Post by InnerVenom123 on Aug 10, 2011 7:21:18 GMT -5
Page 1
1/ A central image that takes up the page, with all other panels around it in. It’s a close up of Edward Mulligan’s grave, the proper “RIP” etc written on it. The atmosphere is dim, there’s clouds, wind, certainly rain brewing in this particular view.
CAPTION(Patrick): I’ve failed.
2/ Profile view of Patrick, looking down and out of the window of his apartment. He’s dressed in casual/pajama-y clothes (wife beater, boxers, etc).
CAPTION(Patrick): I’ve failed as a father and as a husband.
CAPTION(Patrick): Because I let my addiction get the better of me.
3/ Back view of Pat. In the reflection of the window, barely visible, is Toxin.
CAPTION(Toxin): Patrick, listen to me…
4/ Close up of Patrick’s face. His brow is scrunched up, and he’s grating his teeth.
CAPTION(Patrick): No.
CAPTION(Patrick): Never again.
CAPTION(Patrick): It’s YOUR fault. YOU tore apart Iron-Wrath. YOU made his son crazy.
Page 2
1/ Patrick and Gina’s entire bedroom. Gina is curled up in the bed, and Patrick is standing at the window still. It’s not the time to sleep, it’s day out.
CAPTION(Patrick): It’s YOUR fault she’s like this. YOUR fault we had to stay away from home for weeks.
CAPTION(Patrick): YOUR fault she’s succumbed to her depression. She won’t even…
CAPTION(Toxin): Patrick…
2/ Close up of Patrick putting his hands over his face in frustration and anguish.
CAPTION(Toxin): She’ll be--
CAPTION(Patrick): NO! SHE WON’T BE ALRIGHT! SHE WON’T EVEN LOOK AT ME!
CAPTION(Patrick): She… she doesn’t even talk anymore… hasn’t for a week…
3/ Same view. Less frustration and more of a pause in emotion, as if taking a breath.
CAPTION(Patrick): … She started out with a healthy perspective. She was sad, we both were. But we decided to grieve, not blame anyone but him, and move on…. But… but we didn’t really mean it.
CAPTION(Patrick): How could we?
CAPTION(Patrick): We both knew it was my fault…
4/ Same view. Patrick’s hands are off his face, he’s glaring.
CAPTION(Patrick): For not getting rid of you when I had the chance.
CAPTION(Toxin): … you don’t mean that. You LIKE me.
CAPTION(Patrick): … I know. And that’s what disgusts me the most.
Page 3
1/ Close up of Gina in the bed. She’s utterly pathetic/crushed at this point, just covered with the sheets and with her head down.
CAPTION(Gina): It’s all my fault.
CAPTION(Gina): Should have done something more.
2/ Pan out to show Patrick standing over his side of the bed.
CAPTION(Gina): I should have found something, grabbed it, thrown it at his face… so Patrick could save Edward.
CAPTION(Gina): I should… could have done something.
CAPTION(Patrick): Should have gotten rid of Toxin.
3/ Same view. Patrick sitting on the bed, facing the opposite wall, so we see his back.
CAPTION(Patrick): My fault.
CAPTION(Gina): My fault.
4/ Top view of the bedroom. Patrick and Gina are close together, but facing opposite directions.
GINA: …sorry. (small text)
PATRICK: Love you.
GINA: … love you too. (small text)
Page 4
1/ Front view of Anti-Venom sitting, crouched upright on the edge of a building’s rooftop.
ANTI-VENOM: >Sigh<… Jenna… where could you be?
2/ Same view of Anti-Venom, except we can see the entire army behind him.
MONSTER: EDDIE! (Large text)
3/ Same view, Anti-Venom turning around. Monster is jumping down toward him, his claws down. The army of Iron Symbiotes is hovering in the air, glaring down with their creepy symbiotic faces.
ANTI-VENOM: ORWELL!? HOW--
Page 5 and 6
1/ Double spread page of Monster tackling Anti-Venom down and off the rooftop’s edge. Any spot where Monster touches Anti-Venom is burning up and sizzling, the same way that Anti-Venom’s touch would effect a symbiote.
MONSTER: HATRED BROUGHT ME BACK, EDDIE!
ANTI-VENOM: GRAWWRRGGGH!!!
2/ The sidewalk below bursts as the two slam into the ground, not visible due to a large cloud of impact debris.
SFX: BRSHKTT
ANTI-VENOM: AGGHH!!
MONSTER: HOW DOES IT FEEL?!
3/ Side view. Monster is grabbing Anti-Venom by his neck – which is burning – and holding him up.
MONSTER: How does it FEEL to be so powerless, Eddie?
MONSTER: TELL ME! I’d LOVE to know! To be a part of your SUFFERING!
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): His touch… still burns….the super-venom…
Page 7
1/ Back view of Monster tossing Anti-Venom like a ragdoll. Anti-Venom is headed for an apartment complex’s side.
MONSTER: SCREAM IT TO ME, EDDIE!
ANTI-VENOM: GRRRAARRR!!!
2/ View of the entire building Anti-Venom was thrown towards. Anti-Venom impacts one side hard, forming a large bursting debris cloud.
SFX: BRRSSHKKT
3/ The same view, but Anti-Venom is flying out of the other end of the building, his exitway forming a large bursting debris cloud as well.
SFX: SHHHHRRRKKTT
4/ Anti-Venom slamming into a sidewalk, head and shoulders first, kicking up a large amount of debris.
