Post by InnerVenom123 on Aug 28, 2011 23:20:40 GMT -5
Page 1
1/ We get a close up of General Dodge’s black sunglasses. The reflections that show off of them are vital scans of Agent Venom. The poses are just Agent Venom standing and facing to the side, and standing and facing forward (like a prison line up shot, but medical – vital signs to the side, heart rate, etc). All the readings are off the charts and in the red, and there’s a red glow on Dodge’s face from the machines. Dodge is not pleased.
GENERAL DODGE: Dr. Mackenzie, you have about five seconds to explain this to me.
2/ Pan out to show General Dodge standing there, Dr. Mackenzie at his side holding a high tech iPad-ish device, panicking as he analyzes all the data he can.
DR. MACKENZIE: W-well sir, it appears that Agent Thompson is no longer in control of the--
3/ Close up of Dodge. He’s gritting his teeth in frustration and if we could hear him, you’d think he was boiling inside.
GENERAL DODGE: I’m. Aware. Of. That.
4/ Dr. Mackenzie’s face, he’s looking up and nervous.
DR. MACKENZIE: Carnage is the symbiote’s offspring, and apparently their race hates their offspring, because—well, they do. And somehow, the symbiote’s literally CRUSHED the micro-bots we installed as a new killswitch, and now--
GENERAL DODGE(OP): My Agent Venom is trying to murder Carnage, when he SHOULD be stopping this disaster.
DR. MACKENZIE: … Yes, sir.
Page 2
1/ Profile view of General Dodge.
GENERAL DODGE: I got a call a few minutes ago, Mackenzie.
GENERAL DODGE: If Thompson doesn’t get control of himself in the next two hours—if we don’t get our butts in gear and shut down this attack, troops will be called in. More lives will be lost in the crossfire.
2/ Same.
GENERAL DODGE: I had to assure the president that we could handle this.
GENERAL DODGE: …
3/ Front view of Dodge, rubbing his forehead.
GENERAL DODGE: I’ve placed my faith in Thompson. Can you please tell me you’d do the same, Mackenzie?
GENERAL DODGE: Just so I don’t feel so incredibly stupid if this backfires?
4/ Mackenzie standing beside Dodge.
DR. MACKENZIE: Sir, Thompson’s dragged the symbiote back into his control around SPIDER-MAN. He can do this.
DR. MACKENZIE: I’d bet my life on it.
Page 3
1/ Venom and Carnage in a hold. Venom has Carnage’s wrists in his grip, but Carnage has tendrils spurting out from his neck and shooting toward Venom’s face.
CARNAGE: It’s been SO LONG pops!
CARNAGE: Ya got RUSTY
2/ Venom jumping back from Carnage’s tendrils which are shaped like fishhooks and wine bottle openers.
VENOM: GRRRR…
CARNAGE: Ya got FERAL too
CARNAGE: Like a BIG, BAD DOG.
CAPTION(Venom): I’m starting to see why the symbiote will stop at nothing to kill him.
3/ Carnage’s fists turning into axes.
CARNAGE: I’ve been killin dogs since I was a TINY LIL BOY!
CARNAGE: Been killin lil boys since the same age too
CARNAGE: Heh heh (small text)
4/ Venom picking up a parked car by the front end, intending to toss it at Carnage.
CARNAGE: Brock whats’sa matter?
CARNAGE: Why aren’tcha talkin to me?
VENOM: NNOOTTT…
CAPTION(Venom): That’s right. I agree with you.
Page 4
1/ Venom tossing the car at Carnage. Carnage is bracing himself with his axe hands, he could be yelling “BRING IT ON” at the car given his pose.
VENOM: BROCK!!
CARNAGE: WHAT?!
CAPTION(Venom): I agree with you. I want to kill him too.
2/ Back view of Venom snarling and crouched over partially, the car is stopping in mid-toss, as if Carnage grabbed it from the front.
CAPTION(Venom): I want to kill Carnage too.
CAPTION(Venom): Mission’s not important?
CAPTION(Venom): Of course it is. But Carnage has to die. But listen, listen to me--
CARNAGE: I’M SORRY…
3/ Carnage tossing the car aside, looking REALLY ticked off.
CARNAGE: DID YOU SAY THAT YER NOT EDDIE BROCK?!
CAPTION(Venom): Every time I try to reason myself back into control, Carnage starts to rant.
CAPTION(Venom): KILL CARNAGE WANT CARNAGE DEAD.
4/ Carnage lunging toward Venom, his arms having axes sprouting from them.
CARNAGE: IF YER NOT EDDIE, THEN WHO THE @#%# ARE YA?!
Page 5
1/ Venom kicking his legs up and catching Carnage in the gut with them, tossing Carnage over him.
SFX: WHUD
CARNAGE: GRAWRR
VENOM: Just a soldier!
CAPTION(Venom): Managed to get something through. Good.
2/ Carnage landing upside down on his head on the concrete.
CARNAGE: AGGH!!
