Post by InnerVenom123 on Aug 1, 2011 11:56:10 GMT -5
Page 1
1/ An all black panel, save for a glowing green timer (which isn’t a close up of an actual bomb, more of a “24” sort of thing).
5:00
2/ Close up of Overboss’s blank face. Eye slits are opening on his face where eyes would be. There are two tiny, red glowing lights to show his eyes.
OVERBOSS: You really thought you could burn my operation down?
3/ Close up of Punisher’s eyes.
PUNISHER: Still do. And you with it, freak.
Page 2
1/ Splash page of Overboss slamming his arms over Punisher. Overboss’s hands are clamped together, and Punisher is falling onto his back to avoid being clobbered.
OVERBOSS: HA!
Page 3
1/ Side view of Punisher on his back and arching his body up in a half-sit up with a pistol in one hand, firing several shots out.
SFX: BLAM BLAM BLAM
OVERBOSS(OP): Your words won’t even phase me--
2/ Front view of Overboss. The bullets are bouncing off of him, and he’s reaching his arm down and off panel.
OVERBOSS: --just like your bullets!
3/ Close up of Punisher’s foot, Overboss’s hand grabbing onto his left ankle.
SFX: CRKK
PUNISHER(OP): GRGH!!!
CAPTION(Punisher): Ankle bone snaps.
Page 4 and 5
1/ Big double page spread that takes up the majority of the page, every other panel on this page is horizontal and side-by-side, under the big image. Underfoot from Overboss tossing Punisher by his leg into the air.
OVERBOSS: I haven’t had this much fun in a while.
2/ Side view of Punisher rolling in the air. He’s been tossed FAR.
CAPTION(Punisher): Should have figured he’d be some kind of LMD.
3/ Side view. Punisher skidding by his backside on an assembly line. He’s still being thrown forward by the force of Overboss’s toss.
CAPTION(Punisher): Stupid.
4/ Side view. Punisher has his arms crossed together in front of his face and head as he lands on them on the factory floor ground. There’s nothing else visible but him landing.
CAPTION(Punisher): Idiot.
5/ Punisher’s face, looking up from his arms. He’s got a bit of a grin.
CAPTION(Punisher): Overboss. You’re an idiot.
Page 6
1/ From behind Punisher’s shoulder, we see an assembly line putting together Plasma Pistols.
OVERBOSS(OP): Ah. I see you found our prime objective.
2/ Close up of Punisher’s hand reaching for a fresh Plasma Pistol off the assembly line.
OVERBOSS(OP): Give these to a bunch of D-list villains, they become your private army.
3/ Front view of Punisher, leaning against a metal arm structure (one of the builders, it has to have a stage to rest on), aiming the plasma pistol out.
CAPTION(Punisher): He’s talking from somewhere, can’t see him. Must have cloaking of some kind.
Page 7
1/ Back view of Punisher. An assembly line ahead of him is ripping up by an invisible force, a half-visible Overboss.
OVERBOSS: Like Meta-Hax. That pawn I gave these to, so Bushwacker and Fogg could REALLY do you in.
OVERBOSS: Didn’t work well.
2/ Aerial view of the scene, Punisher fires the plasma pistol out at Overboss.
SFX: CHOOM
3/ Side view of Overboss, the plasma shot is going through his chest.
SFX: CHKGSHKT
OVERBOSS: Nice try.
4/ All black panel that has the digital clock’s countdown.
3:50
Page 8
1/ Splash page. Overboss is running at Punisher, like a charging animal. Punisher is throwing himself out of the way.
OVERBOSS: IT’LL TAKE MORE THAN THAT TO DESTROY ME!
CAPTION(Punisher): Leg injury similar to THAT NIGHT.
CAPTION(Punisher): How Daken took me out.
CAPTION(Punisher): How I lost.
Page 9
1/ View of Punisher from the waist up as he lands on the ground, looking back and snarling.
CAPTION(Punisher): Never again.
2/ Close up on Punisher’s hands holding the plasma pistol out, he’s turned around onto his back here.
PUNISHER: You wanted to take over the city?
3/ View from behind Overboss, showing how much taller he is than Punisher. Overboss is turned toward him and presumably looking down at him.
OVERBOSS: With the help of Underboss, yes.
4/ Front view of Punisher’s face.
PUNISHER: And who might that be?
SFX: BREEEE
CAPTION(Punisher): Distract him. Charge up the pistol.
Page 10
1/ Side view. Overboss rushing at Punisher.
OVERBOSS: NO MORE QUESTIONS!!
2/ Same view. Except now, Punisher is firing a large blast of plasma that covers Overboss.
SFX: BASHOOM
3/ Side view of Punisher starting to sit up more.
PUNISHER: Look at that.
Page 11
1/ Splash page. Overboss is heavily charred and falling apart, but not completely evaporated or gone. What’s left is a very basic endoskeleton (His insides are basically an LMD mannequin, the look of a T-800 from the “Terminator” franchise) with a lower leg structure that was out of the blast range and therefore unaffected. It’s like someone wearing cement shoes, he can’t move with that weight.
OVERBOSS: 1100… Dammit….0110
Page 12
1/ Side view. Punisher shoving the plasma pistol into Overboss’s face, standing up and in front of him.
