Post by InnerVenom123 on Jul 16, 2011 17:30:02 GMT -5
Page 1
SPLASH PAGE:
Creep is slithering/walking toward Pyre, a red being comprised of multiple heads and multiple limbs, all with Venom-like features.
CREEP: Venom affected me….altered my being….
PYRE: T-that so?
Page 2
Panel 1:
View of Creep’s head/faces.
CREEP: You would be….so much better with me….
Panel 2:
Show Pyre’s face, his eyes are squinting.
PYRE: In my experience, goopish monsters hate fire.
Panel 3:
Side view. Creep is lashing out bits of himself (almost tendrils, but lumpy and disturbing, like tongues) at Pyre’s arms.
CREEP: Symbiotes… and don’t worry, I’m not a symbiote. I used to be called the Mercury Virus… and then Venom NAMED me…
Panel 4:
Show Pyre looking at his arm. His arm is bulking him and growing claws, and his glowing body/heat is having no effect.
PYRE: Whoa…
CREEP: He called me “Creep”.
Page 3
Panel 1:
Show Scream crawling up a building, her hair randomly impaling spots in the building’s structure.
CAPTION(Jenna): Please… please let me go…
Panel 2:
Show Scream jumping from that particular point on the building toward a higher ledge.
SCREAM: NNNOO!!!
CAPTION(Jenna): Wh-why?
SCREAM: Youuu’reeee perrrfect.
Panel 3:
Show Scream crouched on the ledge.
CAPTION(Jenna): How?
Page 4
Panel 1:
Side view of Scream’s face. Show Jenna’s eyes inside of Scream’s.
SCREAM: Heee prrrotects youuu….
CAPTION(Jenna): You ran away—yo-you’re scared of him!
Panel 2:
Front view of Scream. Through Scream’s eyes, we see Jenna’s eyes.
CAPTION(Jenna): That’s why! You’re just keeping me as a shield until you can think of something to kill him!
Panel 3:
Show Scream’s clawed fingers gripping onto the ledge, ripping through the structure with irritation.
SCREAM: Yyess…
Page 5
Panel 1:
Show Scream arching her head back, and give an inside view of Jenna’s face, shouting in pain, while the Scream-symbiote exterior is in glee.
CAPTION(Scream Symbiote): We can speak clearly inside your mind. Let’s see those thoughts.
CAPTION(Jenna): N-NO!!!
Panel 2:
Show a view of a younger Jenna getting punched in the face by a man.
CAPTION(Jenna): GET OUT!!! I DON’T WANT TO REMEMBER!!
CAPTION(Scream Symbiote): Oooo…
Panel 3:
Show Scream slamming her face into the ledge.
SCREAM: GRRRRRRRRRR--
CAPTION(Jenna): GET OUT! GET OUT OF THERE RIGHT NOW!!!
CAPTION(Scream Symbiote): Who knew?
Panel 4:
Show Scream snarling into open air.
CAPTION(Scream Symbiote): Daddy liked to hit you?
CAPTION(Jenna): DON’T YOU EVEN TALK ABOUT HIM--
Page 6
Panel 1:
Show Anti-Venom webslinging, weaving through a few buildings.
ANTI-VENOM: JENNA!!!
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): I’ve been looking for hours!
Panel 2:
Show a view from over Anti-Venom’s shoulder, looking down at the street below.
ANTI-VENOM: JENNA!!!
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): I don’t care who sees me.
Panel 3:
Show Anti-Venom landing in a crowd of people, cupping his hand over his mouth with a worried look on his face.
ANTI-VENOM: JENNA!!!
Page 7
Panel 1:
Show an alley corner.
ANTI-VENOM(From off panel): JENNA!!!
Panel 2:
Show a set of yellow eyes, shaped like Venom-ish eyes, peering out from the alley.
ANTI-VENOM(From off panel): WHERE DID YOU GO!?!
Panel 3:
Show a close up of a red colored Venom-ish mouth, and a disgusting black tongue slithering out, dripping green slime.
Page 8
Panel 1:
Show underfoot from Anti-Venom. He’s standing in front of the building that, on the very top, Scream rests. (We can’t see Scream here).