SFX: WHAM
CAPTION(Venom): Listen to me.
3/ Venom standing and glaring in Carnage’s direction.
CAPTION(Venom): We need to go now.
CAPTION(Venom): I promise you, we will hunt down and kill Carnage in the most painful way possible. But not now. Right now we need to--
4/ Carnage getting up, snarling.
CARNAGE: That was good
CARNAGE: Fer a FAKE
CAPTION(Venom): KILL.
CAPTION(Venom): Dammit.
Page 6
1/ Spider-man slamming into a fire hydrant with brutal results.
SFX: BSHHH
SPIDER-MAN: AGH!
CAPTION(Spider-man): This is insane.
2/ Wide shot of Monster. He’s headbutting Malice in the face, while tendrils are ripping out from his back and strangling Scream. Toxin is jumping down at him from above, trying to slam his fists down. Toxin is in his venom-ish form.
CAPTION(Spider-man): He’s so strong.
3/ Monster glaring up and grabbing Toxin’s wrists with his arm.
NO DIALOGUE
4/ Same shot, but with Monster slamming Toxin down into the ground, face first.
SFX: WHAM
MONSTER: YOU.
Page 7
1/ Underfoot view of Monster. Monster is grabbing down at us (Toxin).
MONSTER: You ate my brain.
2/ Side view of Monster holding Toxin up by his throat, Toxin grabbing at his arm and trying to claw it.
TOXIN: GRRRR…
MONSTER: You’re the next on my list.
3/ Back view of Monster, Malice is in the background, lashing her finger-tendrils out toward Monster.
MALICE: LET HIM GO!!
Page 8
1/ Monster snarling and turning his head so that the tendrils coming out of his back throw Scream at us (off panel at Malice).
MONSTER: Oh, you’re next.
2/ Scream’s body being thrown into Malice, colliding brutally.
SFX: WHAM
3/ Wide shot of the entire scene. Monster holding Toxin up, Scream and Malice tossed down aside some rubble.
MONSTER: I’m going to take my time with you, Toxin.
4/ Close up of Monster’s face.
MONSTER: My friends will take care of yours.
Page 9
1/ Splash page. Monster is still holding Toxin up. Toxin is looking up and off panel. Iron Symbiotes are raining down from the sky (OP), surrounding the area.
SFX: RRRRRR
MONSTER: You’ve met them.
SPIDER-MAN(OP): PATRICK!!
Page 10
1/ Back view of Spider-man standing up with the broken fire hydrant behind him spurting water. Two Iron Riots stand in front of him, snarling and mimicking human action by “cracking” their knuckles.
SPIDER-MAN: Oh, poop…
2/ Monster tossing Toxin upward and off panel.
MONSTER: This is going to be FUN.
3/ Aerial view as a group of Iron Agony surround Malice and Scream, aiming down at them.
SFX: CH-CHK
SFX: CH-CHK
SFX: CH-CHK
MALICE: GRRRR….
CAPTION(Gina): Hate them. Hate them all so much. Patrick calmed us down, let us take control of ourself again. But he needs us.
4/ Close up of Eddie’s face.
NO DIALOGUE
Page 11
1/ Carnage slashing Venom across the chest with his blade tendrils.
SFX: CHK
CARNAGE: “A SOLDIER” EH?!
CARNAGE: SOME LIL FRIGGIN FIRE ANT
CAPTION(Venom): KILL HIM!
CAPTION(Venom): LISTEN TO ME!
2/ Side view, Venom tries to grab Carnage’s wrist to stop the assault of slashes, but misses.
CARANGE: SOME FRIGGIN PAWN
CARNAGE: SOME FRIGGIN LOSER
CAPTION(Venom): MURDER!
CAPTION(Venom): STOP!
3/ Carnage slashing Venom across the chest again, different direction, pushing him backward.
SFX: CHK
CARNAGE: STUPID FRIGGIN JERK
CARNAGE: WHERE’S BROCK?! WHERE’S POPS?!
CAPTION(Venom): EDDIE DEAD! KILL CARNAGE FOR EDDIE!!
CAPTION(Venom): I KNOW!!!
4/ Carnage’s face, eyes widened
CARNAGE: That ORWELL @#%^#er said he killed him I remember
Page 12
1/ Venom punching Carnage in the face.
SFX: WHAM
CARNAGE: ARGG!
2/ Carnage glaring up from the punch.
CARNAGE: I’ll kill HIM right after YOU
CARNAGE: You big friggin fake
3/ Venom’s face, absolute rage. But it’s returning to the Agent Venom guise.
VENOM: ENOUGH.
CAPTION(Venom): Give me back control RIGHT NOW, or I’m done.
4/ Standoff view of Venom and Carnage. Venom is half Agent Venom and half regular.
CAPTION(Venom): That’s right. I know you now. You have an oddly human fear.
CAPTION(Venom): A fear of rejection. You already showed me once that you don’t want another host. That you want ME.
CAPTION(Venom): If you don’t give me back control, so help me, I will rip my way out of you and never come back.
