Post by InnerVenom123 on May 1, 2011 17:19:07 GMT -5
(That's right! InnerVenom123 is making a comic starring symbiote characters! Surely it will be a lovely thing to behold, no?
Well, anyway. I'm first making this prelude thingy. A #0 issue. I don't think I'll have this one drawn, and I'll just keep it as a script. The main story is what I want drawn above all else. I think I already have an artist for the book, but idk. We'll see.
)
Random FYI: there are new characters. They are somewhat parodies of everything we all loved and hated about the 90s.
Oh, and I don't own any of these characters(Except the ones I made), no profit made, yadda yadda
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"SYMBIOTE" - #0
PAGE 1
Panel 1: Show a hospital room, with a bald man sitting in a bed upright reading a book. (Curtains on the windows are shut, door's closed - he's a total shut-in in here by the looks of it)
The man is ORWELL TAYLOR and he's reading "The Art Of War".
CAPTION(Orwell's inner thoughts): This book...
Panel 2: Show a row of well trained soldiers standing at attention. Among them is HUGH TAYLOR, the son of Orwell, who Eddie Brock (Venom at the time) killed to escape from the federal prison known as THE VAULT (see: Amazing Spider-man #315)
CAPTION(Orwell): It reminds me of my son.
CAPTION(Orwell): Of all his accomplishments in the military.
Panel 3: Show Orwell in the process of putting a suit of armor on(Think the Iron Man movie), it is SENTRY's (character from Venom: Lethal Protector) armor.
PAGE 2
Panel 1: Show a panel of Venom suffocating Hugh, as Orwell imagines it (compared to the actual scene in the comics, it's more brutal and vicious)
CAPTION(Orwell): And how all of that was taken from him.
Panel 2: Show Orwell flying in the Sentry armor in a different flashback. The armor is fritzing, shooting off sparks - it looks like it's going to crash.
CAPTION(Orwell): And how my world fell apart.
Panel 3: Show Orwell in the Sentry armor crash into a building.
CAPTION(Orwell): Twice.
Panel 4: Close up of Orwell's face.
CAPTION(Orwell): My name is Orwell Taylor.
CAPTION(Orwell): I once was the leader of a team called THE JURY.
CAPTION(Orwell): Until they were lost. And I tried to replace them by myself.
PAGE 3
Panel 1: Show THE JURY team being taken away into custody. Flashback again, obviously.
Panel 2: Show Orwell crawling out of the broken Sentry armor, bleeding from wreckage all around him in a pile of rubble. The rubble pile is in the street, he hit the pavement of a busy intersection. Cars are stopped all around him.
Panel 3: Our view is from Orwell's perspective, he's watching TV.
CAPTION(Orwell): And thus, I lost all movement from the waist down.
CAPTION(Orwell): At the very least... I take solace in the fact that Venom was captured by the government. Forced to be their slave.
Panel 4: The TV shows a news report of Anti-Venom fighting the Thunderbolts (See: Spider-man New Ways To Die).
TV REPORTER: The white Venom is former host to the Venom symbiote, EDDIE BROCK.
TV REPORTER: Suspect should be considered armed and dangerous, according to authorities.
Page 4
Panel 1: Orwell's face. He's very, very shocked - and angry.
ORWELL: NO! NO NO NO! HE'S ALIVE?!
ORWELL: HE KILLED HIMSELF! I HEARD IT! HE JUMPED OUT OF A WINDOW-- DIDN'T HE?!
Panel 2: View of the room as Orwell grabs his head with his hands and screams.
ORWELL: Wait-- that was just a rumor-- THAT'S RIGHT, HE SURVIVED!
ORWELL: HE SURVIVED AND HE'S POWERED AGAIN!?
Panel 3: View of Orwell's face. He's crying a little bit, and he has a scary look in his eyes. He's so angry he probably can't see straight.
CAPTION(Orwell): This ... this will not stand.
Panel 4: Show Orwell grabbing a cell phone from his bedside.
CAPTION(Orwell): I have ONE thing left in my life.
CAPTION(Orwell): Wealth.
Page 5
Panel 1: Show a warehouse in a dirty, urban slum area.