ANTI-VENOM: Dammit…
Panel 2:
Show overhead of Scream. She’s looking down at the place where Anti-Venom is. (Can’t see Anti here). Scream is holding her head with her hands.
SCREAM: PPPPLEEEASSEEE….
CAPTION(Jenna): Let me go. Please.
Panel 3:
Show Jenna’s face shoved into a wall by a man’s hand.
CAPTION(Jenna): I don’t want to remember… please….
Page 9
SPLASH PAGE:
A large, dark red creature steps out from behind Anti-Venom. It has several heads, forming on its shoulders, all looking like red Venoms, and a large black tongue with green slime. It has regular Venom-ish features aside from being red, and a set of arms jutting out from its sides, which have sharper claws than the main arms. Anti-Venom doesn’t see it coming.
CREEP: Looking for someone?
Page 10
Panel 1:
Show Anti-Venom turning around to see the creature.
ANTI-VENOM: What the!?
CREEP: Found us anyway.
Panel 2:
Show Anti-Venom getting a large, red fist slammed into his forehead.
SFX: WHAM
CREEP: REMEMBER USS? We’re CREEP!
Panel 3:
Side view. Anti-Venom is flying back from Creep’s punch.
CREEP: HAHAHA!!!
ANTI-VENOM: NGH!!
-- NEXT SEGMENT -
Page 11
SPLASH PAGE:
Toxin is ripping Grief (the Iron Wraith that looks exactly like the first Iron Wrath’s armor) clean in half, snarling with a vicious expression.
SFX: CHHRRRRRAAAAKKK
CAPTION(Patrick): That lunatic is headed for my family.
Page 12
Panel 1:
Show Toxin chucking the torn apart Iron Wraith – which is just a robot, and has no pilot – at the floating half Iron Wraith with mini-guns for arms, Vengeance. Vengeance is shooting at the debris as its thrown at it.
SFX: BUDDA BUDDA BUDDA
Panel 2:
Show the remains of Grief smash into Vengeance.
SFX: WHAM
Panel 3:
Show Vengeance and Grief slam into the ground with brutal force, bursting into bits.
SFX: CHRKK
SFX: WHAM
CAPTION(Toxin): He didn’t design these to kill us, just to delay us…
Page 13
Panel 1:
Show Hatred. It’s a slim version of the first Iron Wrath armor, but with regular arms and legs (clawed hands, slim body).
HATRED: Destination: Five minutes.
Panel 2:
Side view. Toxin running at Hatred with his fist up.
TOXIN: HE WON’T MAKE IT THERE!
Panel 3:
Show Hatred’s metal hand grabbing onto Toxin’s fist and restraining it.
HATRED: Negative.
Panel 4:
Show Hatred slamming Toxin down into the concrete.
SFX: BRUSHKT
TOXIN: AGH!!
Page 14
Panel 1:
Show an overview of Toxin, aiming his hand up and clenching his fist, webbing off panel (Hatred).
SFX: PLISH
CAPTION(Patrick): This one’s tough.
Panel 2:
Show Hatred’s upperbody, covered in blue webbing.
SFX: PLISH
Panel 3:
Show Hatred kicking Toxin away, Toxin soaring in the air.
SFX: PUNT
TOXIN: RAWR!!
Panel 4:
Show Toxin smash into the front of a parked police car.
SFX: BSHHKT
TOXIN: Ugh…
Page 15
Panel 1:
Front view of Toxin standing up.
CAPTION(Patrick): Letting my family’s danger get in the way of the fight. Worried too much.
Panel 2:
Side view of Toxin’s mouth. Curling up into a snarl.
CAPTION(Toxin): Let the worry go… bring on THE HATE.
Panel 3:
Front view of Toxin. He’s bulked up to his Venom-ish body frame.
TOXIN: ROUND TWO!
Panel 4:
Show Hatred’s helmet/face.
HATRED: Invalid request.
Page 16
Panel 1:
Side view. Toxin rushing toward Hatred.
Panel 2:
Side view. Toxin slamming his fists down onto Hatred.