5/ Carnage, glaring and impatient, ready to brawl.
CARNAGE: Hello?
CARNAGE: Anyone there?
CAPTION(Venom): My gamble works. It gives me an apology. Begs me to understand what Carnage meant to Eddie. How they hated him.
CAPTION(Venom): I can relate.
Page 13
1/ AGENT VENOM, back in a glorious splash page, giving Carnage a great, big right cross to the jaw.
SFX: WHAM
VENOM: Shut your f***ing mouth.
Page 14
1/ Toxin flying through an abandoned apartment, rolling past the kitchen (and through a glass table), brutal debris everywhere, as he’s flown in through a hole in the wall.
CAPTION(Patrick): Last time we fought, we were an animal.
2/ Front view of the hole in the wall, Monster ripping through it.
CAPTION(Patrick): Now he’s worse than ever, and even though I’m trying my best—we just can’t seem to even hurt him. He’s pumped up more than ever.
CAPTION(Patrick): The worst part is that Gina’s out there, fighting these things and trying to stay sane…
3/ Front view of the Iron Agony squad, their guns firing.
CAPTION(Patrick): And I can’t help her.
SFX: BRAKA BRAKA BLAM BLAM
4/ Malice standing over Scream, her forearms are large tendril-shields, the bullets bouncing off of them.
CAPTION(Gina): Gina can take care of herself.
5/ Side view, Monster standing over Toxin. Toxin’s eyes are especially wide.
TOXIN: GINA?!
CAPTION(Gina): That’s right.
CAPTION(Toxin): We’re one symbiote. We share a telepathic bond. She must have just discovered it, picked up your signal.
Page 15
1/ Monster kicking Toxin in the chest, throwing him backward.
SFX: WHAM
TOXIN: GRAWR!!
CAPTION(Gina): Focus on YOU, Pat.
CAPTION(Gina): All those times I worried about you when you were on patrol—let’s stop that. Stop the worrying.
2/ Malice ripping one of the guns off of one of the Iron Agony, the others are firing at that Iron Agony (they’re not very bright), brutally.
SFX: WHRRRKK
SFX: BRAKA BRAKA BLAM BLAM BLAM
CAPTION(Gina): Let’s stop and just LIVE THROUGH THIS.
3/ Close up of Scream, she’s waking up.
SCREAM: >Coff coff<
CAPTION(Jenna): Must have knocked us out… holy hell…
4/ Back view of Scream starting to get up, Malice literally taking down four Iron Symbiotes at once via tendrils. Spider-man’s also there, trying to web them up as best he can.
SPIDER-MAN: So I can’t touch these things?
MALICE: They’re COVERED in something ten times worse than CYANIDE, so no!
SPIDER-MAN: I MISS PUNCHES!!!
Page 16
1/ Toxin slamming out of the apartment and into a hallway.
SFX: BRRRKKKSSHHH
CAPTION(Pat): Alright Gina. I’ll make sure we do our best.
2/ Toxin looking up as Monster jumps out of the hallway toward him.
CAPTION(Gina): For Edward.
TOXIN: For Edward.
MONSTER: GRAWRRR!!!
3/ Scream tackling down an Iron Lasher, using her hair to impale into the front of it.
SCREAM: You guys TRIED THIS yet?!
4/ Malice looking over from punching an Iron Riot in the face (and THROUGH the face).
SFX: CHRRRKKK
MALICE: What?
5/ Front view of Scream, she’s sucking up the super-venom off of the Iron Symbiote, and its visible as her hair starts to grow out more.
SCREAM: DRAINING them!
Page 17
1/ Spider-man looking at the two from above, horrified as he’s webbing down at an Iron Riot that’s climbing up toward him.
SPIDER-MAN: I don’t think you should do that!
MALICE: That happened to us earlier, we’re not doing it again. We were losing control!
SCREAM: But it’s soooo goooooood….
2/ Back view of Scream, her hair erupting out.
SCREAM: Mmmm…
3/ Malice jumping over a storm of hair, which mutilates the Iron Symbiote she was just working on.
MALICE: HEY!
4/ Underfoot view of Spider-man, looking down, perched on a ledge, surprised.
SPIDER-MAN: Wow…
Page 18
1/ The entire scene, all the Iron Symbiotes flattened, Scream standing on an Iron Lasher that’s fallen. Malice is perched on a streetlight, glaring down.
SCREAM: It’s like we were on a high…
MALICE: We need to WORK TOGETHER, not just flatten each other.
2/ Scream looking up at Malice. Scream’s hair is way grown out, but it’s starting to return to normal.
SCREAM: Sorry, sorry… we have a bit of an addictive personality.
3/ Spider-man hanging upside down via webline, looking at Scream.
SPIDER-MAN: No, really?
4/ Malice walking toward Scream and Spider-man.
MALICE: We need to get to Toxin!!
MALICE: We need to HELP HIM!
Page 19
1/ Malice leading the way as the trio webslings upward.