CAPTION: “THE SAFEHOUSE”, HOME OF VLADIMIR ALEKSEEV
Panel 2: Show the inside of a large room. There are shelves all over the place, dirty, housing weapons of all kinds. Vladimir (black long hair, beard – wearing engineer clothes) is sitting on a work bench, loading up a large, not-realistic-but-still-awesome laser canon type of gun.
Panel 3: Show from behind the man, there are several men in black suits and sunglasses approaching him. Four to be exact. The middle most one is a blonde man, he is the tallest and the leader. The rest are black haired and pretty forgettable on appearance. The blonde guy looks like someone not to be messed with. He’ll be called “HEAD SUIT”
HEAD SUIT: Vladimir Alekseev. It’s time for your comeback tour.
Panel 4: Show the man smiling.
VLADIMIR: It is about time.
Page 6
Panel 1: Show a sunny, suburban neighborhood – a cul-de-sac. There’s a young man (19 years), blonde, muscular(think Peter Parker in the 90s cartoon) - practicing with two big, professional looking swords (katatanas) and slicing up targets laid out outside.
CAPTION: SAN FRANCISCO – HOME OF DANNY DANGERFIELD
Panel 2: Show from behind Danny, the same group of men in suits. Along with Vladimir, walking toward him.
Panel 3: Vladimir smiles at the targets laid out around the place. They are effigies of several well known mutants (WOLVERINE, EMMA FROST, CYCLOPS – ETC)
Panel 4: The HEAD SUIT holds up a paper, a contract of some sort.
HEAD SUIT: Mr. Dangerfield, it’s time.
Page 7
Panel 1: Close up of Danny smiling. He has a set of blades forming literally out of his arms, as if he merged them into his flesh.
DANNY: Awesome. ‘Bout time you suits showed up!
Panel 2: Show Danny grabbing a blade and pulling it.
Panel 3: Show the blade leave his flesh without a scratch. Vladimir is impressed.
VLADIMIR: Amazing.
DANNY: The perks of the X-gene, m’good man.
Panel 4: Side shot of the bunch of them leaving. They are walking toward a black helicopter.
Page 8
Panel 1: Show the bunch of them inside the helicopter.
Panel 2: Danny looks over at Vladimir.
DANNY: So, what do you do?
Panel 3: Vladimir smiles.
VLADIMIR: Weapons expert. Guns and certain blades.
DANNY: You a professional?
VLADIMIR: Used to be. I hope that I can please our contractor, of course.
Panel 4: Danny smiling.
DANNY: Spread the word ‘bout me, ok? Next time you get into a meeting or something, I mean.
Page 9
Panel 1: Vladimir looking over with an “Eh?” expression.
VLADIMIR: Do you have a name aside from your own?
Panel 2: Danny looking at the ground.
DANNY: I got no idea.
Panel 3: Show the helicopter hovering above a building that is a few stories tall, and it is lowering.
Panel 4: Show the group walking into an obviously old and abandoned garage/storagehouse. There are old mechanical parts everywhere, bits of scrap lying around to and fro.
Page 10
Panel 1: HEAD SUIT stands in front of a massive pile of junk. Our view is of behind him.
HEAD SUIT: Gentlemen, welcome your third team member.
Panel 2: Show HEAD SUIT standing in front of everyone, Vlad and Danny are confused.
VLADIMIR: That is a pile of scrap.
DANNY: I can maybe make a few half decent weapons outta that, but I doubt it’s gonna help.
Panel 3: Head Suit takes a remote out of his suit.
HEAD SUIT: What may seem like a pile of scrap—
Panel 4: Head Suit’s finger on a button on the remote, he’s pressing it (it’s like a set of car keys, just a few buttons)
SFX: CLICK
HEAD SUIT: Is actually one of the most deadly machines ever invented.
Page 11
Panel 1: Show a set of circular, tiny eyes glowing a dark red.
SFX: CHOOM
Panel 2: Show the group stepping back, looking at the pile of mechanical scrap rise above them. It looks like a shadowy mass of gears and knives from what we can see. The eyes glow.
SFX: CCCHHHZZZTTT
Panel 3: A set of sharp jaws open, a red glow emanating from the artificial throat.
MACHINE: UNIT 037 ONLINE.
Panel 4: Head Suit looks over at Vlad and Danny, gesturing toward the machine, like a greeting.
HEAD SUIT: Gentlemen, meet the DEATH MACHINE.
