Post by InnerVenom123 on Jul 15, 2011 18:39:40 GMT -5
Page 1
Panel 1:
Show Pyre’s eyes opening slowly.
CAPTION(Pyre): He’s more powerful than ever…
Panel 2:
Show a side view of Scream. She’s crouched like an animal, and her hair tendrils are lashing out off panel.
SCREAM: HSSSSSSSSSS!!!!
Panel 3:
Show a front view of Pyre sitting up, and starting to stand.
CAPTION(Pyre): Have to go… find another way to get back…
Page 2
Panel 1:
Show a close up of the base of a streetlight, with a hair tendril lashing around it.
SFX: SHRWK
Panel 2:
Pan back to show Scream, with the hair tendril starting to rip the streetlight out of the street.
SFX: GRRRCKK
SCREAM: OURRR OTHERS!!! SISSTERS! BROTHERSSS!!! DEAD! YOUR FAULT!!
Panel 3:
Show Anti-Venom landed on the ground, looking toward Scream. Scream has the streetlight held up a few feet in the air, more than one tendril is starting to wrap around it. Her hands and feet are on the ground.
ANTI-VENOM: GET OFF OF HER!!!
Panel 4:
Underfoot view of Scream. She’s tossing the entire streetlight off panel (at Anti-Venom).
SCREAM: NNNO!!!
CAPTION(Jenna): What…. What’s going on…..
Panel 5:
Show Anti-Venom looking up and off panel with a glare on his face (at the incoming streetlight).
CAPTION(Scream Symbiote): Shhh…hush….let us focus…
Page 3
Panel 1:
Show Anti-Venom dodging to the left as the end of the streetlight slams into the concrete.
SFX: WHAM
ANTI-VENOM: GRAR!!
ANTI-VENOM: YOU LET HER GO THIS INSTANT!!!
Panel 2:
Show Scream’s face, snarling.
SCREAM: DDDIE FIRRRST!!!
CAPTION(Jenna): Ohnononono….I can’t…
CAPTION(Scream Symbiote): We are in control.
Panel 3:
Pan out to show Scream’s hair tendrils lashing toward the back bumper of a car and ripping it back.
SFX: CRKK
CAPTION(Jenna): G-GET OUT!! GET OUT OF ME!!
Panel 4:
Show Anti-Venom charging forward.
CAPTION(Jenna): GET AWAY FROM ME!!!
ANTI-VENOM: FINE! Then I’LL TEAR YOU OUT!
Panel 5:
Show the hair tendrils dropping he back bumper into Scream’s clawed hands.
CAPTION(Jenna): PLEASE! PLEASE JUST GO!!
Page 4
BIG IMAGE:
Scream smashing the back bumper into Anti-Venom’s head with an uppercut.
SFX: WHACK
SCREAM: NEEVERRR!!
CAPTION(Jenna): Oh God—Eddie!!
Page 5
Panel 1:
Show Anti-Venom sprawled out on the ground, looking over at Scream (who is off panel).
ANTI-VENOM: Fine—you wanna play it THAT way!
Panel 2:
Show from behind Anti-Venom. A swarm of tendrils are lashing out from all over his body, toward Scream.
Panel 3:
Show Scream jumping up and over the multiple tendrils.
SCREAM: HSSSSS!!!!
CAPTION(Scream Symbiote): We see your thoughts… you know his tricks….
CAPTION(Jenna): GET OUT OF MY @#%#ING HEAD!!!
Panel 4:
Show Anti-Venom standing up and rushing toward us (off panel Scream), his fingers are also forming tendrils, he’s fully flared up.
ANTI-VENOM: DAMN YOU!!
Page 6
Panel 1:
Show Scream crouching on a parked car on the melted street, her hair is ripping out in all directions toward the multiple buildings around the pair.
SFX: SHWIK
SCREAM: Ccccome on, Eeeeddddieee!
Panel 2:
Show a side view. Anti-Venom’s tendrils are lashing out toward Scream. Scream is crouched on the car, and all her hair tendrils are now ripping parts of buildings around them off.
