Post by InnerVenom123 on Jul 19, 2011 11:54:51 GMT -5
Page 1
SPLASH PAGE:
Side view. Anti-Venom is getting up and using a parked car as leverage to stand with his hand, looking at the monstrous Creep.
CREEP: How does it FEEL!?
ANTI-VENOM: Hhhrr….
Page 2
Panel 1:
Close up of Creep’s face.
CREEP: That PAIN! HOW DOES IT FEEL?!
Panel 2:
Close up of Anti-Venom’s face.
ANTI-VENOM: Just a bit of an unexpected prick. Like a toddler getting a vaccination.
Panel 3:
Close up on Anti-Venom’s free hand, open palm and fingers in extra sharp claws.
ANTI-VENOM: I’m going to rip that little smile right off your face, whatever you are--
Page 3
Panel 1:
Side view of Creep’s primary mouth. Pyre’s mouth is forming out of it, in a blowing shape, and concentrated heat is firing out.
SFX: CHOOM
Panel 2:
Aerial view of the scene. The car Anti-Venom was just leaning on is exploding, and Anti-Venom is being thrown back, while Creep stands.
SFX: KRROOOMM
ANTI-VENOM: GRAHH!
Panel 3:
Close up on Pyre’s smile, with Creep’s multiple fangs around it.
PYRE: Somehow Brock, I think we’ll be just fine.
Page 4
Panel 1:
Anti-Venom with his body smashed into a brick wall.
ANTI-VENOM: Fine, Creep…
Panel 2:
Anti-Venom jumping out from the wreckage of the wall he was tossed into, with his finger tendrils flowing out and off panel at Creep.
ANTI-VENOM: LET’S TEST THAT THEORY!
Panel 3:
Close up on Anti-Venom’s finger tendrils impaling Creep’s face in multiple spots. No visible effect yet from the tendrils.
SFX: SHK SHK SHK SHK
Page 5
Panel 1:
Side view. Anti-Venom is crouched and on top of Creep’s massive upperbody, jamming his finger tendrils into Creep’s face. There’s no visible effect.
ANTI-VENOM: What the--
Panel 2:
The entire street, as Creep thrusts his body to the side, tossing Anti-Venom off. Anti-Venom is soaring toward off panel.
ANTI-VENOM: --NYAGH!!
CREEP: Can’t CURE US now!
Panel 3:
Front view. The interior of the front seat of a parked car. Anti-Venom’s slammed onto the windshield in a humerous way, his face bunched up against the glass, ripping through it as its broken into bits.
SFX: BASSHKT
ANTI-VENOM: GRAWR!!
CREEP(From off panel): Our VIRAL FORM just mutated and multiplied and changed and reproduced so many times, Edddie….
Page 6
Panel 1:
A tendril from Creep lashing around Anti-Venom’s legs.
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): That tendril—his entire body heat—if I wasn’t resistant to Venom’s old weaknesses I’d be dead already--
Panel 2:
Front view of Creep. The tendril that’s grabbing Anti-Venom by the legs is flinging him above Creep, in an arcing motion, so that he’ll slam on the other side of the panel right onto a parked parked moped.
CREEP: Having FUN, Brock?
ANTI-VENOM: NNN--
Panel 3:
Anti-Venom’s body smashing onto the parked moped and crushing it. Creep’s tendril slithering away from his legs, as if just letting go a moment ago.
SFX: WHAM
ANTI-VENOM: --AGH!!
Page 7 and 8
DOUBLE SPLASH PAGE:
Side view of the battle. Anti-Venom is getting up, tendrils flaring up from his back. Creep is doing the same thing, one set of his arms are cracking their knuckles, while the others are out to taunt Anti-Venom.
CREEP: We’re going to enjoy this!
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): I’m a bit out of my league here…
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): But I have to do what I have to do.
Panel 2:
Front view of Scream dropping down from the top of the building.
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): The only cure here is--
Page 9
Panel 1:
Close up of Creep’s head. Scream’s feet are kicking into his skull.
SFX: WHAK
SCREAM: HHEEEEEE’SSSS OURRSSS!!
Panel 2:
Side view. Scream flipping off from Creep’s head.