Page 12
Panel 1: Danny and Vlad looking surprised and up at the thing. It should be about ten feet taller than them. (so 17 feet tall, not sure)
VLADIMIR: It’s truly magnificent.
Panel 2: Head Suit takes a pen from his suit.
Panel 3: Head Suit drops the pen to the ground. The pen starts to glow.
SFX: BRRZZT
Panel 4: The pen lets up a blue hologram. Orwell’s face appears.
Page 13
Panel 1: Show a view of all of them gathered around, with the Death Machine hovering above and behind them.
ORWELL: Daniel Dangerfield, Vladimir Alekseev, Unit 037-
ORWELL: You’ve been called together for one reason.
Panel 2: The hologram shows an image of Anti-Venom, with a floating image of current Eddie Brock next to it.
ORWELL: To KILL Edward Allen Brock, AKA, Anti-Venom.
Panel 3: Danny and Vlad looking over the hologram, getting a good look at the picture.
ORWELL: You’ll be given the proper equipment to deal with him.
ORWELL: And any of his…. Kind, that may interfere.
Panel 4: Same view of Danny and Vlad.
DANNY: His kind?
Page 14
Panel 1: Show TOXIN clinging to a wall, overlooking a bank. He’s looking down at the bank, concerned. His face is looking normal – without the mouth and teeth and such. The bank has a crowd of people outside.
ORWELL (Captioned text outside of last panel): Symbiotes. Aliens of an unknown origin.
Panel 2: Show inside the bank. Show THE SHOCKER holding a security guard hostage by his gauntlet. Outside, show Toxin swinging toward the window. The crowd outside ducking as he’s about to smash in.
ORWELL (Captioned text outside of previous panel): Very dangerous. But weak to a few things.
Panel 3: Show Toxin smashing through the window, lunging toward Shocker.
ORWELL: Sonics and heat.
Panel 4: Show Danny, Vlad, and the rest in the room once again, gathered around the hologram.
ORWELL: All of which I have provided. And more, since apparently, this Anti-Venom is immune to those things.
Page 15
Panel 1: Orwell’s face in the hologram close up.
ORWELL: He killed my son.
ORWELL: And now, you kill him.
ORWELL: I formed a team to do this once—
ORWELL: They failed.
Panel 2: View of Danny and Vlad.
ORWELL: But I have faith in you two.
ORWELL: You’re a team now. The SUPREME JURY.
Panel 3: Orwell hologram looking up at HEAD SUIT.
ORWELL: Mr. Z here is my head bodyguard. He’ll be powering on the Death Machine, with a sample of Edward’s DNA. The rest of what you do is up to him.
Page 16
Panel 1: The hologram disappears.
Panel 2: Our newly dubbed Mr. Z – his name all along – picks up the pen.
Panel 3: Mr. Z looks at them, we get a close up of him as he lowers his glasses a bit to ask.
MR.Z: Any questions?
Panel 4: Danny standing next to Vlad, just show the both of them.
DANNY: What exactly is the Death Machine’s tech?
Page 17
Panel 1: Mr. Z turns around to face the Death Machine, holding up a vial with a tiny amount of blood.
MR. Z: It is a hybrid of SENTINEL programming. with the infamous “Spider Slayer” machines.
Panel 2: A side view of Mr.Z holding the vial to the Death Machine’s mouth.
MR. Z: Accept DNA.
Panel 3: Tiny, wiry metal tendrils slither out of the Death Machine’s mouth, wrapping around the vial.
DEATH MACHINE: DNA accepted.
Panel 4: Mr. Z turns around to face the Supreme Jury. The menacing Death Machine behind him.
DEATH MACHINE: Target locked: EDWARD ALLEN BROCK. LOCATION: NEW YORK CITY, NEW YORK.
Page 18
Panel 1:
CAPTION: NEW YORK CITY.
Show an apartment with a balcony, SCOTT WASHINGTON standing outside on the balcony.
Panel 2: Side view of Scott’s face.
CAPTION(Scott): I can’t believe I’m doing this again.
CAPTION(Hybrid voice 3): You want to.
Panel 3: Show Scott become THE HYBRID.
HYBRID: Yeah. I know.
Panel 4: Hybrid leaps off of the balcony. Using his unique tendrils to glide in the air.