SFX: BSHHKT
Page 8
1/ A row of Iron-Symbiotes raise their weapons/arms. They are among the army in the sky.
MONSTER(OP): BRING HIM DOWN!
2/ The Iron-Riot, Phage, Lasher, and Agony soar down from the cloud of the army in the sky.
MONSTER(OP): Make him EASIER to crush! All else, position on the rooftops!
3/ Close up on Anti-Venom rising up from the crater in the sidewalk.
ANTI-VENOM: Urgh…
4/ Anti-Venom’s face, eyes wide, mouth hanging open.
ANTI-VENOM: No…
Page 9
1/ The Iron-Agony’s gun-arms are drawn, firing.
SFX: BUDDA BUDDA BUDDA
IRON-AGONY: GRAWR!!
2/ Midair shot of Anti-Venom sideways and webslinging. He’s jumping up and twisted in the air to avoid the Iron-Riot and Iron-Phage rushing at him on the ground, and he’s just avoiding them. The Iron-Agony is firing off into the air after him.
SFX: BUDDA BUDDA BUDDA
SFX: THWISH (new SFX for Anti-Venom’s webbing)
IRON-RIOT: RAWR!!
IRON-PHAGE: GRRSSSSSS!!
3/ Back view of Anti-Venom trying to websling upward toward an empty rooftop.
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): Have to make it out. Can’t let Jenna go undone. Can’t let him kill me.
4/ Close up of the empty rooftop, which now has two Iron-Agony on the top, firing down their large guns.
SFX: BUDDA BUDDA BUDDA
IRON-AGONY (both): HRRRSSSSSARRRRR!!!
5/ Anti-Venom’s arms form tendril-shields to catch the bullets in mid-air, but he’s being thrown back by the force.
SFX: BRAM BRAM BRAM
ANTI-VENOM: DAMMIT!!!
6/ Anti-Venom turning his head for a reaction shot of surprise.
ANTI-VENOM: WHA--
Page 10
1/ An Iron-Lasher’s tendril has wrapped around Anti-Venom’s midsection, and is pulling him back. The two Iron-Agony on the rooftop are still firing down, and Anti-Venom is catching the bullets with his tendril-shields as well.
IRON-LASHER: GRRRSSSHHHHRRRARRRWW!!!
ANTI-VENOM: NO!!!
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): I can’t die! I still have too much to prove!
2/ Anti-Venom is slammed onto the ground by the Iron-Lasher whip, kicking up a hard impact and a small crater.
SFX: BRASHKKT
ANTI-VENOM: AGH!!
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): I won’t give up. I have too much to fix. Too much to redeem.
3/ Anti-Venom holding his arm out and firing a large dose of webbing off panel.
SFX: THWISH
ANTI-VENOM: GET AWAY!!!
4/ Side view of the Iron-Lasher, now covered in his webbing. But an Iron-Riot is rushing across the panel toward Anti-Venom (who is off panel).
IRON-LASHER: GRAWRR!!
IRON-RIOT: HRRRRSSSSSS!!!!!
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): They’re not even alive—I can feel them from my webbing. IT BURNS. They--
5/ Close up of the webbed Iron-Lasher’s face. It’s snarling, as the webbing melts.
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): THEY HAVE THE SUPER-VENOM TOO!?
SFX: PSSSSHHHH
Page 11
1/ Anti-Venom in the grip of the Iron-Riot, being held by his waist in over its head.
IRON-RIOT: GRRRRR!!!
ANTI-VENOM: LET ME--
2/ Back view of the Iron-Riot as it tosses Anti-Venom like a doll. Anti-Venom is headed toward a different building, about 3-4 stories tall.
ANTI-VENOM: GGGGGGGOOOO!!!!!!!
IRON-RIOT: HSSSSSHH!!!
3/ Overhead view of several rooftops. There are Iron-Agony positioned at several spots, firing at Anti-Venom as he soars through the air. Monster is visible, clinging to a ledge and watching.
SFX: BLAM BLAM BRACKA BRACKA BUDDA BUDDA
ANTI-VENOM: GRRAWRRGGHHH!!
MONSTER: YESSS!!
4/ Anti-Venom as he slams through the building’s wall, into the top floor, and out of the rooftop using multi-image.
SFX: BSHHHKKKT
SFX: BRASSHHKT
SFX: KRASSSHKT
ANTI-VENOM: NGAGH--
ANTI-VENOM: --AGH--
ANTI-VENOM: --GRAWRRGGHH!!
Page 12
1/ Anti-Venom soaring above the building, with an Iron-Phage waiting in the sky, its blade-arms drawn.
IRON-PHAGE: GRAAGGGHHRRR!!
ANTI-VENOM: CAN’T--
2/ The Iron-Phage slashing its blades down in mid-air, but Anti-Venom blocking with the proper tendril-shields.
SFX: KLASH
SFX: KLANG
ANTI-VENOM: WON’T—CAN’T DIE--
3/ Close up on Anti-Venom’s hand, firing a webline.
SFX: THWISH
IRON-PHAGE: RRRRRAWWRRR!!
4/ Anti-Venom pulling himself (a web-zip) downward with the webline, but Monster is leaping in from off panel.
MONSTER: WRONG!!
Page 13
1/ Brutal shot of Monster tackling into Anti-Venom in mid-air.
SFX: WHAM
ANTI-VENOM: NGH!