CAPTION(Jenna): AGH! My feet burn!
CAPTION(Scream Symbiote): Fire core… heat…bad…
Page 10
SPLASH PAGE:
Front view of Scream crouched in front of Anti-Venom. Anti-Venom is only partially visible, as Scream’s hair is flaring up like a mane, almost a shield, distracting Creep intentionally.
SCREAM: COOME ONN, BIG BOOOYYY!!
CAPTION(Jenna): I’m not at all in control… but at least I’m defending Eddie.
CAPTION(Scream Symbiote): He’s next.
-- NEXT SEGMENT --
Page 11
Panel 1:
Front view of Iron Vengeance holding Gina in his left arm’s grip, and Gina holding the baby, as fire roars through the apartment.
IRON VENGEANCE: You killed my father.
GINA: Pat… (small text)
Panel 2:
Side view of Toxin, he’s standing and his hand is out with an open palm, he just wants his family’s safety.
TOXIN: Let—let them go--
Panel 3:
Close up of Iron Vengeance’s left hand starting to glow orange.
IRON VENGEANCE: A trade.
Panel 4:
Close up of Gina’s face. She has a “NO!” expression and she’s shouting.
GINA: MY BABY--
Page 12
Panel 1:
Front view of Iron Vengeance. He’s backhanding Gina with his right metal gauntlet arm, as his left hand holds baby Edward by the throat in the air. Edward is crying as loud as he can, Gina has an expression of terror and shock as she’s thrown aside.
SFX: WHAK
GINA: --NO!!!
IRON VENGEANCE: A father for a son.
Panel 2:
Gina slamming face first into a wall.
GINA: NGGH--!!
Panel 3:
Toxin’s face, snarling with a father’s rage.
TOXIN: LET HIM GO!!
Panel 4:
Iron Vengeance’s faceplate.
IRON VENGEANCE: Make me.
Panel 5:
Iron Vengeance’s hand around Baby Edward’s neck is glowing a more bright orange, and bits of orange are starting to appear past the fingertips.
SFX: BZZZZZZRRR
Page 13
Panel 1:
Side view. Toxin is rushing at Iron Vengeance. Iron Vengeance is sticking his right gauntlet arm out.
TOXIN: LET GO OF MY SON!!!!
Panel 2:
Front view of Iron Vengeance. His left hand is fully glowing, and the orange whips are starting to coil around Edward, and Edward is screaming more intensely. The right metal arm has opened with its three toothed prongs.
SFX: CHK
IRON VENGEANCE: No.
Panel 3:
Side view of Toxin. The three toothed prongs of Iron Vengeance’s right arm slam down into Toxin’s chest, locking him there.
SFX: SWHKK
TOXIN: GAH!!
Panel 4:
Iron Vengeance looking at Edward. The view of Iron Vengeance is from the shoulders up. Edward is wrapped in an orange light coming from Iron Vengeance’s hand.
IRON VENGEANCE: He’s in no pain. This is just a light show.
Page 14
Panel 1:
Side view of Toxin. Tendrils are lashing out from him, trying to reach Edward.
TOXIN: Please—PLEASE—LET GO OF OUR BOY!!
Panel 2:
Iron Vengeance’s faceplate.
IRON VENGEANCE: It was you that started this.
Panel 3:
The interior of Iron Vengeance’s right arm guantlet. A blue light is growing inside.
SFX: BRREEEEE
Page 15
Panel 1:
View of the entire apartment. Toxin is flying back from a burst of blue light coming from Iron Vengeance’s opening in his right arm gauntlet.
SFX: BOOSH
TOXIN: AGGHH!!
Panel 2:
Iron Vengeance’s grip tightens on Edward as he looks at the child. The glow is changing to a darker orange.
SFX: BRRRSSSZZZ
Panel 3:
Close up on Iron Vengeance’s face.
IRON VENGEANCE: Now comes the end.
Page 16
Panel 1:
Gina grabs onto Iron Vengeance’s right gauntlet arm, screaming and crying, reaching for her baby.
GINA: PUT HIM DOWN YOU MONSTER!!