MORE TO COME WITH “SYMBIOTE” #1
(NO PROFIT MADE - SOME CHARACTERS ARE OF MY OWN INVENTION)
Well, anyway. I'm first making this prelude thingy. A #0 issue. I don't think I'll have this one drawn, and I'll just keep it as a script. The main story is what I want drawn above all else. I think I already have an artist for the book, but idk. We'll see.
)Random FYI: there are new characters. They are somewhat parodies of everything we all loved and hated about the 90s.
Oh, and I don't own any of these characters(Except the ones I made), no profit made, yadda yadda
---
"SYMBIOTE" - #0
PAGE 1
Panel 1: Show a hospital room, with a bald man sitting in a bed upright reading a book. (Curtains on the windows are shut, door's closed - he's a total shut-in in here by the looks of it)
The man is ORWELL TAYLOR and he's reading "The Art Of War".
CAPTION(Orwell's inner thoughts): This book...
Panel 2: Show a row of well trained soldiers standing at attention. Among them is HUGH TAYLOR, the son of Orwell, who Eddie Brock (Venom at the time) killed to escape from the federal prison known as THE VAULT (see: Amazing Spider-man #315)
CAPTION(Orwell): It reminds me of my son.
CAPTION(Orwell): Of all his accomplishments in the military.
Panel 3: Show Orwell in the process of putting a suit of armor on(Think the Iron Man movie), it is SENTRY's (character from Venom: Lethal Protector) armor.
PAGE 2
Panel 1: Show a panel of Venom suffocating Hugh, as Orwell imagines it (compared to the actual scene in the comics, it's more brutal and vicious)
CAPTION(Orwell): And how all of that was taken from him.
Panel 2: Show Orwell flying in the Sentry armor in a different flashback. The armor is fritzing, shooting off sparks - it looks like it's going to crash.
CAPTION(Orwell): And how my world fell apart.
Panel 3: Show Orwell in the Sentry armor crash into a building.
CAPTION(Orwell): Twice.
Panel 4: Close up of Orwell's face.
CAPTION(Orwell): My name is Orwell Taylor.
CAPTION(Orwell): I once was the leader of a team called THE JURY.
CAPTION(Orwell): Until they were lost. And I tried to replace them by myself.
PAGE 3
Panel 1: Show THE JURY team being taken away into custody. Flashback again, obviously.
Panel 2: Show Orwell crawling out of the broken Sentry armor, bleeding from wreckage all around him in a pile of rubble. The rubble pile is in the street, he hit the pavement of a busy intersection. Cars are stopped all around him.
Panel 3: Our view is from Orwell's perspective, he's watching TV.
CAPTION(Orwell): And thus, I lost all movement from the waist down.
CAPTION(Orwell): At the very least... I take solace in the fact that Venom was captured by the government. Forced to be their slave.
Panel 4: The TV shows a news report of Anti-Venom fighting the Thunderbolts (See: Spider-man New Ways To Die).
TV REPORTER: The white Venom is former host to the Venom symbiote, EDDIE BROCK.
TV REPORTER: Suspect should be considered armed and dangerous, according to authorities.
Page 4
Panel 1: Orwell's face. He's very, very shocked - and angry.
ORWELL: NO! NO NO NO! HE'S ALIVE?!
ORWELL: HE KILLED HIMSELF! I HEARD IT! HE JUMPED OUT OF A WINDOW-- DIDN'T HE?!
Panel 2: View of the room as Orwell grabs his head with his hands and screams.
ORWELL: Wait-- that was just a rumor-- THAT'S RIGHT, HE SURVIVED!
ORWELL: HE SURVIVED AND HE'S POWERED AGAIN!?
Panel 3: View of Orwell's face. He's crying a little bit, and he has a scary look in his eyes. He's so angry he probably can't see straight.
CAPTION(Orwell): This ... this will not stand.
Panel 4: Show Orwell grabbing a cell phone from his bedside.
CAPTION(Orwell): I have ONE thing left in my life.
CAPTION(Orwell): Wealth.
Page 5
Panel 1: Show a warehouse in a dirty, urban slum area.
CAPTION: “THE SAFEHOUSE”, HOME OF VLADIMIR ALEKSEEV
Panel 2: Show the inside of a large room. There are shelves all over the place, dirty, housing weapons of all kinds. Vladimir (black long hair, beard – wearing engineer clothes) is sitting on a work bench, loading up a large, not-realistic-but-still-awesome laser canon type of gun.