SFX: THWIP
SFX: SLISH
SFX: THWISH
CAPTION(Gina): Pat! Where are you?!
2/ Close up of Toxin, with Monster’s hand on his face, slamming him hard into pavement. Patrick’s eyes are visible beyond the symbiotic eyes.
CAPTION(Pat): Gina… I’m sorry…
3/ Pan out to show Monster standing over Toxin, a massive crater centered around Toxin’s head.
CAPTION(Pat): For ever leaving you because of this thing… for lying…
CAPTION(Pat): And for staying… for killing Edward…. my fault… for sticking around…
CAPTION(Gina): Don’t say that! Nevermind telling us where you are—it’s like we can FEEL it--
MONSTER: How does it FEEL, Toxin?
4/ Back view of the trio of Spider-man, Malice, and Scream webslinging over a rooftop, and looking down at a street – Monster is down there with Toxin.
MALICE: LET HIM GO!!!
5/ Monster looking up and off panel with a dark grin.
MONSTER: No.
Page 20
1/ Agent Venom kicking Carnage in the face, using a fighting style akin to Spider-man rather than a monster like Venom.
SFX: WHAK
CARNAGE: GYAGHH!
VENOM: I really wish I had the time to put you down.
2/ Carnage backing up, his fingers forming into claws. Carnage’s metal legs are showing briefly as the tendrils flurry.
CARNAGE: Why not? I got time ALL THE TIME to put things down
CARNAGE: Puppies
CARNAGE: KIDS
CARNAGE: THE WORLD!!
3/ Close up of Agent Venom taking a knife out from a strap on his side.
VENOM: I know. I was hiding from your big city-wide rampage all that time ago. You killed a lot of people. Made a lot of people kill each other.
VENOM: You’re just cancer. Living and breathing.
4/ Agent Venom stabbing the knife into Carnage’s right leg, headbutting him in the face.
SFX: CHKKK
CARNAGE: GRRAWWRRR!!!!
5/ Agent Venom’s face.
VENOM: Good prosthetics. Real good. I noticed ‘em when you flared your tendrils up, saw the metal.
VENOM: I’d have to look into something like that. If I didn’t already have something better, that is.
Page 21
1/ Carnage, leaning on his left leg, in visible pain.
CARNAGE: MY LEG
AGENT VENOM(OP): Carbonadium knife, scumbag. Guess I got lucky and struck a nerve wire, huh?
2/ Agent Venom, glaring at Carnage. He’s taking out a second knife, exactly the same as the first.
CARNAGE: I AM DEATH INCARNATE
CARNAGE: INSANITY PERSONIFIED
CARNAGE: I’m CARNAGE and I don’t NEED NO FRIGGIN LEGS!!!!
3/ Close up of Agent Venom’s face, glaring.
VENOM: Good. Then you won’t mind--
4/ Close up of Agent Venom’s hand with the knife. His hand is free, the knife is being handled by a tendril that’s branching off from his wrist. It’s going at the regular speed that his hand would go, so it’s basically the same, but freeing up his hand.
VENOM: -- If I do--
5/ Carnage looking down as the knife hits his left leg in the same spot.
VENOM: THIS!!
SFX: CHK
CARNAGE: GRAWWR!!
Page 22
1/ Splash page. Carnage has fallen. … Literally. He’s fallen on his belly and he’s looking up and groveling. Agent Venom is walking away. It’s a parody of the famous “Spider-man: NO MORE!” image, where Peter Parker walks away from a Spider-man costume in a trash can. Except there’s no trash can, just a beaten Carnage and a ravaged New York City. Carnage is stretching tendrils out after him, trying to reach him of course.
CARNAGE: COME BACK HERE
CARNAGE: DON’T YOU FRIGGIN LEAVE
CARNAGE: I WAS... I WAS WINNING…
CARNAGE: I WAS WINNING!!!!
CAPTION(Agent Venom): He’s probably never tried just walking with tendrils. Figure it’ll take a while for him to get used to it and get up again.
Page 23
1/ Front view of Agent Venom, running as fast as he can. He’s got his fingers to his ear, to focus on his comm link.
VENOM: Kate, this is Agent Venom. Repeat, this is Agent Venom. You copy?
KATE(via comm): Agent Venom! You made it!
VENOM: It wasn’t easy. I’m close to the docks.
2/ Inside of the Project Rebirth 2.0 facility, Kate and Dr. Mackenzie and General Dodge sit in the control room, relieved.
KATE: Good! Make it count, Agent Venom! You’ve got an hour and a half until New York City is declared an official warzone and more lives are put on the line!
VENOM: So no pressure then? Got it.
3/ General Dodge’s face.
GENERAL DODGE: Rip the entire place apart.
3/ Agent Venom’s suit changes from his current look into a more “underwater” design. Aside from the spider and eyes, his body looks like a big wetsuit, and his feet have become like fins, and his hands are now webbed. He’s in the water, after just diving in, bubbles all around him.
VENOM: Sir, yes sir.