Panel 2:
Back view of Gina as she flies back with a swipe from Iron Vengeance’s arm. Edward is glowing brighter than ever.
SFX: BRRRZZZZZZZZ
IRON VENGEANCE: I’m NOT the monster here.
Panel 3:
Front view of Iron Vengeance as he throws his left arm down, letting go of Edward and tossing him. Edward is still glowing.
IRON VENGEANCE: And I’m done.
Panel 4:
Gina looks down with tears on her face at Edward in surprise as she lands onto her chest.
GINA: OH THANK GOD--
Panel 5:
Gina’s eyes. Shock and horror.
GINA: ……
Panel 6:
Edward’s face. A horribly wounded and burned corpse, mostly bone and tissue….but not a face.
TOXIN(From off panel): GRRRRRRRRR---
Page 17 and 18
DOUBLE SPLASH PAGE:
Toxin tackling Iron Vengeance through the outside wall of Pat and Gina’s apartment. There are people running with things in their hand, screaming in fear. The fire is roaring, smoke is rising out of all directions.
SFX: BRRHSHHKT
TOXIN: --RRRARRRRRRRRWWWGGHHH!!
IRON VENGEANCE: UGNGH!!
CAPTION(Patrick): Killed my son. Killed my son. Killed my son. Killed my son. Killed my son.
Page 19
Panel 1:
Toxin giving Iron Vengeance a brutal uppercut.
SFX: WHAK
Panel 2:
Iron Vengeance flying out of the top of the apartment complex, debris and smoke following him.
SFX: BRRSHKT
Panel 3:
Front view of Toxin jumping out and following Iron Vengeance’s trail in the air.
TOXIN: MY SON FOR YOUR FATHER?!
Page 20
Panel 1:
Gina cradling the corpse and walking outside into the hallway, her head down and her hair covering her face.
TOXIN: WELL GUESS WHAT?!
Panel 2:
Toxin slamming his fist into Iron Vengeance’s face in mid-air, the both of them falling downward with debris everywhere.
SFX: WHAM
TOXIN: YOU FOR MY SON, YOU *******!!!!
--
(MAKE NO MONEY - I INVENTED IRON VENGEANCE)
SPLASH PAGE:
Side view. Anti-Venom is getting up and using a parked car as leverage to stand with his hand, looking at the monstrous Creep.
CREEP: How does it FEEL!?
ANTI-VENOM: Hhhrr….
Page 2
Panel 1:
Close up of Creep’s face.
CREEP: That PAIN! HOW DOES IT FEEL?!
Panel 2:
Close up of Anti-Venom’s face.
ANTI-VENOM: Just a bit of an unexpected prick. Like a toddler getting a vaccination.
Panel 3:
Close up on Anti-Venom’s free hand, open palm and fingers in extra sharp claws.
ANTI-VENOM: I’m going to rip that little smile right off your face, whatever you are--
Page 3
Panel 1:
Side view of Creep’s primary mouth. Pyre’s mouth is forming out of it, in a blowing shape, and concentrated heat is firing out.
SFX: CHOOM
Panel 2:
Aerial view of the scene. The car Anti-Venom was just leaning on is exploding, and Anti-Venom is being thrown back, while Creep stands.
SFX: KRROOOMM
ANTI-VENOM: GRAHH!
Panel 3:
Close up on Pyre’s smile, with Creep’s multiple fangs around it.
PYRE: Somehow Brock, I think we’ll be just fine.
Page 4
Panel 1:
Anti-Venom with his body smashed into a brick wall.
ANTI-VENOM: Fine, Creep…
Panel 2:
Anti-Venom jumping out from the wreckage of the wall he was tossed into, with his finger tendrils flowing out and off panel at Creep.
ANTI-VENOM: LET’S TEST THAT THEORY!
Panel 3:
Close up on Anti-Venom’s finger tendrils impaling Creep’s face in multiple spots. No visible effect yet from the tendrils.
SFX: SHK SHK SHK SHK
Page 5
Panel 1:
Side view. Anti-Venom is crouched and on top of Creep’s massive upperbody, jamming his finger tendrils into Creep’s face. There’s no visible effect.
