background should make it clear it struck something.
SFX: CRAACK!
Panel Two: Show the ruins of the Punisher's van, we have seen the very end of the fight. It has been brutal.
Duncan: Now.....tell me where the Spider Man is....
Panel Three: Punisher is sitting on the floor against a wall. One of Duncan's hands is on his neck, the other holds a gun to his head.
Punisher: ooohhh God.
Page Twelve:
Panel One: show Duncan's determined eyes.
Duncan (shouting): TELL ME!
Panel Two: Punisher's broken, bloody face.
Punisher: I..swear, I don't know!
Panel Three: Duncan's lips
Duncan: You're lyyyYYing.
Punisher: His....he lives in New York....his name is Peter Parker....
Panel Four: Duncan leaving.
Duncan: Gooooood.
Page Thirteen:
Full page splash: the Punisher's wrecked van, Duncan goes to leave.
Cap: My name is Duncan Theron....
Cap:....The hunt has begun.....
Cap: You may call me the Hunter.....