PUNISHER: Start talking. Who’s Underboss?
2/ Front view of Overboss’s face.
OVERBOSS: 10110… gonna die anyway… 10110….programmed to tell you should you get this far…. 10110…..
3/ Punisher’s face.
PUNISHER: So tell me.
4/ View of the entire facility.
OVERBOSS: Underboss… is my brother… 1011010101…..
Page 13
1/ Overboss’s face.
OVERBOSS: He runs… the bars… 10100…
2/ Close up of the plasma pistol assembly line from earlier.
OVERBOSS: With his leadership of the bar with no name chain…. 101010…. distribute plasma pistols… cause citywide destruction.. 1010…
3/ All black panel for digital timer.
2:00
4/ Punisher’s face.
PUNISHER: What’s the goal?
Page 14
1/ Overboss’s red eyes.
OVERBOSS: Not allowed to tell that. Couldn’t if I wanted too.
2/ Punisher’s eyes.
PUNISHER: I’ll make you WISH you--
OVERBOSS(OP): Wait.
3/ Overboss’s eyes again.
OVERBOSS: I have something—101001-- else.
OVERBOSS: I was created by Littleboss. He also created Underboss… 101001…
Page 15
1/ Splash page. Show THE TINKERER using welding tools on a large, metal body (Overboss), with a shadowed figure standing in the background (no details specific, this figure could be anyone).
OVERBOSS: Littleboss, you know him as The Tinkerer… 11100…. BIGBOSS made him make me… paid him, I think… 1010… that’s all I’ll say… and you have less than two minutes to get out of here, so..
OVERBOSS: 1101… have fun when Underboss crushes you.
Page 16
1/ Black panel. Digital timer.
1:30
2/ Punisher looking at the plasma pistol.
CAPTION(Punisher): Used as a tracking device earlier. Can’t risk it.
3/ Side view. Punisher firing the plasma pistol into Overboss’s head, destroying it utterly.
SFX: CHOOM
PUNISHER: Thanks for the info.
Page 17
1/ Side view. Punisher is limping quickly down the factory, assembly lines on either side of him.
CAPTION(Punisher): Bigboss.
2/ Front view of Punisher limping quickly. Struggling.
CAPTION(Punisher): The Tinkerer.
3/ Back view of Punisher. He’s a few feet away from the panel that’s open to the factory from which he came in.
CAPTION(Punisher): Underboss.
4/ Punisher limping in through the paneling.
CAPTION(Punisher): So much scum.
5/ Black panel, digital clock.
00:30
CAPTION(Punisher): So little time.
Page 18
1/ Aerial view of the hallway, Punisher quickly limping through.
TIMER CAPTION: 00:27
2/ Front view of Punisher coming out of the hallway and into the elevator room. He’s leaning down to grab his trenchcoat.
TIMER CAPTION: 00:20
3/ Front view of Punisher standing in the elevator, the doors starting to shut. He has his trenchcoat wrapped around his shoulder, obviously having grabbed it in a hurry.
TIMER CAPTION: 00:18
CAPTION(Punisher): I’ll have to give Tinkerer a visit.
Page 19
1/ View of the elevator traveling upward through the dirt as in previous issue.
CAPTION(Punisher): Come on. Have to make it.
2/ The elevator pops up out of the ground, same as earlier. Punisher is limping out of it.
TIMER CAPTION: 00:10
CAPTION(Punisher): Focus. Move. Force yourself.
3/ Aerial view of the entire scene.
CAPTION(Punisher): Don’t end up killing yourself with your own plan.
CAPTION(Punisher): MOVE.
4/ Punisher hitting the ground(grass) from a leap of faith (throwing himself as far as possible from the elevator after limping a good dozen feet).
CAPTION(Punisher): Now just hope the leg didn’t ruin everything.
Page 20 and 21
1/ Huge splash page that takes up the entire double page spread. An aerial viewpoint of the scene. The elevator is collapsing and the entire area behind that of Central Park – all grassy field here – is sinking into the ground, and smoke rises up from the ground as it implodes. Punisher is visible in the clear, ahead of the sinkhole, save.
SFX: VRRRRRRMMMMMMMMMMOOOOSSHHHHHHH
Page 22
1/ News footage on a TV. Big major network with a bigwig reporter standing there.
TV NEWS: A large sinkhole opened up in Central Park today, authorities have noticed large chunks of rubble inside, and have decided to investigate further.
2/ Same view, entirely different news network though.
TV NEWS: Investigations have found a large, underground factory producing illegal materials – mostly destroyed at this point. Wait, I’m getting word that--
3/ Same view. Channel flip.
NO DIALOGUE
4/ Same view. Different news network.
TV NEWS: The section of Central Park that sunk into the Earth earlier today also happens to be the site of the deaths of Maria Castle and her two young children.
TV NEWS: As we all know, Frank Castle became The Punisher shortly after their murders.
Page 23
1/ Big image of Punisher, sitting up in a bed at some dive hotel. He’s shirtless and has bandage wraps around him, along with a cast on his leg. He has a stern face. But you can tell something’s wrong.
CAPTION(Punisher): …
2/ All black panel.
CAPTION(Punisher): Maria.
THE END
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