Panel 3: Show from behind the man, there are several men in black suits and sunglasses approaching him. Four to be exact. The middle most one is a blonde man, he is the tallest and the leader. The rest are black haired and pretty forgettable on appearance. The blonde guy looks like someone not to be messed with. He’ll be called “HEAD SUIT”
HEAD SUIT: Vladimir Alekseev. It’s time for your comeback tour.
Panel 4: Show the man smiling.
VLADIMIR: It is about time.
Page 6
Panel 1: Show a sunny, suburban neighborhood – a cul-de-sac. There’s a young man (19 years), blonde, muscular(think Peter Parker in the 90s cartoon) - practicing with two big, professional looking swords (katatanas) and slicing up targets laid out outside.
CAPTION: SAN FRANCISCO – HOME OF DANNY DANGERFIELD
Panel 2: Show from behind Danny, the same group of men in suits. Along with Vladimir, walking toward him.
Panel 3: Vladimir smiles at the targets laid out around the place. They are effigies of several well known mutants (WOLVERINE, EMMA FROST, CYCLOPS – ETC)
Panel 4: The HEAD SUIT holds up a paper, a contract of some sort.
HEAD SUIT: Mr. Dangerfield, it’s time.
Page 7
Panel 1: Close up of Danny smiling. He has a set of blades forming literally out of his arms, as if he merged them into his flesh.
DANNY: Awesome. ‘Bout time you suits showed up!
Panel 2: Show Danny grabbing a blade and pulling it.
Panel 3: Show the blade leave his flesh without a scratch. Vladimir is impressed.
VLADIMIR: Amazing.
DANNY: The perks of the X-gene, m’good man.
Panel 4: Side shot of the bunch of them leaving. They are walking toward a black helicopter.
Page 8
Panel 1: Show the bunch of them inside the helicopter.
Panel 2: Danny looks over at Vladimir.
DANNY: So, what do you do?
Panel 3: Vladimir smiles.
VLADIMIR: Weapons expert. Guns and certain blades.
DANNY: You a professional?
VLADIMIR: Used to be. I hope that I can please our contractor, of course.
Panel 4: Danny smiling.
DANNY: Spread the word ‘bout me, ok? Next time you get into a meeting or something, I mean.
Page 9
Panel 1: Vladimir looking over with an “Eh?” expression.
VLADIMIR: Do you have a name aside from your own?
Panel 2: Danny looking at the ground.
DANNY: I got no idea.
Panel 3: Show the helicopter hovering above a building that is a few stories tall, and it is lowering.
Panel 4: Show the group walking into an obviously old and abandoned garage/storagehouse. There are old mechanical parts everywhere, bits of scrap lying around to and fro.
Page 10
Panel 1: HEAD SUIT stands in front of a massive pile of junk. Our view is of behind him.
HEAD SUIT: Gentlemen, welcome your third team member.
Panel 2: Show HEAD SUIT standing in front of everyone, Vlad and Danny are confused.
VLADIMIR: That is a pile of scrap.
DANNY: I can maybe make a few half decent weapons outta that, but I doubt it’s gonna help.
Panel 3: Head Suit takes a remote out of his suit.
HEAD SUIT: What may seem like a pile of scrap—
Panel 4: Head Suit’s finger on a button on the remote, he’s pressing it (it’s like a set of car keys, just a few buttons)
SFX: CLICK
HEAD SUIT: Is actually one of the most deadly machines ever invented.
Page 11
Panel 1: Show a set of circular, tiny eyes glowing a dark red.
SFX: CHOOM
Panel 2: Show the group stepping back, looking at the pile of mechanical scrap rise above them. It looks like a shadowy mass of gears and knives from what we can see. The eyes glow.
SFX: CCCHHHZZZTTT
Panel 3: A set of sharp jaws open, a red glow emanating from the artificial throat.
MACHINE: UNIT 037 ONLINE.
Panel 4: Head Suit looks over at Vlad and Danny, gesturing toward the machine, like a greeting.
HEAD SUIT: Gentlemen, meet the DEATH MACHINE.
Page 12
Panel 1: Danny and Vlad looking surprised and up at the thing. It should be about ten feet taller than them. (so 17 feet tall, not sure)
VLADIMIR: It’s truly magnificent.