--
I MAKE NO MONEY - I INVENTED IRON SYMBIOTES
1/ We get a close up of General Dodge’s black sunglasses. The reflections that show off of them are vital scans of Agent Venom. The poses are just Agent Venom standing and facing to the side, and standing and facing forward (like a prison line up shot, but medical – vital signs to the side, heart rate, etc). All the readings are off the charts and in the red, and there’s a red glow on Dodge’s face from the machines. Dodge is not pleased.
GENERAL DODGE: Dr. Mackenzie, you have about five seconds to explain this to me.
2/ Pan out to show General Dodge standing there, Dr. Mackenzie at his side holding a high tech iPad-ish device, panicking as he analyzes all the data he can.
DR. MACKENZIE: W-well sir, it appears that Agent Thompson is no longer in control of the--
3/ Close up of Dodge. He’s gritting his teeth in frustration and if we could hear him, you’d think he was boiling inside.
GENERAL DODGE: I’m. Aware. Of. That.
4/ Dr. Mackenzie’s face, he’s looking up and nervous.
DR. MACKENZIE: Carnage is the symbiote’s offspring, and apparently their race hates their offspring, because—well, they do. And somehow, the symbiote’s literally CRUSHED the micro-bots we installed as a new killswitch, and now--
GENERAL DODGE(OP): My Agent Venom is trying to murder Carnage, when he SHOULD be stopping this disaster.
DR. MACKENZIE: … Yes, sir.
Page 2
1/ Profile view of General Dodge.
GENERAL DODGE: I got a call a few minutes ago, Mackenzie.
GENERAL DODGE: If Thompson doesn’t get control of himself in the next two hours—if we don’t get our butts in gear and shut down this attack, troops will be called in. More lives will be lost in the crossfire.
2/ Same.
GENERAL DODGE: I had to assure the president that we could handle this.
GENERAL DODGE: …
3/ Front view of Dodge, rubbing his forehead.
GENERAL DODGE: I’ve placed my faith in Thompson. Can you please tell me you’d do the same, Mackenzie?
GENERAL DODGE: Just so I don’t feel so incredibly stupid if this backfires?
4/ Mackenzie standing beside Dodge.
DR. MACKENZIE: Sir, Thompson’s dragged the symbiote back into his control around SPIDER-MAN. He can do this.
DR. MACKENZIE: I’d bet my life on it.
Page 3
1/ Venom and Carnage in a hold. Venom has Carnage’s wrists in his grip, but Carnage has tendrils spurting out from his neck and shooting toward Venom’s face.
CARNAGE: It’s been SO LONG pops!
CARNAGE: Ya got RUSTY
2/ Venom jumping back from Carnage’s tendrils which are shaped like fishhooks and wine bottle openers.
VENOM: GRRRR…
CARNAGE: Ya got FERAL too
CARNAGE: Like a BIG, BAD DOG.
CAPTION(Venom): I’m starting to see why the symbiote will stop at nothing to kill him.
3/ Carnage’s fists turning into axes.
CARNAGE: I’ve been killin dogs since I was a TINY LIL BOY!
CARNAGE: Been killin lil boys since the same age too
CARNAGE: Heh heh (small text)
4/ Venom picking up a parked car by the front end, intending to toss it at Carnage.
CARNAGE: Brock whats’sa matter?
CARNAGE: Why aren’tcha talkin to me?
VENOM: NNOOTTT…
CAPTION(Venom): That’s right. I agree with you.
Page 4
1/ Venom tossing the car at Carnage. Carnage is bracing himself with his axe hands, he could be yelling “BRING IT ON” at the car given his pose.
VENOM: BROCK!!
CARNAGE: WHAT?!
CAPTION(Venom): I agree with you. I want to kill him too.
2/ Back view of Venom snarling and crouched over partially, the car is stopping in mid-toss, as if Carnage grabbed it from the front.
CAPTION(Venom): I want to kill Carnage too.
CAPTION(Venom): Mission’s not important?
CAPTION(Venom): Of course it is. But Carnage has to die. But listen, listen to me--
CARNAGE: I’M SORRY…
3/ Carnage tossing the car aside, looking REALLY ticked off.
CARNAGE: DID YOU SAY THAT YER NOT EDDIE BROCK?!
CAPTION(Venom): Every time I try to reason myself back into control, Carnage starts to rant.
CAPTION(Venom): KILL CARNAGE WANT CARNAGE DEAD.
4/ Carnage lunging toward Venom, his arms having axes sprouting from them.
CARNAGE: IF YER NOT EDDIE, THEN WHO THE @#%# ARE YA?!
Page 5
1/ Venom kicking his legs up and catching Carnage in the gut with them, tossing Carnage over him.
SFX: WHUD
CARNAGE: GRAWRR
VENOM: Just a soldier!
CAPTION(Venom): Managed to get something through. Good.
2/ Carnage landing upside down on his head on the concrete.
CARNAGE: AGGH!!