MONSTER: TODAY--
2/ Overhead aerial view of Monster still on Anti-Venom, forcing him downward.
MONSTER: -- YOU DIE!!!
3/ Monster and Anti-Venom land in the middle of the street, causing a large kickback of rubble/debris clouds. If multi-image, Monster is definitely the one making Anti-Venom take the brunt of the fall.
SFX: BOOSHKT
4/ Monster is standing over Anti-Venom, his claws forming tendrils – a mocking reference to how Anti-Venom tried to cure Venom in his first appearance.
MONSTER: For killing my son…
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): Jenna…
Page 14
1/ Cut to Scream slamming Spider-man down into the ground with her hair. Spidey looks badly beat up.
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): I’m sorry…
SPIDER-MAN: Ughn…
SCREAM: Give up yet, Spidey?
2/ Close up of Spider-man, firing out webbing.
SPIDER-MAN: To web, or not to web?
SFX: THWIP
3/ Scream’s hair slashes the webbing before it hits her.
SFX: THRASHH
SCREAM: COME ON! You’ve gotta do better than THAT!
4/ Spider-man punching Scream in the face, Scream’s hair subsiding to either side of him.
SFX: WHAK
SPIDER-MAN: You lost focus on me and got rid of the webbing?!
SPIDER-MAN: No sense of priorities, you newbie villains have!
Page 15
1/ Monster jamming his fingers into Anti-Venom’s chest, boiling and bubbling the suit away.
SFX: SSSSSSSSSSSS
ANTI-VENOM: GRAWRGGHH!!!
MONSTER: YESSSSSS!!!!
2/ Spider-man backing up from Scream in a false boxer pose, mocking her. Scream is looking up, as if sensing something.
SPIDER-MAN: Come on! Best ya got?
SPIDER-MAN: I can do better.
SCREAM: …. Wait.
3/ Monster is laying into Anti-Venom moreso than panel 1. Tendrils are slithering off his shoulders and stabbing into Anti-Venom’s chest.
SFX: SSSSSSSS
ANTI-VENOM: AGGHHH!!!!!!!
MONSTER: HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
4/ Close up on Scream’s face, she’s confused.
SCREAM: Can’t shake the feeling…
SPIDER-MAN(OP): Hello? Over here?
Page 16
1/ Splash page. Aerial view. Monster is staring up at the camera. Eddie Brock is visible, his head turned, his eyes closed. There’s blood coming out of his mouth and eyes. Monster’s tendrils are slithering back from Eddie, and Monster has a victory stance. Monster is shouting, arching himself back and roaring.
MONSTER: FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!
Page 17
1/ Side view of Monster, looking down with a serious look.
MONSTER: Finally gone….. Hugh can sleep now….
MONSTER: ….
MONSTER: …. But what do I do?
2/ Monster looking up, same view.
MONSTER: Brock was… easy.
MONSTER: I’m done… I can’t be done. I still have the urge. That HATE. It hasn’t… it hasn’t left yet. I can’t… why can’t I feel PEACE yet?!
3/ Monster looking at the reader.
MONSTER: WHY?!
MONSTER: WHY WON’T YOU LET ME LIVE ANYMORE, BROCK!?
4/ Close up on Monster’s eyes.
MONSTER: DEATH! DEATH! KILL THEM ALL!!
Page 18
1/ The Iron Symbiotes surround Monster, as if waiting on orders.
MONSTER: KILL EVERYONE! EVERY SINGLE LAST ONE!!
MONSTER: MUST FEEL AGAIN! MUST BREATHE EASY AGAIN!
MONSTER: KILL UNTIL IT GOES AWAY! KILL THEM! KILL EVERYONE!!!
2/ The Iron Symbiotes locking and loading, snarling in agreement.
IRON SYMBIOTES: HSSSSSSSSSSRRRRAWWRRR
3/ Aerial. Monster looking up and pointing up.
MONSTER: KILL THEM ALL, SYMBIOTES! KILL THEM ALL!!!!
4/ Close up on Scream, she’s grabbing her head with her hands.
SCREAM: GRAWWRRR!!
CAPTION(Scream Symbiote): PSYCHIC SCREAM!! BURNS!!!
Page 19
1/ Monster standing over Eddie, looking down at him with a snarl. The Iron Symbiotes are visibly attacking buildings in the background.
SFX: BUDDA BUDDA BUDDA
SFX: BOOSHKT
MONSTER: I’ve almost forgotten, Brock… Toxin.
MONSTER: The one who finished me last time.
2/ Monster shouting up at the Iron Symbiotes.
MONSTER: TOXIN, AS WELL! WE CAN FEEL HIM!
MONSTER: His DNA is inside ME and YOU! TRACE IT! FIND HIM! KILL HIM!
3/ Patrick and Gina’s bedroom. Patrick is sitting up on the bed rubbing his head, shaking Gina. Gina is looking over.
PATRICK: We need to get out of here… ngh…
PATRICK: Gina, please!
GINA: … why? (Small text)
4/ Patrick grabbing Gina and sitting her up. He’s panicking.
PATRICK: Gina! They’re on the way! I can’t explain it right now—they’re coming!
5/ Gina’s face, she’s detached (from the trauma) but curious.
GINA: … who? (small text)
6/ Their bedroom’s wall erupts, an Iron-Riot slamming through it, snarling and roaring. Toxin is forming over Patrick (his right arm morphing into a dark green), as he grabs Gina with some of her covers still on and jumps off panel.