SFX: CRRKK
SFX: RRRKK
SFX: BRRKKTT
Panel 3:
View from behind Anti-Venom. DOZENS of different items of debris are being flung at him by Scream’s hair tendrils.
ANTI-VENOM: GRAWGH!!
Page 7
BIG IMAGE:
Anti-Venom getting pelted with the horde of debris. The varying bits of brick and structure are so varied we can’t see anything except him.
ANTI-VENOM: GRRR—JENNA!?
Page 8
Panel 1:
Show Anti-Venom pushing aside various bits of junk, looking toward off panel.
ANTI-VENOM: DAMMIT!!
Panel 2:
Show that Anti-Venom is alone on the street.
Panel 3:
Show Anti-Venom looking toward off panel with widened eyes.
SFX: BWEEEOOOEEEWWWOOOO
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): The police! They’ll think this was my fault!
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): ARRGHH!!! Have to get out!
Page 9
Panel 1:
Show Pyre’s body cooling down as he walks into an alley.
PYRE: More powerful…
Panel 2:
Side view of Pyre walking into a darker part of the alley.
PYRE: Can’t beat him….
Panel 3:
Same view of where Pyre was, but Pyre is more off panel now. But there’s a red goo on the wall, forming a twisted, almost Venom-like smile.
Panel 4:
Show Pyre on his knees, his head down. He’s at his lowest temperature, still a not-healthy glowing red.
PYRE: Wandered the damn country till I heard about him…. All worthless… too strong…
Panel 5:
Show Pyre looking back.
OFF PANEL VOICE: Oh, Pyre….rambling to yourself again….
Page 10
BIG IMAGE:
Show a red, Venom-like creature halfway formed with a semi-solid body. There are multiple Venom-faces making up the body, and outstretching a helping hand/tendril.
CREEP: I’ve heard your MADNESS… and it’s perfect….
CREEP: Let me help you… KILL EDDIE BROCK….
-- NEXT SEGMENT --
Page 11 and 12:
DOUBLE SPLASH PAGE:
Toxin tackling Iron Vengeance outside near the front entrance of the NYPD. They’re smashing through a front wall.
SFX: BRKSHTT
TOXIN: GRAWR!!!
Page 13
Panel 1:
Show Iron Vengeance’s left hand wrap around Toxin’s throat and start to glow.
SFX: BRRZZZZ
Panel 2:
Show Toxin flying back from a standing Iron Vengeance, as five orange whips slam him back.
SFX: BZZZRRATTT
TOXIN: GRARGH!!
Panel 3:
Show Iron Vengeance holding his right gauntlet arm up, it’s starting to open.
IRON VENGEANCE: Hurts, doesn’t it?
Panel 4:
Show the inside of the gauntlet start to light up blue.
SFX: BRRRREEEE
IRON VENGEANCE: A sonic discharge in each lash of electricity and HEAT—MY DESIGN.
Page 14
Panel 1:
Back view of Toxin getting up, as Iron Vengeance holds his right gauntlet arm up, forming a large blue whip in the air.
SFX: BBZZZZZ
CAPTION(Patrick): Now that he’s out of the office, out of the way of the civvies for the most part, we just have to knock him out, rip that suit off and--
Panel 2:
Same view. Now Toxin is jumping out of the way as the blue whip slams down where he was.
SFX: BRRZZZARRRMM
CAPTION(Patrick): --PRAY he doesn’t hit us with that thing!
Panel 3:
Show Iron Vengeance’s left hand start to glow again.
Page 15
Panel 1:
Show Iron Vengeance lashing out his left hand, the five orange whips following.
SFX: WRRRZZZ
IRON VENGEANCE: NO WONDER father had trouble with you!
Panel 2:
Show Toxin’s tendril arm, as three orange whips lash through it.
SFX: BRRRZZZZAATT
TOXIN: AGH!!!
CAPTION(Patrick): The shock courses through the symbiote and straight into the stump.