Panel 2: Head Suit takes a pen from his suit.
Panel 3: Head Suit drops the pen to the ground. The pen starts to glow.
SFX: BRRZZT
Panel 4: The pen lets up a blue hologram. Orwell’s face appears.
Page 13
Panel 1: Show a view of all of them gathered around, with the Death Machine hovering above and behind them.
ORWELL: Daniel Dangerfield, Vladimir Alekseev, Unit 037-
ORWELL: You’ve been called together for one reason.
Panel 2: The hologram shows an image of Anti-Venom, with a floating image of current Eddie Brock next to it.
ORWELL: To KILL Edward Allen Brock, AKA, Anti-Venom.
Panel 3: Danny and Vlad looking over the hologram, getting a good look at the picture.
ORWELL: You’ll be given the proper equipment to deal with him.
ORWELL: And any of his…. Kind, that may interfere.
Panel 4: Same view of Danny and Vlad.
DANNY: His kind?
Page 14
Panel 1: Show TOXIN clinging to a wall, overlooking a bank. He’s looking down at the bank, concerned. His face is looking normal – without the mouth and teeth and such. The bank has a crowd of people outside.
ORWELL (Captioned text outside of last panel): Symbiotes. Aliens of an unknown origin.
Panel 2: Show inside the bank. Show THE SHOCKER holding a security guard hostage by his gauntlet. Outside, show Toxin swinging toward the window. The crowd outside ducking as he’s about to smash in.
ORWELL (Captioned text outside of previous panel): Very dangerous. But weak to a few things.
Panel 3: Show Toxin smashing through the window, lunging toward Shocker.
ORWELL: Sonics and heat.
Panel 4: Show Danny, Vlad, and the rest in the room once again, gathered around the hologram.
ORWELL: All of which I have provided. And more, since apparently, this Anti-Venom is immune to those things.
Page 15
Panel 1: Orwell’s face in the hologram close up.
ORWELL: He killed my son.
ORWELL: And now, you kill him.
ORWELL: I formed a team to do this once—
ORWELL: They failed.
Panel 2: View of Danny and Vlad.
ORWELL: But I have faith in you two.
ORWELL: You’re a team now. The SUPREME JURY.
Panel 3: Orwell hologram looking up at HEAD SUIT.
ORWELL: Mr. Z here is my head bodyguard. He’ll be powering on the Death Machine, with a sample of Edward’s DNA. The rest of what you do is up to him.
Page 16
Panel 1: The hologram disappears.
Panel 2: Our newly dubbed Mr. Z – his name all along – picks up the pen.
Panel 3: Mr. Z looks at them, we get a close up of him as he lowers his glasses a bit to ask.
MR.Z: Any questions?
Panel 4: Danny standing next to Vlad, just show the both of them.
DANNY: What exactly is the Death Machine’s tech?
Page 17
Panel 1: Mr. Z turns around to face the Death Machine, holding up a vial with a tiny amount of blood.
MR. Z: It is a hybrid of SENTINEL programming. with the infamous “Spider Slayer” machines.
Panel 2: A side view of Mr.Z holding the vial to the Death Machine’s mouth.
MR. Z: Accept DNA.
Panel 3: Tiny, wiry metal tendrils slither out of the Death Machine’s mouth, wrapping around the vial.
DEATH MACHINE: DNA accepted.
Panel 4: Mr. Z turns around to face the Supreme Jury. The menacing Death Machine behind him.
DEATH MACHINE: Target locked: EDWARD ALLEN BROCK. LOCATION: NEW YORK CITY, NEW YORK.
Page 18
Panel 1:
CAPTION: NEW YORK CITY.
Show an apartment with a balcony, SCOTT WASHINGTON standing outside on the balcony.
Panel 2: Side view of Scott’s face.
CAPTION(Scott): I can’t believe I’m doing this again.
CAPTION(Hybrid voice 3): You want to.
Panel 3: Show Scott become THE HYBRID.
HYBRID: Yeah. I know.
Panel 4: Hybrid leaps off of the balcony. Using his unique tendrils to glide in the air.
MORE TO COME WITH “SYMBIOTE” #1
(NO PROFIT MADE - SOME CHARACTERS ARE OF MY OWN INVENTION)