SFX: KRRASHHH
IRON-RIOT: HRRRRRWWWRRRAWWWRRRR!!!!
TOXIN: THEM!!
GINA: AAAIEEE!!
7/ Scream and Spider-man surrounded by Iron Symbiotes of all kinds, at least two of each. They’re both surprised.
IRON SYMBIOTES: GRRRRRRRRSSSSS…
SPIDER-MAN: Friends of yours?
SCREAM: You’ve GOT to be kidding!
SPIDER-MAN: Just saying. At this point nothing surprises me. (Small text)
Page 20
1/ An irritated VENOM in his “Agent Venom” form is taking cover crouched behind a car that’s already exploded, he’s speaking into his comm link.
CAPTION: AGENT VENOM – FIGHTING FOR YOUR FREEDOM IN A FORMERLY PEACEFUL FRENCH TOWN, NOW OCCUPIED BY AGM* EXPERIMENTS ON A RAMPAGE!
(WRITER’S NOTE: *Advanced Genocide Mechanics)
SFX: BRAKA BRAKA BLAM BLAM
VENOM: Kate! Did you HEAR that?!
KATE(Comm link): No! Agent Venom, report! What did you hear?
2/ Back view of Agent Venom as he stands over the wreckage and tosses a grenade at the man shooting at him (who looks like a man given cyborg treatment similar to Bushwacker – mechanical gun/flesh arms, etc).
VENOM: I think the symbiote picked up a psychic message or something!
VENOM: Sounded VIOLENT. Like a DEATH THREAT.
3/ Agent Venom webslinging toward a building that looks like it’s been shot at repeatedly. The rest of the town is burning as well, looking like a warzone.
KATE: Thompson, how did you--
VENOM: What?!
KATE: You’re right! Something’s happening in New York! Finish your mission! I’ll tell Dodge, since you have special intel from the alien, we’ll end up sending you in!
4/ Back view of Agent Venom clinging to a wall, holding a large rifle and aiming down and firing at a different Bushwacker-ish monstrosity.
SFX: BLAM
VENOM: Got it! Agent Venom over and out.
CAPTION(Venom): Betty… be careful. Please.
Page 21
1/ Back view of Toxin and Gina standing on a rooftop overlooking their apartment complex. Toxin is leaning forward, like he REALLY needs to go there and save everyone – the Iron-Riot is tearing his complex apart violently. There’s another Iron-Riot joining it, tearing apart more structure.
TOXIN: Gina, we--
GINA: …
TOXIN: Gina…
2/ Front view, Toxin looking at Gina. Patrick’s face is visible as the tendrils pull back.
PATRICK: Gina, I can’t leave you alone. There’s been a declaration—it’s impossible to explain, but these things—they—they won’t stop! Not until we’re all…
GINA: … Sorry. (Small text)
3/ Patrick’s face, he’s very uneasy.
CAPTION(Toxin): Patrick… I can protect her. She’s not strong enough on her own.
CAPTION(Patrick): What will you do? Will you--
CAPTION(Toxin): I won’t hurt her. Just trust me…
4/ Side view. Patrick grabs Gina and kisses her. The Toxin symbiote is flowing over Patrick’s face like veins, slithering onto her. Both of their eyes are wide, they didn’t see this coming.
CAPTION(Toxin): And kiss the bride.
CAPTION(Patrick): WHAT ARE YOU--
CAPTION(Toxin): Relax…
Page 22
1/ Patrick and Gina standing, breaking the kiss as Patrick steps back. The upperhalf of Toxin on him is gone, and his right stump is showing. Gina is covered with it, stretching over her in a disturbing way.
GINA: PATRICK!
PATRICK: GINA?! WHAT HAPPENED—WHAT DID WE DO!?
CAPTION(Toxin): Relax. And just remember, Patrick. You made a vow.
2/ Gina has half of the Toxin symbiote over her, but its expanding and covering most of her now. It’s a dark green color, with a design like Carnage.
CAPTION(Toxin): “Till death do us part”, right?
PATRICK(OP): No. Toxin… no… not like this…
GINA: Patrick. I’m scared.
3/ Gina’s hands have formed claws, and she’s grabbing her head. A mouth like Carnage’s is forming (black teeth).
GINA: WAIT…WHAT’S GOING ON…WE ARE SUPPOSED TO PROTECT YOU…WHAT IS THIS…
CAPTION(Toxin): PAT! We were going to protect her with a psychic link, keep her in a safe place, use it like a remote to control her--but—but her insides—they’re SEVERING IT!
PATRICK(OP): GINA!!
4/ Back view of Gina and the symbiote covering her. Still a Carnage design but with dark blue. Patrick/Toxin is standing in the background here, and the Toxin symbiote is mostly covering him again, his right arm restored as a tendril-arm.
GINA: Sooo…muuuuch….paaaaainnn….
PATRICK: Gina…. (small text)
GINA: To feeeeed on….overwhelming….need to let the pain goooo, Patriiick….need to VENT….get it out of me…
GINA: Frrrrrooommmm thisssss point….
Page 23
1/ Splash page of Gina in her new form showing her arms out, snarling as if reborn. She has short tendril “hair”, but otherwise, she’s just like Carnage but female and blue.
GINA: WE
GINA: ARE
GINA: MALICE!!!!!!