ANTI-VENOM: What the--
Panel 2:
The entire street, as Creep thrusts his body to the side, tossing Anti-Venom off. Anti-Venom is soaring toward off panel.
ANTI-VENOM: --NYAGH!!
CREEP: Can’t CURE US now!
Panel 3:
Front view. The interior of the front seat of a parked car. Anti-Venom’s slammed onto the windshield in a humerous way, his face bunched up against the glass, ripping through it as its broken into bits.
SFX: BASSHKT
ANTI-VENOM: GRAWR!!
CREEP(From off panel): Our VIRAL FORM just mutated and multiplied and changed and reproduced so many times, Edddie….
Page 6
Panel 1:
A tendril from Creep lashing around Anti-Venom’s legs.
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): That tendril—his entire body heat—if I wasn’t resistant to Venom’s old weaknesses I’d be dead already--
Panel 2:
Front view of Creep. The tendril that’s grabbing Anti-Venom by the legs is flinging him above Creep, in an arcing motion, so that he’ll slam on the other side of the panel right onto a parked parked moped.
CREEP: Having FUN, Brock?
ANTI-VENOM: NNN--
Panel 3:
Anti-Venom’s body smashing onto the parked moped and crushing it. Creep’s tendril slithering away from his legs, as if just letting go a moment ago.
SFX: WHAM
ANTI-VENOM: --AGH!!
Page 7 and 8
DOUBLE SPLASH PAGE:
Side view of the battle. Anti-Venom is getting up, tendrils flaring up from his back. Creep is doing the same thing, one set of his arms are cracking their knuckles, while the others are out to taunt Anti-Venom.
CREEP: We’re going to enjoy this!
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): I’m a bit out of my league here…
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): But I have to do what I have to do.
Panel 2:
Front view of Scream dropping down from the top of the building.
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): The only cure here is--
Page 9
Panel 1:
Close up of Creep’s head. Scream’s feet are kicking into his skull.
SFX: WHAK
SCREAM: HHEEEEEE’SSSS OURRSSS!!
Panel 2:
Side view. Scream flipping off from Creep’s head.
CAPTION(Jenna): AGH! My feet burn!
CAPTION(Scream Symbiote): Fire core… heat…bad…
Page 10
SPLASH PAGE:
Front view of Scream crouched in front of Anti-Venom. Anti-Venom is only partially visible, as Scream’s hair is flaring up like a mane, almost a shield, distracting Creep intentionally.
SCREAM: COOME ONN, BIG BOOOYYY!!
CAPTION(Jenna): I’m not at all in control… but at least I’m defending Eddie.
CAPTION(Scream Symbiote): He’s next.
-- NEXT SEGMENT --
Page 11
Panel 1:
Front view of Iron Vengeance holding Gina in his left arm’s grip, and Gina holding the baby, as fire roars through the apartment.
IRON VENGEANCE: You killed my father.
GINA: Pat… (small text)
Panel 2:
Side view of Toxin, he’s standing and his hand is out with an open palm, he just wants his family’s safety.
TOXIN: Let—let them go--
Panel 3:
Close up of Iron Vengeance’s left hand starting to glow orange.
IRON VENGEANCE: A trade.
Panel 4:
Close up of Gina’s face. She has a “NO!” expression and she’s shouting.
GINA: MY BABY--
Page 12
Panel 1:
Front view of Iron Vengeance. He’s backhanding Gina with his right metal gauntlet arm, as his left hand holds baby Edward by the throat in the air. Edward is crying as loud as he can, Gina has an expression of terror and shock as she’s thrown aside.
SFX: WHAK
GINA: --NO!!!
IRON VENGEANCE: A father for a son.
Panel 2:
Gina slamming face first into a wall.
GINA: NGGH--!!
Panel 3:
Toxin’s face, snarling with a father’s rage.
TOXIN: LET HIM GO!!
Panel 4:
Iron Vengeance’s faceplate.
IRON VENGEANCE: Make me.
Panel 5:
Iron Vengeance’s hand around Baby Edward’s neck is glowing a more bright orange, and bits of orange are starting to appear past the fingertips.