Panel 3:
Show Toxin standing in pain a few feet behind the whips that are now touching the ground. The tendril arm is reforming.
CAPTION(Patrick): Like losing my arm all over again….
IRON VENGEANCE: Interesting.
Panel 4:
Show Iron Vengeance’s faceplate.
IRON VENGEANCE: No solid body structure? What have you BECOME, exactly?
Page 16
Panel 1:
Show Toxin’s tendril arm reformed and making a fist.
Panel 2:
Show Toxin’s face, snarling.
TOXIN: A superhero.
Panel 3:
Show Toxin holding both arms out and sending a bunch of webbing off panel (at Iron Vengeance).
SFX: PLISH
SFX: PLISH
TOXIN: Duh.
CAPTION(Patrick): Just do what Spider-man would do, keep a calm head, nail this freak—get my friends help--
CAPTION(Toxin Symbiote): And then we can fully reconcile.
Panel 4:
Show Iron Vengeance holding up his left hand with an open palm, and forming an orange shield from the palm. The webbing hits the shield and not him.
IRON VENGEANCE: That’s not going to work, Toxin.
Page 17
Panel 1:
Show Iron Vengeance swiping his right arm across, and the large blue whip forming and following, as he holds his left hand back.
IRON VENGEANCE: Now, THIS on the other hand!
Panel 2:
Show Toxin being smashed in the side by the blue whip. It’s visibly burning him and he’s in agony.
SFX: BRRRRZZZZZ
TOXIN: GYAGGH!!!!
Panel 3:
Show Iron Vengeance using his left hand to press a button on his faceplate’s side, as if a comm link on his ear.
IRON VENGEANCE: Activate codename: Grief. Vengeance. Hatred.
Panel 4:
Same view, except now its just Iron Vengeance’s faceplate/helmet.
IRON VENGEANCE: Killing you would be too easy.
IRON VENGEANCE: I’m going to take your family first. As you did my father.
Page 18
Panel 1:
Show Iron Vengeance flying off into the skyline with jetboots as expected. But coming down from the sky are suits that resemble Iron Wrath’s original suit (aka Iron Monger), but each modified a different way. One suit is exactly like the Iron Wrath suit (plasma canon for one arm, chainsaw for another): Grief – another is the upperbody of the Iron Wrath suit, flying by a hover device attached to the waist, and with mini-guns for arms: Vengeance – and the last is an Iron Wrath suit that’s a lot more slim than the original, and has regular fists and arms: Hatred. All of these suits have black camo and red glowing faceplate eyes.
IRON VENGEANCE: Iron Wraiths, delay him by any means necessary.
CAPTION: GRIEF
CAPTION: VENGEANCE
CAPTION: HATRED
(The captions appear under each Iron Wraith as they appear in order)
Panel 2:
Show Toxin getting up from the blow to his side (which is still healing), as Grief lands in front of him.
TOXIN: Have to stop him…
Panel 3:
Side view. Toxin watches as Hatred lands behind Grief and Vengeance hovers above the scene.
TOXIN: For Gina…. Edward….
Page 19
Panel 1:
Show Grief charge at Toxin with the chainsaw.
GRIEF: DISTRACT ENEMY UNIT!!!
TOXIN: WE--
Panel 2:
Show Grief’s chainsaw arm being held up by Toxin’s tendril arm, which is merging around it.
GRIEF: ENEMY UNIT—NOT--
TOXIN: -- WILL NOT --
Panel 3:
Show Grief’s entire chainsaw arm crushed into scrap metal by Toxin’s tendril arm.
SFX: BRAKSHT
GRIEF: 011001010110100
TOXIN: -- FAIL!!!
Page 20
SPLASH PAGE:
Toxin shoving his solid non-tendril arm through the chestplate of Grief.
SFX: BRSHKT
GRIEF: UNIT MALFUNCTION!!! 101010101101010101!!!!!!
TOXIN: ARGGGH!!