--
(I MAKE NO MONEY OFF OF THIS - I INVENTED: IRON SYMBIOTES, VARIATIONS ON GINA AND ORWELL)
1/ A central image that takes up the page, with all other panels around it in. It’s a close up of Edward Mulligan’s grave, the proper “RIP” etc written on it. The atmosphere is dim, there’s clouds, wind, certainly rain brewing in this particular view.
CAPTION(Patrick): I’ve failed.
2/ Profile view of Patrick, looking down and out of the window of his apartment. He’s dressed in casual/pajama-y clothes (wife beater, boxers, etc).
CAPTION(Patrick): I’ve failed as a father and as a husband.
CAPTION(Patrick): Because I let my addiction get the better of me.
3/ Back view of Pat. In the reflection of the window, barely visible, is Toxin.
CAPTION(Toxin): Patrick, listen to me…
4/ Close up of Patrick’s face. His brow is scrunched up, and he’s grating his teeth.
CAPTION(Patrick): No.
CAPTION(Patrick): Never again.
CAPTION(Patrick): It’s YOUR fault. YOU tore apart Iron-Wrath. YOU made his son crazy.
Page 2
1/ Patrick and Gina’s entire bedroom. Gina is curled up in the bed, and Patrick is standing at the window still. It’s not the time to sleep, it’s day out.
CAPTION(Patrick): It’s YOUR fault she’s like this. YOUR fault we had to stay away from home for weeks.
CAPTION(Patrick): YOUR fault she’s succumbed to her depression. She won’t even…
CAPTION(Toxin): Patrick…
2/ Close up of Patrick putting his hands over his face in frustration and anguish.
CAPTION(Toxin): She’ll be--
CAPTION(Patrick): NO! SHE WON’T BE ALRIGHT! SHE WON’T EVEN LOOK AT ME!
CAPTION(Patrick): She… she doesn’t even talk anymore… hasn’t for a week…
3/ Same view. Less frustration and more of a pause in emotion, as if taking a breath.
CAPTION(Patrick): … She started out with a healthy perspective. She was sad, we both were. But we decided to grieve, not blame anyone but him, and move on…. But… but we didn’t really mean it.
CAPTION(Patrick): How could we?
CAPTION(Patrick): We both knew it was my fault…
4/ Same view. Patrick’s hands are off his face, he’s glaring.
CAPTION(Patrick): For not getting rid of you when I had the chance.
CAPTION(Toxin): … you don’t mean that. You LIKE me.
CAPTION(Patrick): … I know. And that’s what disgusts me the most.
Page 3
1/ Close up of Gina in the bed. She’s utterly pathetic/crushed at this point, just covered with the sheets and with her head down.
CAPTION(Gina): It’s all my fault.
CAPTION(Gina): Should have done something more.
2/ Pan out to show Patrick standing over his side of the bed.
CAPTION(Gina): I should have found something, grabbed it, thrown it at his face… so Patrick could save Edward.
CAPTION(Gina): I should… could have done something.
CAPTION(Patrick): Should have gotten rid of Toxin.
3/ Same view. Patrick sitting on the bed, facing the opposite wall, so we see his back.
CAPTION(Patrick): My fault.
CAPTION(Gina): My fault.
4/ Top view of the bedroom. Patrick and Gina are close together, but facing opposite directions.
GINA: …sorry. (small text)
PATRICK: Love you.
GINA: … love you too. (small text)
Page 4
1/ Front view of Anti-Venom sitting, crouched upright on the edge of a building’s rooftop.
ANTI-VENOM: >Sigh<… Jenna… where could you be?
2/ Same view of Anti-Venom, except we can see the entire army behind him.
MONSTER: EDDIE! (Large text)
3/ Same view, Anti-Venom turning around. Monster is jumping down toward him, his claws down. The army of Iron Symbiotes is hovering in the air, glaring down with their creepy symbiotic faces.
ANTI-VENOM: ORWELL!? HOW--
Page 5 and 6
1/ Double spread page of Monster tackling Anti-Venom down and off the rooftop’s edge. Any spot where Monster touches Anti-Venom is burning up and sizzling, the same way that Anti-Venom’s touch would effect a symbiote.
MONSTER: HATRED BROUGHT ME BACK, EDDIE!
ANTI-VENOM: GRAWWRRGGGH!!!
2/ The sidewalk below bursts as the two slam into the ground, not visible due to a large cloud of impact debris.
SFX: BRSHKTT
ANTI-VENOM: AGGHH!!
MONSTER: HOW DOES IT FEEL?!
3/ Side view. Monster is grabbing Anti-Venom by his neck – which is burning – and holding him up.
MONSTER: How does it FEEL to be so powerless, Eddie?
MONSTER: TELL ME! I’d LOVE to know! To be a part of your SUFFERING!
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): His touch… still burns….the super-venom…
Page 7
1/ Back view of Monster tossing Anti-Venom like a ragdoll. Anti-Venom is headed for an apartment complex’s side.
MONSTER: SCREAM IT TO ME, EDDIE!
ANTI-VENOM: GRRRAARRR!!!
2/ View of the entire building Anti-Venom was thrown towards. Anti-Venom impacts one side hard, forming a large bursting debris cloud.
SFX: BRRSSHKKT
3/ The same view, but Anti-Venom is flying out of the other end of the building, his exitway forming a large bursting debris cloud as well.
SFX: SHHHHRRRKKTT
4/ Anti-Venom slamming into a sidewalk, head and shoulders first, kicking up a large amount of debris.