SFX: WHAM
SFX: BOOSHKT
TOXIN: GRAWWRR!!
Panel 3:
Close up of Hatred. Hatred is under Toxin’s fist and bursting into pieces.
HATRED: 111010101010101010101010010101110010
Page 17
Panel 1:
Show Toxin webbing down on Hatred’s wreckage. His form is back to his Carnage-like form.
SFX: PLISH PLISH
CAPTION(Patrick): Now I have less than five minutes.
Panel 2:
Show Toxin webbing up Grief and Vengeance’s remains.
SFX: PLISH PLISH
Panel 3:
Show Toxin’s face. It’s not Carnage-like anymore, he’s in his regular state without the mouth, with a worried expression.
CAPTION(Patrick): I swear, if he’s done anything…
Page 18
SPLASH PAGE:
Show Toxin webslinging around a couple buildings.
SFX: PLISH
CAPTION(Toxin): We’ll take care of him.
Page 19
Panel 1:
Show from behind Toxin. Toxin is webslinging and sees his apartment. There’s fire coming out of the building.
CAPTION(Patrick): NO!!
Panel 2:
Show Toxin’s face. He’s got the Carnage-y look again, mouth included.
TOXIN: NO!!
Panel 3:
Show Toxin landing onto a wall and clinging. He’s looking at a window where there’s a bright orange light inside.
TOXIN: OUR APARTMENT--
Page 20
Panel 1:
Show the inside of Patrick’s apartment. Toxin is busting through the window.
SFX: BSSHKT
Panel 2:
Side view. Show Toxin standing up and looking around, calling out.
TOXIN: GINA!!!!
Panel 3:
Show Toxin’s eyes, and Patrick’s eyes behind.
GINA: PAT!!!
TOXIN: N-no…
Panel 4:
Show Iron Vengeance with Gina in his left hand by the throat, and she’s holding the baby close. There’s a roaring fire starting from the kitchen and bedroom.
IRON VENGEANCE: What a lovely reunion.
--
(DON'T MAKE ANY MONEY OFF OF THIS - SOME CHARACTERS I MADE UP (IRON VENGEANCE AND THE IRON WRAITHS)
SPLASH PAGE:
Creep is slithering/walking toward Pyre, a red being comprised of multiple heads and multiple limbs, all with Venom-like features.
CREEP: Venom affected me….altered my being….
PYRE: T-that so?
Page 2
Panel 1:
View of Creep’s head/faces.
CREEP: You would be….so much better with me….
Panel 2:
Show Pyre’s face, his eyes are squinting.
PYRE: In my experience, goopish monsters hate fire.
Panel 3:
Side view. Creep is lashing out bits of himself (almost tendrils, but lumpy and disturbing, like tongues) at Pyre’s arms.
CREEP: Symbiotes… and don’t worry, I’m not a symbiote. I used to be called the Mercury Virus… and then Venom NAMED me…
Panel 4:
Show Pyre looking at his arm. His arm is bulking him and growing claws, and his glowing body/heat is having no effect.
PYRE: Whoa…
CREEP: He called me “Creep”.
Page 3
Panel 1:
Show Scream crawling up a building, her hair randomly impaling spots in the building’s structure.
CAPTION(Jenna): Please… please let me go…
Panel 2:
Show Scream jumping from that particular point on the building toward a higher ledge.
SCREAM: NNNOO!!!
CAPTION(Jenna): Wh-why?
SCREAM: Youuu’reeee perrrfect.
Panel 3:
Show Scream crouched on the ledge.
CAPTION(Jenna): How?
Page 4
Panel 1:
Side view of Scream’s face. Show Jenna’s eyes inside of Scream’s.
SCREAM: Heee prrrotects youuu….
CAPTION(Jenna): You ran away—yo-you’re scared of him!
Panel 2:
Front view of Scream. Through Scream’s eyes, we see Jenna’s eyes.
CAPTION(Jenna): That’s why! You’re just keeping me as a shield until you can think of something to kill him!
Panel 3:
Show Scream’s clawed fingers gripping onto the ledge, ripping through the structure with irritation.