--
(MAKE NO MONEY OFF OF THIS - SOME CHARACTERS I MADE UP (IRON VENGEANCE AND THE IRON WRAITHS)
Panel 1:
Show Pyre’s eyes opening slowly.
CAPTION(Pyre): He’s more powerful than ever…
Panel 2:
Show a side view of Scream. She’s crouched like an animal, and her hair tendrils are lashing out off panel.
SCREAM: HSSSSSSSSSS!!!!
Panel 3:
Show a front view of Pyre sitting up, and starting to stand.
CAPTION(Pyre): Have to go… find another way to get back…
Page 2
Panel 1:
Show a close up of the base of a streetlight, with a hair tendril lashing around it.
SFX: SHRWK
Panel 2:
Pan back to show Scream, with the hair tendril starting to rip the streetlight out of the street.
SFX: GRRRCKK
SCREAM: OURRR OTHERS!!! SISSTERS! BROTHERSSS!!! DEAD! YOUR FAULT!!
Panel 3:
Show Anti-Venom landed on the ground, looking toward Scream. Scream has the streetlight held up a few feet in the air, more than one tendril is starting to wrap around it. Her hands and feet are on the ground.
ANTI-VENOM: GET OFF OF HER!!!
Panel 4:
Underfoot view of Scream. She’s tossing the entire streetlight off panel (at Anti-Venom).
SCREAM: NNNO!!!
CAPTION(Jenna): What…. What’s going on…..
Panel 5:
Show Anti-Venom looking up and off panel with a glare on his face (at the incoming streetlight).
CAPTION(Scream Symbiote): Shhh…hush….let us focus…
Page 3
Panel 1:
Show Anti-Venom dodging to the left as the end of the streetlight slams into the concrete.
SFX: WHAM
ANTI-VENOM: GRAR!!
ANTI-VENOM: YOU LET HER GO THIS INSTANT!!!
Panel 2:
Show Scream’s face, snarling.
SCREAM: DDDIE FIRRRST!!!
CAPTION(Jenna): Ohnononono….I can’t…
CAPTION(Scream Symbiote): We are in control.
Panel 3:
Pan out to show Scream’s hair tendrils lashing toward the back bumper of a car and ripping it back.
SFX: CRKK
CAPTION(Jenna): G-GET OUT!! GET OUT OF ME!!
Panel 4:
Show Anti-Venom charging forward.
CAPTION(Jenna): GET AWAY FROM ME!!!
ANTI-VENOM: FINE! Then I’LL TEAR YOU OUT!
Panel 5:
Show the hair tendrils dropping he back bumper into Scream’s clawed hands.
CAPTION(Jenna): PLEASE! PLEASE JUST GO!!
Page 4
BIG IMAGE:
Scream smashing the back bumper into Anti-Venom’s head with an uppercut.
SFX: WHACK
SCREAM: NEEVERRR!!
CAPTION(Jenna): Oh God—Eddie!!
Page 5
Panel 1:
Show Anti-Venom sprawled out on the ground, looking over at Scream (who is off panel).
ANTI-VENOM: Fine—you wanna play it THAT way!
Panel 2:
Show from behind Anti-Venom. A swarm of tendrils are lashing out from all over his body, toward Scream.
Panel 3:
Show Scream jumping up and over the multiple tendrils.
SCREAM: HSSSSS!!!!
CAPTION(Scream Symbiote): We see your thoughts… you know his tricks….
CAPTION(Jenna): GET OUT OF MY @#%#ING HEAD!!!
Panel 4:
Show Anti-Venom standing up and rushing toward us (off panel Scream), his fingers are also forming tendrils, he’s fully flared up.
ANTI-VENOM: DAMN YOU!!
Page 6
Panel 1:
Show Scream crouching on a parked car on the melted street, her hair is ripping out in all directions toward the multiple buildings around the pair.
SFX: SHWIK
SCREAM: Ccccome on, Eeeeddddieee!
Panel 2:
Show a side view. Anti-Venom’s tendrils are lashing out toward Scream. Scream is crouched on the car, and all her hair tendrils are now ripping parts of buildings around them off.