SFX: BSHHKT
Page 8
1/ A row of Iron-Symbiotes raise their weapons/arms. They are among the army in the sky.
MONSTER(OP): BRING HIM DOWN!
2/ The Iron-Riot, Phage, Lasher, and Agony soar down from the cloud of the army in the sky.
MONSTER(OP): Make him EASIER to crush! All else, position on the rooftops!
3/ Close up on Anti-Venom rising up from the crater in the sidewalk.
ANTI-VENOM: Urgh…
4/ Anti-Venom’s face, eyes wide, mouth hanging open.
ANTI-VENOM: No…
Page 9
1/ The Iron-Agony’s gun-arms are drawn, firing.
SFX: BUDDA BUDDA BUDDA
IRON-AGONY: GRAWR!!
2/ Midair shot of Anti-Venom sideways and webslinging. He’s jumping up and twisted in the air to avoid the Iron-Riot and Iron-Phage rushing at him on the ground, and he’s just avoiding them. The Iron-Agony is firing off into the air after him.
SFX: BUDDA BUDDA BUDDA
SFX: THWISH (new SFX for Anti-Venom’s webbing)
IRON-RIOT: RAWR!!
IRON-PHAGE: GRRSSSSSS!!
3/ Back view of Anti-Venom trying to websling upward toward an empty rooftop.
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): Have to make it out. Can’t let Jenna go undone. Can’t let him kill me.
4/ Close up of the empty rooftop, which now has two Iron-Agony on the top, firing down their large guns.
SFX: BUDDA BUDDA BUDDA
IRON-AGONY (both): HRRRSSSSSARRRRR!!!
5/ Anti-Venom’s arms form tendril-shields to catch the bullets in mid-air, but he’s being thrown back by the force.
SFX: BRAM BRAM BRAM
ANTI-VENOM: DAMMIT!!!
6/ Anti-Venom turning his head for a reaction shot of surprise.
ANTI-VENOM: WHA--
Page 10
1/ An Iron-Lasher’s tendril has wrapped around Anti-Venom’s midsection, and is pulling him back. The two Iron-Agony on the rooftop are still firing down, and Anti-Venom is catching the bullets with his tendril-shields as well.
IRON-LASHER: GRRRSSSHHHHRRRARRRWW!!!
ANTI-VENOM: NO!!!
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): I can’t die! I still have too much to prove!
2/ Anti-Venom is slammed onto the ground by the Iron-Lasher whip, kicking up a hard impact and a small crater.
SFX: BRASHKKT
ANTI-VENOM: AGH!!
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): I won’t give up. I have too much to fix. Too much to redeem.
3/ Anti-Venom holding his arm out and firing a large dose of webbing off panel.
SFX: THWISH
ANTI-VENOM: GET AWAY!!!
4/ Side view of the Iron-Lasher, now covered in his webbing. But an Iron-Riot is rushing across the panel toward Anti-Venom (who is off panel).
IRON-LASHER: GRAWRR!!
IRON-RIOT: HRRRRSSSSSS!!!!!
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): They’re not even alive—I can feel them from my webbing. IT BURNS. They--
5/ Close up of the webbed Iron-Lasher’s face. It’s snarling, as the webbing melts.
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): THEY HAVE THE SUPER-VENOM TOO!?
SFX: PSSSSHHHH
Page 11
1/ Anti-Venom in the grip of the Iron-Riot, being held by his waist in over its head.
IRON-RIOT: GRRRRR!!!
ANTI-VENOM: LET ME--
2/ Back view of the Iron-Riot as it tosses Anti-Venom like a doll. Anti-Venom is headed toward a different building, about 3-4 stories tall.
ANTI-VENOM: GGGGGGGOOOO!!!!!!!
IRON-RIOT: HSSSSSHH!!!
3/ Overhead view of several rooftops. There are Iron-Agony positioned at several spots, firing at Anti-Venom as he soars through the air. Monster is visible, clinging to a ledge and watching.
SFX: BLAM BLAM BRACKA BRACKA BUDDA BUDDA
ANTI-VENOM: GRRAWRRGGHHH!!
MONSTER: YESSS!!
4/ Anti-Venom as he slams through the building’s wall, into the top floor, and out of the rooftop using multi-image.
SFX: BSHHHKKKT
SFX: BRASSHHKT
SFX: KRASSSHKT
ANTI-VENOM: NGAGH--
ANTI-VENOM: --AGH--
ANTI-VENOM: --GRAWRRGGHH!!
Page 12
1/ Anti-Venom soaring above the building, with an Iron-Phage waiting in the sky, its blade-arms drawn.
IRON-PHAGE: GRAAGGGHHRRR!!
ANTI-VENOM: CAN’T--
2/ The Iron-Phage slashing its blades down in mid-air, but Anti-Venom blocking with the proper tendril-shields.
SFX: KLASH
SFX: KLANG
ANTI-VENOM: WON’T—CAN’T DIE--
3/ Close up on Anti-Venom’s hand, firing a webline.
SFX: THWISH
IRON-PHAGE: RRRRRAWWRRR!!
4/ Anti-Venom pulling himself (a web-zip) downward with the webline, but Monster is leaping in from off panel.
MONSTER: WRONG!!
Page 13
1/ Brutal shot of Monster tackling into Anti-Venom in mid-air.
SFX: WHAM
ANTI-VENOM: NGH!
MONSTER: TODAY--
2/ Overhead aerial view of Monster still on Anti-Venom, forcing him downward.