SCREAM: Yyess…
Page 5
Panel 1:
Show Scream arching her head back, and give an inside view of Jenna’s face, shouting in pain, while the Scream-symbiote exterior is in glee.
CAPTION(Scream Symbiote): We can speak clearly inside your mind. Let’s see those thoughts.
CAPTION(Jenna): N-NO!!!
Panel 2:
Show a view of a younger Jenna getting punched in the face by a man.
CAPTION(Jenna): GET OUT!!! I DON’T WANT TO REMEMBER!!
CAPTION(Scream Symbiote): Oooo…
Panel 3:
Show Scream slamming her face into the ledge.
SCREAM: GRRRRRRRRRR--
CAPTION(Jenna): GET OUT! GET OUT OF THERE RIGHT NOW!!!
CAPTION(Scream Symbiote): Who knew?
Panel 4:
Show Scream snarling into open air.
CAPTION(Scream Symbiote): Daddy liked to hit you?
CAPTION(Jenna): DON’T YOU EVEN TALK ABOUT HIM--
Page 6
Panel 1:
Show Anti-Venom webslinging, weaving through a few buildings.
ANTI-VENOM: JENNA!!!
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): I’ve been looking for hours!
Panel 2:
Show a view from over Anti-Venom’s shoulder, looking down at the street below.
ANTI-VENOM: JENNA!!!
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): I don’t care who sees me.
Panel 3:
Show Anti-Venom landing in a crowd of people, cupping his hand over his mouth with a worried look on his face.
ANTI-VENOM: JENNA!!!
Page 7
Panel 1:
Show an alley corner.
ANTI-VENOM(From off panel): JENNA!!!
Panel 2:
Show a set of yellow eyes, shaped like Venom-ish eyes, peering out from the alley.
ANTI-VENOM(From off panel): WHERE DID YOU GO!?!
Panel 3:
Show a close up of a red colored Venom-ish mouth, and a disgusting black tongue slithering out, dripping green slime.
Page 8
Panel 1:
Show underfoot from Anti-Venom. He’s standing in front of the building that, on the very top, Scream rests. (We can’t see Scream here).
ANTI-VENOM: Dammit…
Panel 2:
Show overhead of Scream. She’s looking down at the place where Anti-Venom is. (Can’t see Anti here). Scream is holding her head with her hands.
SCREAM: PPPPLEEEASSEEE….
CAPTION(Jenna): Let me go. Please.
Panel 3:
Show Jenna’s face shoved into a wall by a man’s hand.
CAPTION(Jenna): I don’t want to remember… please….
Page 9
SPLASH PAGE:
A large, dark red creature steps out from behind Anti-Venom. It has several heads, forming on its shoulders, all looking like red Venoms, and a large black tongue with green slime. It has regular Venom-ish features aside from being red, and a set of arms jutting out from its sides, which have sharper claws than the main arms. Anti-Venom doesn’t see it coming.
CREEP: Looking for someone?
Page 10
Panel 1:
Show Anti-Venom turning around to see the creature.
ANTI-VENOM: What the!?
CREEP: Found us anyway.
Panel 2:
Show Anti-Venom getting a large, red fist slammed into his forehead.
SFX: WHAM
CREEP: REMEMBER USS? We’re CREEP!
Panel 3:
Side view. Anti-Venom is flying back from Creep’s punch.
CREEP: HAHAHA!!!
ANTI-VENOM: NGH!!
-- NEXT SEGMENT -
Page 11
SPLASH PAGE:
Toxin is ripping Grief (the Iron Wraith that looks exactly like the first Iron Wrath’s armor) clean in half, snarling with a vicious expression.
SFX: CHHRRRRRAAAAKKK
CAPTION(Patrick): That lunatic is headed for my family.
Page 12
Panel 1:
Show Toxin chucking the torn apart Iron Wraith – which is just a robot, and has no pilot – at the floating half Iron Wraith with mini-guns for arms, Vengeance. Vengeance is shooting at the debris as its thrown at it.
SFX: BUDDA BUDDA BUDDA
Panel 2:
Show the remains of Grief smash into Vengeance.
SFX: WHAM
Panel 3:
Show Vengeance and Grief slam into the ground with brutal force, bursting into bits.