SFX: CRRKK
SFX: RRRKK
SFX: BRRKKTT
Panel 3:
View from behind Anti-Venom. DOZENS of different items of debris are being flung at him by Scream’s hair tendrils.
ANTI-VENOM: GRAWGH!!
Page 7
BIG IMAGE:
Anti-Venom getting pelted with the horde of debris. The varying bits of brick and structure are so varied we can’t see anything except him.
ANTI-VENOM: GRRR—JENNA!?
Page 8
Panel 1:
Show Anti-Venom pushing aside various bits of junk, looking toward off panel.
ANTI-VENOM: DAMMIT!!
Panel 2:
Show that Anti-Venom is alone on the street.
Panel 3:
Show Anti-Venom looking toward off panel with widened eyes.
SFX: BWEEEOOOEEEWWWOOOO
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): The police! They’ll think this was my fault!
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): ARRGHH!!! Have to get out!
Page 9
Panel 1:
Show Pyre’s body cooling down as he walks into an alley.
PYRE: More powerful…
Panel 2:
Side view of Pyre walking into a darker part of the alley.
PYRE: Can’t beat him….
Panel 3:
Same view of where Pyre was, but Pyre is more off panel now. But there’s a red goo on the wall, forming a twisted, almost Venom-like smile.
Panel 4:
Show Pyre on his knees, his head down. He’s at his lowest temperature, still a not-healthy glowing red.
PYRE: Wandered the damn country till I heard about him…. All worthless… too strong…
Panel 5:
Show Pyre looking back.
OFF PANEL VOICE: Oh, Pyre….rambling to yourself again….
Page 10
BIG IMAGE:
Show a red, Venom-like creature halfway formed with a semi-solid body. There are multiple Venom-faces making up the body, and outstretching a helping hand/tendril.
CREEP: I’ve heard your MADNESS… and it’s perfect….
CREEP: Let me help you… KILL EDDIE BROCK….
-- NEXT SEGMENT --
Page 11 and 12:
DOUBLE SPLASH PAGE:
Toxin tackling Iron Vengeance outside near the front entrance of the NYPD. They’re smashing through a front wall.
SFX: BRKSHTT
TOXIN: GRAWR!!!
Page 13
Panel 1:
Show Iron Vengeance’s left hand wrap around Toxin’s throat and start to glow.
SFX: BRRZZZZ
Panel 2:
Show Toxin flying back from a standing Iron Vengeance, as five orange whips slam him back.
SFX: BZZZRRATTT
TOXIN: GRARGH!!
Panel 3:
Show Iron Vengeance holding his right gauntlet arm up, it’s starting to open.
IRON VENGEANCE: Hurts, doesn’t it?
Panel 4:
Show the inside of the gauntlet start to light up blue.
SFX: BRRRREEEE
IRON VENGEANCE: A sonic discharge in each lash of electricity and HEAT—MY DESIGN.
Page 14
Panel 1:
Back view of Toxin getting up, as Iron Vengeance holds his right gauntlet arm up, forming a large blue whip in the air.
SFX: BBZZZZZ
CAPTION(Patrick): Now that he’s out of the office, out of the way of the civvies for the most part, we just have to knock him out, rip that suit off and--
Panel 2:
Same view. Now Toxin is jumping out of the way as the blue whip slams down where he was.
SFX: BRRZZZARRRMM
CAPTION(Patrick): --PRAY he doesn’t hit us with that thing!
Panel 3:
Show Iron Vengeance’s left hand start to glow again.
Page 15
Panel 1:
Show Iron Vengeance lashing out his left hand, the five orange whips following.
SFX: WRRRZZZ
IRON VENGEANCE: NO WONDER father had trouble with you!
Panel 2:
Show Toxin’s tendril arm, as three orange whips lash through it.
SFX: BRRRZZZZAATT
TOXIN: AGH!!!
CAPTION(Patrick): The shock courses through the symbiote and straight into the stump.
Panel 3:
Show Toxin standing in pain a few feet behind the whips that are now touching the ground. The tendril arm is reforming.