MONSTER: -- YOU DIE!!!
3/ Monster and Anti-Venom land in the middle of the street, causing a large kickback of rubble/debris clouds. If multi-image, Monster is definitely the one making Anti-Venom take the brunt of the fall.
SFX: BOOSHKT
4/ Monster is standing over Anti-Venom, his claws forming tendrils – a mocking reference to how Anti-Venom tried to cure Venom in his first appearance.
MONSTER: For killing my son…
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): Jenna…
Page 14
1/ Cut to Scream slamming Spider-man down into the ground with her hair. Spidey looks badly beat up.
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): I’m sorry…
SPIDER-MAN: Ughn…
SCREAM: Give up yet, Spidey?
2/ Close up of Spider-man, firing out webbing.
SPIDER-MAN: To web, or not to web?
SFX: THWIP
3/ Scream’s hair slashes the webbing before it hits her.
SFX: THRASHH
SCREAM: COME ON! You’ve gotta do better than THAT!
4/ Spider-man punching Scream in the face, Scream’s hair subsiding to either side of him.
SFX: WHAK
SPIDER-MAN: You lost focus on me and got rid of the webbing?!
SPIDER-MAN: No sense of priorities, you newbie villains have!
Page 15
1/ Monster jamming his fingers into Anti-Venom’s chest, boiling and bubbling the suit away.
SFX: SSSSSSSSSSSS
ANTI-VENOM: GRAWRGGHH!!!
MONSTER: YESSSSSS!!!!
2/ Spider-man backing up from Scream in a false boxer pose, mocking her. Scream is looking up, as if sensing something.
SPIDER-MAN: Come on! Best ya got?
SPIDER-MAN: I can do better.
SCREAM: …. Wait.
3/ Monster is laying into Anti-Venom moreso than panel 1. Tendrils are slithering off his shoulders and stabbing into Anti-Venom’s chest.
SFX: SSSSSSSS
ANTI-VENOM: AGGHHH!!!!!!!
MONSTER: HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
4/ Close up on Scream’s face, she’s confused.
SCREAM: Can’t shake the feeling…
SPIDER-MAN(OP): Hello? Over here?
Page 16
1/ Splash page. Aerial view. Monster is staring up at the camera. Eddie Brock is visible, his head turned, his eyes closed. There’s blood coming out of his mouth and eyes. Monster’s tendrils are slithering back from Eddie, and Monster has a victory stance. Monster is shouting, arching himself back and roaring.
MONSTER: FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!
Page 17
1/ Side view of Monster, looking down with a serious look.
MONSTER: Finally gone….. Hugh can sleep now….
MONSTER: ….
MONSTER: …. But what do I do?
2/ Monster looking up, same view.
MONSTER: Brock was… easy.
MONSTER: I’m done… I can’t be done. I still have the urge. That HATE. It hasn’t… it hasn’t left yet. I can’t… why can’t I feel PEACE yet?!
3/ Monster looking at the reader.
MONSTER: WHY?!
MONSTER: WHY WON’T YOU LET ME LIVE ANYMORE, BROCK!?
4/ Close up on Monster’s eyes.
MONSTER: DEATH! DEATH! KILL THEM ALL!!
Page 18
1/ The Iron Symbiotes surround Monster, as if waiting on orders.
MONSTER: KILL EVERYONE! EVERY SINGLE LAST ONE!!
MONSTER: MUST FEEL AGAIN! MUST BREATHE EASY AGAIN!
MONSTER: KILL UNTIL IT GOES AWAY! KILL THEM! KILL EVERYONE!!!
2/ The Iron Symbiotes locking and loading, snarling in agreement.
IRON SYMBIOTES: HSSSSSSSSSSRRRRAWWRRR
3/ Aerial. Monster looking up and pointing up.
MONSTER: KILL THEM ALL, SYMBIOTES! KILL THEM ALL!!!!
4/ Close up on Scream, she’s grabbing her head with her hands.
SCREAM: GRAWWRRR!!
CAPTION(Scream Symbiote): PSYCHIC SCREAM!! BURNS!!!
Page 19
1/ Monster standing over Eddie, looking down at him with a snarl. The Iron Symbiotes are visibly attacking buildings in the background.
SFX: BUDDA BUDDA BUDDA
SFX: BOOSHKT
MONSTER: I’ve almost forgotten, Brock… Toxin.
MONSTER: The one who finished me last time.
2/ Monster shouting up at the Iron Symbiotes.
MONSTER: TOXIN, AS WELL! WE CAN FEEL HIM!
MONSTER: His DNA is inside ME and YOU! TRACE IT! FIND HIM! KILL HIM!
3/ Patrick and Gina’s bedroom. Patrick is sitting up on the bed rubbing his head, shaking Gina. Gina is looking over.
PATRICK: We need to get out of here… ngh…
PATRICK: Gina, please!
GINA: … why? (Small text)
4/ Patrick grabbing Gina and sitting her up. He’s panicking.
PATRICK: Gina! They’re on the way! I can’t explain it right now—they’re coming!
5/ Gina’s face, she’s detached (from the trauma) but curious.
GINA: … who? (small text)
6/ Their bedroom’s wall erupts, an Iron-Riot slamming through it, snarling and roaring. Toxin is forming over Patrick (his right arm morphing into a dark green), as he grabs Gina with some of her covers still on and jumps off panel.