SFX: BZZZZZZRRR
Page 13
Panel 1:
Side view. Toxin is rushing at Iron Vengeance. Iron Vengeance is sticking his right gauntlet arm out.
TOXIN: LET GO OF MY SON!!!!
Panel 2:
Front view of Iron Vengeance. His left hand is fully glowing, and the orange whips are starting to coil around Edward, and Edward is screaming more intensely. The right metal arm has opened with its three toothed prongs.
SFX: CHK
IRON VENGEANCE: No.
Panel 3:
Side view of Toxin. The three toothed prongs of Iron Vengeance’s right arm slam down into Toxin’s chest, locking him there.
SFX: SWHKK
TOXIN: GAH!!
Panel 4:
Iron Vengeance looking at Edward. The view of Iron Vengeance is from the shoulders up. Edward is wrapped in an orange light coming from Iron Vengeance’s hand.
IRON VENGEANCE: He’s in no pain. This is just a light show.
Page 14
Panel 1:
Side view of Toxin. Tendrils are lashing out from him, trying to reach Edward.
TOXIN: Please—PLEASE—LET GO OF OUR BOY!!
Panel 2:
Iron Vengeance’s faceplate.
IRON VENGEANCE: It was you that started this.
Panel 3:
The interior of Iron Vengeance’s right arm guantlet. A blue light is growing inside.
SFX: BRREEEEE
Page 15
Panel 1:
View of the entire apartment. Toxin is flying back from a burst of blue light coming from Iron Vengeance’s opening in his right arm gauntlet.
SFX: BOOSH
TOXIN: AGGHH!!
Panel 2:
Iron Vengeance’s grip tightens on Edward as he looks at the child. The glow is changing to a darker orange.
SFX: BRRRSSSZZZ
Panel 3:
Close up on Iron Vengeance’s face.
IRON VENGEANCE: Now comes the end.
Page 16
Panel 1:
Gina grabs onto Iron Vengeance’s right gauntlet arm, screaming and crying, reaching for her baby.
GINA: PUT HIM DOWN YOU MONSTER!!
Panel 2:
Back view of Gina as she flies back with a swipe from Iron Vengeance’s arm. Edward is glowing brighter than ever.
SFX: BRRRZZZZZZZZ
IRON VENGEANCE: I’m NOT the monster here.
Panel 3:
Front view of Iron Vengeance as he throws his left arm down, letting go of Edward and tossing him. Edward is still glowing.
IRON VENGEANCE: And I’m done.
Panel 4:
Gina looks down with tears on her face at Edward in surprise as she lands onto her chest.
GINA: OH THANK GOD--
Panel 5:
Gina’s eyes. Shock and horror.
GINA: ……
Panel 6:
Edward’s face. A horribly wounded and burned corpse, mostly bone and tissue….but not a face.
TOXIN(From off panel): GRRRRRRRRR---
Page 17 and 18
DOUBLE SPLASH PAGE:
Toxin tackling Iron Vengeance through the outside wall of Pat and Gina’s apartment. There are people running with things in their hand, screaming in fear. The fire is roaring, smoke is rising out of all directions.
SFX: BRRHSHHKT
TOXIN: --RRRARRRRRRRRWWWGGHHH!!
IRON VENGEANCE: UGNGH!!
CAPTION(Patrick): Killed my son. Killed my son. Killed my son. Killed my son. Killed my son.
Page 19
Panel 1:
Toxin giving Iron Vengeance a brutal uppercut.
SFX: WHAK
Panel 2:
Iron Vengeance flying out of the top of the apartment complex, debris and smoke following him.
SFX: BRRSHKT
Panel 3:
Front view of Toxin jumping out and following Iron Vengeance’s trail in the air.
TOXIN: MY SON FOR YOUR FATHER?!
Page 20
Panel 1:
Gina cradling the corpse and walking outside into the hallway, her head down and her hair covering her face.
TOXIN: WELL GUESS WHAT?!
Panel 2:
Toxin slamming his fist into Iron Vengeance’s face in mid-air, the both of them falling downward with debris everywhere.
SFX: WHAM
TOXIN: YOU FOR MY SON, YOU *******!!!!
--
(MAKE NO MONEY - I INVENTED IRON VENGEANCE)