CAPTION(Patrick): Like losing my arm all over again….
IRON VENGEANCE: Interesting.
Panel 4:
Show Iron Vengeance’s faceplate.
IRON VENGEANCE: No solid body structure? What have you BECOME, exactly?
Page 16
Panel 1:
Show Toxin’s tendril arm reformed and making a fist.
Panel 2:
Show Toxin’s face, snarling.
TOXIN: A superhero.
Panel 3:
Show Toxin holding both arms out and sending a bunch of webbing off panel (at Iron Vengeance).
SFX: PLISH
SFX: PLISH
TOXIN: Duh.
CAPTION(Patrick): Just do what Spider-man would do, keep a calm head, nail this freak—get my friends help--
CAPTION(Toxin Symbiote): And then we can fully reconcile.
Panel 4:
Show Iron Vengeance holding up his left hand with an open palm, and forming an orange shield from the palm. The webbing hits the shield and not him.
IRON VENGEANCE: That’s not going to work, Toxin.
Page 17
Panel 1:
Show Iron Vengeance swiping his right arm across, and the large blue whip forming and following, as he holds his left hand back.
IRON VENGEANCE: Now, THIS on the other hand!
Panel 2:
Show Toxin being smashed in the side by the blue whip. It’s visibly burning him and he’s in agony.
SFX: BRRRRZZZZZ
TOXIN: GYAGGH!!!!
Panel 3:
Show Iron Vengeance using his left hand to press a button on his faceplate’s side, as if a comm link on his ear.
IRON VENGEANCE: Activate codename: Grief. Vengeance. Hatred.
Panel 4:
Same view, except now its just Iron Vengeance’s faceplate/helmet.
IRON VENGEANCE: Killing you would be too easy.
IRON VENGEANCE: I’m going to take your family first. As you did my father.
Page 18
Panel 1:
Show Iron Vengeance flying off into the skyline with jetboots as expected. But coming down from the sky are suits that resemble Iron Wrath’s original suit (aka Iron Monger), but each modified a different way. One suit is exactly like the Iron Wrath suit (plasma canon for one arm, chainsaw for another): Grief – another is the upperbody of the Iron Wrath suit, flying by a hover device attached to the waist, and with mini-guns for arms: Vengeance – and the last is an Iron Wrath suit that’s a lot more slim than the original, and has regular fists and arms: Hatred. All of these suits have black camo and red glowing faceplate eyes.
IRON VENGEANCE: Iron Wraiths, delay him by any means necessary.
CAPTION: GRIEF
CAPTION: VENGEANCE
CAPTION: HATRED
(The captions appear under each Iron Wraith as they appear in order)
Panel 2:
Show Toxin getting up from the blow to his side (which is still healing), as Grief lands in front of him.
TOXIN: Have to stop him…
Panel 3:
Side view. Toxin watches as Hatred lands behind Grief and Vengeance hovers above the scene.
TOXIN: For Gina…. Edward….
Page 19
Panel 1:
Show Grief charge at Toxin with the chainsaw.
GRIEF: DISTRACT ENEMY UNIT!!!
TOXIN: WE--
Panel 2:
Show Grief’s chainsaw arm being held up by Toxin’s tendril arm, which is merging around it.
GRIEF: ENEMY UNIT—NOT--
TOXIN: -- WILL NOT --
Panel 3:
Show Grief’s entire chainsaw arm crushed into scrap metal by Toxin’s tendril arm.
SFX: BRAKSHT
GRIEF: 011001010110100
TOXIN: -- FAIL!!!
Page 20
SPLASH PAGE:
Toxin shoving his solid non-tendril arm through the chestplate of Grief.
SFX: BRSHKT
GRIEF: UNIT MALFUNCTION!!! 101010101101010101!!!!!!
TOXIN: ARGGGH!!
--
(MAKE NO MONEY OFF OF THIS - SOME CHARACTERS I MADE UP (IRON VENGEANCE AND THE IRON WRAITHS)