SFX: WHAM
CAPTION(Venom): Listen to me.
3/ Venom standing and glaring in Carnage’s direction.
CAPTION(Venom): We need to go now.
CAPTION(Venom): I promise you, we will hunt down and kill Carnage in the most painful way possible. But not now. Right now we need to--
4/ Carnage getting up, snarling.
CARNAGE: That was good
CARNAGE: Fer a FAKE
CAPTION(Venom): KILL.
CAPTION(Venom): Dammit.
Page 6
1/ Spider-man slamming into a fire hydrant with brutal results.
SFX: BSHHH
SPIDER-MAN: AGH!
CAPTION(Spider-man): This is insane.
2/ Wide shot of Monster. He’s headbutting Malice in the face, while tendrils are ripping out from his back and strangling Scream. Toxin is jumping down at him from above, trying to slam his fists down. Toxin is in his venom-ish form.
CAPTION(Spider-man): He’s so strong.
3/ Monster glaring up and grabbing Toxin’s wrists with his arm.
NO DIALOGUE
4/ Same shot, but with Monster slamming Toxin down into the ground, face first.
SFX: WHAM
MONSTER: YOU.
Page 7
1/ Underfoot view of Monster. Monster is grabbing down at us (Toxin).
MONSTER: You ate my brain.
2/ Side view of Monster holding Toxin up by his throat, Toxin grabbing at his arm and trying to claw it.
TOXIN: GRRRR…
MONSTER: You’re the next on my list.
3/ Back view of Monster, Malice is in the background, lashing her finger-tendrils out toward Monster.
MALICE: LET HIM GO!!
Page 8
1/ Monster snarling and turning his head so that the tendrils coming out of his back throw Scream at us (off panel at Malice).
MONSTER: Oh, you’re next.
2/ Scream’s body being thrown into Malice, colliding brutally.
SFX: WHAM
3/ Wide shot of the entire scene. Monster holding Toxin up, Scream and Malice tossed down aside some rubble.
MONSTER: I’m going to take my time with you, Toxin.
4/ Close up of Monster’s face.
MONSTER: My friends will take care of yours.
Page 9
1/ Splash page. Monster is still holding Toxin up. Toxin is looking up and off panel. Iron Symbiotes are raining down from the sky (OP), surrounding the area.
SFX: RRRRRR
MONSTER: You’ve met them.
SPIDER-MAN(OP): PATRICK!!
Page 10
1/ Back view of Spider-man standing up with the broken fire hydrant behind him spurting water. Two Iron Riots stand in front of him, snarling and mimicking human action by “cracking” their knuckles.
SPIDER-MAN: Oh, poop…
2/ Monster tossing Toxin upward and off panel.
MONSTER: This is going to be FUN.
3/ Aerial view as a group of Iron Agony surround Malice and Scream, aiming down at them.
SFX: CH-CHK
SFX: CH-CHK
SFX: CH-CHK
MALICE: GRRRR….
CAPTION(Gina): Hate them. Hate them all so much. Patrick calmed us down, let us take control of ourself again. But he needs us.
4/ Close up of Eddie’s face.
NO DIALOGUE
Page 11
1/ Carnage slashing Venom across the chest with his blade tendrils.
SFX: CHK
CARNAGE: “A SOLDIER” EH?!
CARNAGE: SOME LIL FRIGGIN FIRE ANT
CAPTION(Venom): KILL HIM!
CAPTION(Venom): LISTEN TO ME!
2/ Side view, Venom tries to grab Carnage’s wrist to stop the assault of slashes, but misses.
CARANGE: SOME FRIGGIN PAWN
CARNAGE: SOME FRIGGIN LOSER
CAPTION(Venom): MURDER!
CAPTION(Venom): STOP!
3/ Carnage slashing Venom across the chest again, different direction, pushing him backward.
SFX: CHK
CARNAGE: STUPID FRIGGIN JERK
CARNAGE: WHERE’S BROCK?! WHERE’S POPS?!
CAPTION(Venom): EDDIE DEAD! KILL CARNAGE FOR EDDIE!!
CAPTION(Venom): I KNOW!!!
4/ Carnage’s face, eyes widened
CARNAGE: That ORWELL @#%^#er said he killed him I remember
Page 12
1/ Venom punching Carnage in the face.
SFX: WHAM
CARNAGE: ARGG!
2/ Carnage glaring up from the punch.
CARNAGE: I’ll kill HIM right after YOU
CARNAGE: You big friggin fake
3/ Venom’s face, absolute rage. But it’s returning to the Agent Venom guise.
VENOM: ENOUGH.
CAPTION(Venom): Give me back control RIGHT NOW, or I’m done.
4/ Standoff view of Venom and Carnage. Venom is half Agent Venom and half regular.
CAPTION(Venom): That’s right. I know you now. You have an oddly human fear.
CAPTION(Venom): A fear of rejection. You already showed me once that you don’t want another host. That you want ME.
CAPTION(Venom): If you don’t give me back control, so help me, I will rip my way out of you and never come back.