SFX: CHRKK
SFX: WHAM
CAPTION(Toxin): He didn’t design these to kill us, just to delay us…
Page 13
Panel 1:
Show Hatred. It’s a slim version of the first Iron Wrath armor, but with regular arms and legs (clawed hands, slim body).
HATRED: Destination: Five minutes.
Panel 2:
Side view. Toxin running at Hatred with his fist up.
TOXIN: HE WON’T MAKE IT THERE!
Panel 3:
Show Hatred’s metal hand grabbing onto Toxin’s fist and restraining it.
HATRED: Negative.
Panel 4:
Show Hatred slamming Toxin down into the concrete.
SFX: BRUSHKT
TOXIN: AGH!!
Page 14
Panel 1:
Show an overview of Toxin, aiming his hand up and clenching his fist, webbing off panel (Hatred).
SFX: PLISH
CAPTION(Patrick): This one’s tough.
Panel 2:
Show Hatred’s upperbody, covered in blue webbing.
SFX: PLISH
Panel 3:
Show Hatred kicking Toxin away, Toxin soaring in the air.
SFX: PUNT
TOXIN: RAWR!!
Panel 4:
Show Toxin smash into the front of a parked police car.
SFX: BSHHKT
TOXIN: Ugh…
Page 15
Panel 1:
Front view of Toxin standing up.
CAPTION(Patrick): Letting my family’s danger get in the way of the fight. Worried too much.
Panel 2:
Side view of Toxin’s mouth. Curling up into a snarl.
CAPTION(Toxin): Let the worry go… bring on THE HATE.
Panel 3:
Front view of Toxin. He’s bulked up to his Venom-ish body frame.
TOXIN: ROUND TWO!
Panel 4:
Show Hatred’s helmet/face.
HATRED: Invalid request.
Page 16
Panel 1:
Side view. Toxin rushing toward Hatred.
Panel 2:
Side view. Toxin slamming his fists down onto Hatred.
SFX: WHAM
SFX: BOOSHKT
TOXIN: GRAWWRR!!
Panel 3:
Close up of Hatred. Hatred is under Toxin’s fist and bursting into pieces.
HATRED: 111010101010101010101010010101110010
Page 17
Panel 1:
Show Toxin webbing down on Hatred’s wreckage. His form is back to his Carnage-like form.
SFX: PLISH PLISH
CAPTION(Patrick): Now I have less than five minutes.
Panel 2:
Show Toxin webbing up Grief and Vengeance’s remains.
SFX: PLISH PLISH
Panel 3:
Show Toxin’s face. It’s not Carnage-like anymore, he’s in his regular state without the mouth, with a worried expression.
CAPTION(Patrick): I swear, if he’s done anything…
Page 18
SPLASH PAGE:
Show Toxin webslinging around a couple buildings.
SFX: PLISH
CAPTION(Toxin): We’ll take care of him.
Page 19
Panel 1:
Show from behind Toxin. Toxin is webslinging and sees his apartment. There’s fire coming out of the building.
CAPTION(Patrick): NO!!
Panel 2:
Show Toxin’s face. He’s got the Carnage-y look again, mouth included.
TOXIN: NO!!
Panel 3:
Show Toxin landing onto a wall and clinging. He’s looking at a window where there’s a bright orange light inside.
TOXIN: OUR APARTMENT--
Page 20
Panel 1:
Show the inside of Patrick’s apartment. Toxin is busting through the window.
SFX: BSSHKT
Panel 2:
Side view. Show Toxin standing up and looking around, calling out.
TOXIN: GINA!!!!
Panel 3:
Show Toxin’s eyes, and Patrick’s eyes behind.
GINA: PAT!!!
TOXIN: N-no…
Panel 4:
Show Iron Vengeance with Gina in his left hand by the throat, and she’s holding the baby close. There’s a roaring fire starting from the kitchen and bedroom.
IRON VENGEANCE: What a lovely reunion.
--
(DON'T MAKE ANY MONEY OFF OF THIS - SOME CHARACTERS I MADE UP (IRON VENGEANCE AND THE IRON WRAITHS)