SFX: KRRASHHH
IRON-RIOT: HRRRRRWWWRRRAWWWRRRR!!!!
TOXIN: THEM!!
GINA: AAAIEEE!!
7/ Scream and Spider-man surrounded by Iron Symbiotes of all kinds, at least two of each. They’re both surprised.
IRON SYMBIOTES: GRRRRRRRRSSSSS…
SPIDER-MAN: Friends of yours?
SCREAM: You’ve GOT to be kidding!
SPIDER-MAN: Just saying. At this point nothing surprises me. (Small text)
Page 20
1/ An irritated VENOM in his “Agent Venom” form is taking cover crouched behind a car that’s already exploded, he’s speaking into his comm link.
CAPTION: AGENT VENOM – FIGHTING FOR YOUR FREEDOM IN A FORMERLY PEACEFUL FRENCH TOWN, NOW OCCUPIED BY AGM* EXPERIMENTS ON A RAMPAGE!
(WRITER’S NOTE: *Advanced Genocide Mechanics)
SFX: BRAKA BRAKA BLAM BLAM
VENOM: Kate! Did you HEAR that?!
KATE(Comm link): No! Agent Venom, report! What did you hear?
2/ Back view of Agent Venom as he stands over the wreckage and tosses a grenade at the man shooting at him (who looks like a man given cyborg treatment similar to Bushwacker – mechanical gun/flesh arms, etc).
VENOM: I think the symbiote picked up a psychic message or something!
VENOM: Sounded VIOLENT. Like a DEATH THREAT.
3/ Agent Venom webslinging toward a building that looks like it’s been shot at repeatedly. The rest of the town is burning as well, looking like a warzone.
KATE: Thompson, how did you--
VENOM: What?!
KATE: You’re right! Something’s happening in New York! Finish your mission! I’ll tell Dodge, since you have special intel from the alien, we’ll end up sending you in!
4/ Back view of Agent Venom clinging to a wall, holding a large rifle and aiming down and firing at a different Bushwacker-ish monstrosity.
SFX: BLAM
VENOM: Got it! Agent Venom over and out.
CAPTION(Venom): Betty… be careful. Please.
Page 21
1/ Back view of Toxin and Gina standing on a rooftop overlooking their apartment complex. Toxin is leaning forward, like he REALLY needs to go there and save everyone – the Iron-Riot is tearing his complex apart violently. There’s another Iron-Riot joining it, tearing apart more structure.
TOXIN: Gina, we--
GINA: …
TOXIN: Gina…
2/ Front view, Toxin looking at Gina. Patrick’s face is visible as the tendrils pull back.
PATRICK: Gina, I can’t leave you alone. There’s been a declaration—it’s impossible to explain, but these things—they—they won’t stop! Not until we’re all…
GINA: … Sorry. (Small text)
3/ Patrick’s face, he’s very uneasy.
CAPTION(Toxin): Patrick… I can protect her. She’s not strong enough on her own.
CAPTION(Patrick): What will you do? Will you--
CAPTION(Toxin): I won’t hurt her. Just trust me…
4/ Side view. Patrick grabs Gina and kisses her. The Toxin symbiote is flowing over Patrick’s face like veins, slithering onto her. Both of their eyes are wide, they didn’t see this coming.
CAPTION(Toxin): And kiss the bride.
CAPTION(Patrick): WHAT ARE YOU--
CAPTION(Toxin): Relax…
Page 22
1/ Patrick and Gina standing, breaking the kiss as Patrick steps back. The upperhalf of Toxin on him is gone, and his right stump is showing. Gina is covered with it, stretching over her in a disturbing way.
GINA: PATRICK!
PATRICK: GINA?! WHAT HAPPENED—WHAT DID WE DO!?
CAPTION(Toxin): Relax. And just remember, Patrick. You made a vow.
2/ Gina has half of the Toxin symbiote over her, but its expanding and covering most of her now. It’s a dark green color, with a design like Carnage.
CAPTION(Toxin): “Till death do us part”, right?
PATRICK(OP): No. Toxin… no… not like this…
GINA: Patrick. I’m scared.
3/ Gina’s hands have formed claws, and she’s grabbing her head. A mouth like Carnage’s is forming (black teeth).
GINA: WAIT…WHAT’S GOING ON…WE ARE SUPPOSED TO PROTECT YOU…WHAT IS THIS…
CAPTION(Toxin): PAT! We were going to protect her with a psychic link, keep her in a safe place, use it like a remote to control her--but—but her insides—they’re SEVERING IT!
PATRICK(OP): GINA!!
4/ Back view of Gina and the symbiote covering her. Still a Carnage design but with dark blue. Patrick/Toxin is standing in the background here, and the Toxin symbiote is mostly covering him again, his right arm restored as a tendril-arm.
GINA: Sooo…muuuuch….paaaaainnn….
PATRICK: Gina…. (small text)
GINA: To feeeeed on….overwhelming….need to let the pain goooo, Patriiick….need to VENT….get it out of me…
GINA: Frrrrrooommmm thisssss point….
Page 23
1/ Splash page of Gina in her new form showing her arms out, snarling as if reborn. She has short tendril “hair”, but otherwise, she’s just like Carnage but female and blue.
GINA: WE
GINA: ARE
GINA: MALICE!!!!!!
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(I MAKE NO MONEY OFF OF THIS - I INVENTED: IRON SYMBIOTES, VARIATIONS ON GINA AND ORWELL)