5/ Carnage, glaring and impatient, ready to brawl.
CARNAGE: Hello?
CARNAGE: Anyone there?
CAPTION(Venom): My gamble works. It gives me an apology. Begs me to understand what Carnage meant to Eddie. How they hated him.
CAPTION(Venom): I can relate.
Page 13
1/ AGENT VENOM, back in a glorious splash page, giving Carnage a great, big right cross to the jaw.
SFX: WHAM
VENOM: Shut your f***ing mouth.
Page 14
1/ Toxin flying through an abandoned apartment, rolling past the kitchen (and through a glass table), brutal debris everywhere, as he’s flown in through a hole in the wall.
CAPTION(Patrick): Last time we fought, we were an animal.
2/ Front view of the hole in the wall, Monster ripping through it.
CAPTION(Patrick): Now he’s worse than ever, and even though I’m trying my best—we just can’t seem to even hurt him. He’s pumped up more than ever.
CAPTION(Patrick): The worst part is that Gina’s out there, fighting these things and trying to stay sane…
3/ Front view of the Iron Agony squad, their guns firing.
CAPTION(Patrick): And I can’t help her.
SFX: BRAKA BRAKA BLAM BLAM
4/ Malice standing over Scream, her forearms are large tendril-shields, the bullets bouncing off of them.
CAPTION(Gina): Gina can take care of herself.
5/ Side view, Monster standing over Toxin. Toxin’s eyes are especially wide.
TOXIN: GINA?!
CAPTION(Gina): That’s right.
CAPTION(Toxin): We’re one symbiote. We share a telepathic bond. She must have just discovered it, picked up your signal.
Page 15
1/ Monster kicking Toxin in the chest, throwing him backward.
SFX: WHAM
TOXIN: GRAWR!!
CAPTION(Gina): Focus on YOU, Pat.
CAPTION(Gina): All those times I worried about you when you were on patrol—let’s stop that. Stop the worrying.
2/ Malice ripping one of the guns off of one of the Iron Agony, the others are firing at that Iron Agony (they’re not very bright), brutally.
SFX: WHRRRKK
SFX: BRAKA BRAKA BLAM BLAM BLAM
CAPTION(Gina): Let’s stop and just LIVE THROUGH THIS.
3/ Close up of Scream, she’s waking up.
SCREAM: >Coff coff<
CAPTION(Jenna): Must have knocked us out… holy hell…
4/ Back view of Scream starting to get up, Malice literally taking down four Iron Symbiotes at once via tendrils. Spider-man’s also there, trying to web them up as best he can.
SPIDER-MAN: So I can’t touch these things?
MALICE: They’re COVERED in something ten times worse than CYANIDE, so no!
SPIDER-MAN: I MISS PUNCHES!!!
Page 16
1/ Toxin slamming out of the apartment and into a hallway.
SFX: BRRRKKKSSHHH
CAPTION(Pat): Alright Gina. I’ll make sure we do our best.
2/ Toxin looking up as Monster jumps out of the hallway toward him.
CAPTION(Gina): For Edward.
TOXIN: For Edward.
MONSTER: GRAWRRR!!!
3/ Scream tackling down an Iron Lasher, using her hair to impale into the front of it.
SCREAM: You guys TRIED THIS yet?!
4/ Malice looking over from punching an Iron Riot in the face (and THROUGH the face).
SFX: CHRRRKKK
MALICE: What?
5/ Front view of Scream, she’s sucking up the super-venom off of the Iron Symbiote, and its visible as her hair starts to grow out more.
SCREAM: DRAINING them!
Page 17
1/ Spider-man looking at the two from above, horrified as he’s webbing down at an Iron Riot that’s climbing up toward him.
SPIDER-MAN: I don’t think you should do that!
MALICE: That happened to us earlier, we’re not doing it again. We were losing control!
SCREAM: But it’s soooo goooooood….
2/ Back view of Scream, her hair erupting out.
SCREAM: Mmmm…
3/ Malice jumping over a storm of hair, which mutilates the Iron Symbiote she was just working on.
MALICE: HEY!
4/ Underfoot view of Spider-man, looking down, perched on a ledge, surprised.
SPIDER-MAN: Wow…
Page 18
1/ The entire scene, all the Iron Symbiotes flattened, Scream standing on an Iron Lasher that’s fallen. Malice is perched on a streetlight, glaring down.
SCREAM: It’s like we were on a high…
MALICE: We need to WORK TOGETHER, not just flatten each other.
2/ Scream looking up at Malice. Scream’s hair is way grown out, but it’s starting to return to normal.
SCREAM: Sorry, sorry… we have a bit of an addictive personality.
3/ Spider-man hanging upside down via webline, looking at Scream.
SPIDER-MAN: No, really?
4/ Malice walking toward Scream and Spider-man.
MALICE: We need to get to Toxin!!
MALICE: We need to HELP HIM!
Page 19
1/ Malice leading the way as the trio webslings upward.
