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Post by nelomaxwell on Apr 23, 2011 14:39:55 GMT -5
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Post by InnerVenom123 on Apr 23, 2011 14:51:15 GMT -5
NICE! Loving the artwork and you have an interesting character! Keep it up!
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Post by nelomaxwell on Apr 23, 2011 14:59:56 GMT -5
Thanks man.
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Post by jakefury on Apr 23, 2011 15:03:38 GMT -5
very cool.
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Post by Crom-Cruach on Apr 24, 2011 7:15:38 GMT -5
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Post by Beatboks on Apr 24, 2011 20:20:39 GMT -5
You've got me, I want to read the rest Ditto looks cool Nelo |
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Post by Erik-El on Apr 24, 2011 20:47:03 GMT -5
If I may offer a critique or two. I would like to see more sense of motion. All the scenes seem a little static. Then there is the sometimes censored sometimes not censored dialogue. I would like to see some uniformity on that.
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Post by nelomaxwell on Apr 24, 2011 22:28:17 GMT -5
If I may offer a critique or two. I would like to see more sense of motion. All the scenes seem a little static. Then there is the sometimes censored sometimes not censored dialogue. I would like to see some uniformity on that. Not sure what you mean by static? It. I'm gonna clean up the censor thing I was debating whether to add swearing or not. |
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Post by Crom-Cruach on Apr 24, 2011 22:29:09 GMT -5
I like the style personally, kind of reminds me of Hellboy's
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Post by Erik-El on Apr 24, 2011 22:31:11 GMT -5
What I mean is that I do not get a lot of sense of motion. Nearly every panel, everyone is just statues. There is no "life" in their stances. IMO comic art needs to be dynamic. An exaggerated sense of motion.
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Post by nelomaxwell on Apr 24, 2011 22:34:03 GMT -5
What I mean is that I do not get a lot of sense of motion. Nearly every panel, everyone is just statues. There is no "life" in their stances. IMO comic art needs to be dynamic. An exaggerated sense of motion. You get me money for a better artist and I'll work on it. Till then That's all i can afford. I happen to dig the art myself. |
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Post by Erik-El on Apr 24, 2011 22:36:22 GMT -5
Lol fair enough. I think it does come down to personal taste but there are some constants in "successful" comic art and one of them is dynamic art (for the most part). I figured you would want someone to give it to you straight rather than just massage your balls lol.
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Post by nelomaxwell on Apr 24, 2011 22:53:52 GMT -5
Lol fair enough. I think it does come down to personal taste but there are some constants in "successful" comic art and one of them is dynamic art (for the most part). I figured you would want someone to give it to you straight rather than just massage your balls lol. I appreciate the straight talk. Really I do and I've got a number of people who dig the style of the book. All the same though it comes down to money really. |
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Post by Erik-El on Apr 24, 2011 23:47:55 GMT -5
Very true. But hey, if you talk to more people who like the art than who do not, then to hell with those that do not like it. Know your market and know what the majority of your fans want.
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Post by Admin on Apr 25, 2011 18:22:58 GMT -5
Erik: keeping it real like a boss since *insert birth year here*
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Post by Admin on Apr 25, 2011 18:27:58 GMT -5
So, can you tell us a bit about the main character?
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Post by InnerVenom123 on Apr 25, 2011 18:58:28 GMT -5
So, can you tell us a bit about the main character? This please ;D |
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Post by nelomaxwell on Apr 25, 2011 19:15:11 GMT -5
His real name is Marcus Ripley he's a reporter from Chicago. He is the current Heir to the Hierophantic entity known as the Geist (I know this name has been used but I didn't use it in the title so its okay.) The Geist entity is the Lord of Vigilance and the God of Knowledge as it pertains to solving problems and opening gate ways as it were. If you think of problems as doors in ones way. He's 25 years old and lives with his girlfriend Tea. His power allows him to remove objects from this reality and place them in others. He can also do this to people, the manifestation of his powers are known as the wings of vigilance and appear at rest in the form of a cape and later on as wings. In each feather one can see a view into every reality that has ever existed and will exist in universes reality nexus known as the House of 1000 eyes. The Geist entity has visited each of these realities and has returned with a key to each of them the key representing the knowledge he's gained from each plane. He is thus able to draw the dimensional energy from any of these realities and use it to remove the target from the reality he is in to the reality he chooses to place them in (Usually a hell dimension) this ability however has exemptions. The Hierophants in my universe are based on the Supreme mathematics and supreme alphabet from the Afrocentric group the Nation of Gods and Earths.
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Post by nelomaxwell on Apr 26, 2011 9:28:31 GMT -5
At some point I'm gonna put up a glossary.
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Post by NorCalCO on Apr 27, 2011 1:38:42 GMT -5
Looks good, looking forward to seeing some more pages.
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