SFX: THWIP
SFX: SLISH
SFX: THWISH
CAPTION(Gina): Pat! Where are you?!
2/ Close up of Toxin, with Monster’s hand on his face, slamming him hard into pavement. Patrick’s eyes are visible beyond the symbiotic eyes.
CAPTION(Pat): Gina… I’m sorry…
3/ Pan out to show Monster standing over Toxin, a massive crater centered around Toxin’s head.
CAPTION(Pat): For ever leaving you because of this thing… for lying…
CAPTION(Pat): And for staying… for killing Edward…. my fault… for sticking around…
CAPTION(Gina): Don’t say that! Nevermind telling us where you are—it’s like we can FEEL it--
MONSTER: How does it FEEL, Toxin?
4/ Back view of the trio of Spider-man, Malice, and Scream webslinging over a rooftop, and looking down at a street – Monster is down there with Toxin.
MALICE: LET HIM GO!!!
5/ Monster looking up and off panel with a dark grin.
MONSTER: No.
Page 20
1/ Agent Venom kicking Carnage in the face, using a fighting style akin to Spider-man rather than a monster like Venom.
SFX: WHAK
CARNAGE: GYAGHH!
VENOM: I really wish I had the time to put you down.
2/ Carnage backing up, his fingers forming into claws. Carnage’s metal legs are showing briefly as the tendrils flurry.
CARNAGE: Why not? I got time ALL THE TIME to put things down
CARNAGE: Puppies
CARNAGE: KIDS
CARNAGE: THE WORLD!!
3/ Close up of Agent Venom taking a knife out from a strap on his side.
VENOM: I know. I was hiding from your big city-wide rampage all that time ago. You killed a lot of people. Made a lot of people kill each other.
VENOM: You’re just cancer. Living and breathing.
4/ Agent Venom stabbing the knife into Carnage’s right leg, headbutting him in the face.
SFX: CHKKK
CARNAGE: GRRAWWRRR!!!!
5/ Agent Venom’s face.
VENOM: Good prosthetics. Real good. I noticed ‘em when you flared your tendrils up, saw the metal.
VENOM: I’d have to look into something like that. If I didn’t already have something better, that is.
Page 21
1/ Carnage, leaning on his left leg, in visible pain.
CARNAGE: MY LEG
AGENT VENOM(OP): Carbonadium knife, scumbag. Guess I got lucky and struck a nerve wire, huh?
2/ Agent Venom, glaring at Carnage. He’s taking out a second knife, exactly the same as the first.
CARNAGE: I AM DEATH INCARNATE
CARNAGE: INSANITY PERSONIFIED
CARNAGE: I’m CARNAGE and I don’t NEED NO FRIGGIN LEGS!!!!
3/ Close up of Agent Venom’s face, glaring.
VENOM: Good. Then you won’t mind--
4/ Close up of Agent Venom’s hand with the knife. His hand is free, the knife is being handled by a tendril that’s branching off from his wrist. It’s going at the regular speed that his hand would go, so it’s basically the same, but freeing up his hand.
VENOM: -- If I do--
5/ Carnage looking down as the knife hits his left leg in the same spot.
VENOM: THIS!!
SFX: CHK
CARNAGE: GRAWWR!!
Page 22
1/ Splash page. Carnage has fallen. … Literally. He’s fallen on his belly and he’s looking up and groveling. Agent Venom is walking away. It’s a parody of the famous “Spider-man: NO MORE!” image, where Peter Parker walks away from a Spider-man costume in a trash can. Except there’s no trash can, just a beaten Carnage and a ravaged New York City. Carnage is stretching tendrils out after him, trying to reach him of course.
CARNAGE: COME BACK HERE
CARNAGE: DON’T YOU FRIGGIN LEAVE
CARNAGE: I WAS... I WAS WINNING…
CARNAGE: I WAS WINNING!!!!
CAPTION(Agent Venom): He’s probably never tried just walking with tendrils. Figure it’ll take a while for him to get used to it and get up again.
Page 23
1/ Front view of Agent Venom, running as fast as he can. He’s got his fingers to his ear, to focus on his comm link.
VENOM: Kate, this is Agent Venom. Repeat, this is Agent Venom. You copy?
KATE(via comm): Agent Venom! You made it!
VENOM: It wasn’t easy. I’m close to the docks.
2/ Inside of the Project Rebirth 2.0 facility, Kate and Dr. Mackenzie and General Dodge sit in the control room, relieved.
KATE: Good! Make it count, Agent Venom! You’ve got an hour and a half until New York City is declared an official warzone and more lives are put on the line!
VENOM: So no pressure then? Got it.
3/ General Dodge’s face.
GENERAL DODGE: Rip the entire place apart.
3/ Agent Venom’s suit changes from his current look into a more “underwater” design. Aside from the spider and eyes, his body looks like a big wetsuit, and his feet have become like fins, and his hands are now webbed. He’s in the water, after just diving in, bubbles all around him.
VENOM: Sir, yes sir.
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