Post by InnerVenom123 on Jul 3, 2011 16:29:46 GMT -5
#2
Page 1
Panel 1:
Ground level view of Anti-Venom smashing Toxin’s face into the pavement, tendrils from Anti-Venom wrapping around Toxin and impaling into him. Anti-Venom is clearly snarling and being quite vicious, as his touch burns at Toxin, every tendril that punctures Toxin makes the punctures glow. Toxin is still in his raged out form.
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): More of my past comes to haunt me.
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): Come to hurt my precious angel.
CAPTION(Toxin Symbiote): PATRRRIIIIICKKK HEEELLLP MEEEEEE
CAPTION(Toxin Symbiote): PATRICK HELP IT BURNSSS
SFX: PSSSSHHHHH
Panel 2:
Close up of Anti-Venom, show his face and then down to his neck.
ANTI-VENOM: I won’t let YOU or ANYONE touch her! DO YOU UNDERSTAND ME?!
ANTI-VENOM: You sickening diseased MONSTER!
TOXIN(From off panel): I WASN’T GOING TO--
Panel 3:
Show Toxin give Anti-Venom an uppercut, and Anti-Venom being pushed back and off by the blow.
SFX: WHAM
Panel 4:
Show Anti-Venom a few feet back from Toxin, sitting up (the blow knocked him down), he’s rubbing his mouth with his arm (in the way a person would if they just got punched in the nose).
ANTI-VENOM: You’re a STRONG one…
ANTI-VENOM: Wait. YES. I remember you. The SPAWN OF CARNAGE!
ANTI-VENOM: When I was POSSESSED and SICK, I named you TOXIN!
Page 2
Panel 1:
A view behind Toxin as he looks at Anti-Venom (Anti-Venom is standing up and slightly hunched over, his tendrils are whishing around, ready to lash out at any second toward Toxin, he’s a bit spiky (like a pissed off dog)). Toxin’s body is leaking green and red fluid from the impact points of Anti-Venom’s tendrils, and he has his arm at his side trying to cover some of it up; he looks REALLY hurt. Toxin is in his more Carnage-like state, where he still has his symbiotic mouth, but his bulk has decreased to a far more human size (he has to conserve energy to heal).
TOXIN: You…
TOXIN: You used to be VENOM. Attacked me in that graveyard, during the funeral…
CAPTION(Toxin Symbiote): Run Patrick… please… it hurrrtssss…
Panel 2:
Give us a view behind Anti-Venom’s shoulder as he looks over at Jenna. Jenna is standing behind a telephone pole (or a dumpster or something, artist’s choice) and she looks afraid.
Panel 3:
Front view of Anti-Venom as he runs toward us (Toxin).
ANTI-VENOM: I’ve CHANGED! I’m the CURE to that PARASITE that’s controlling you!
ANTI-VENOM: And YOU’RE the one ATTACKING INNOCENTS LIKE JENNA!
Panel 4:
Give a side view of Anti-Venom running at Toxin. Anti-Venom has multiple tendrils rushing toward Toxin. But Toxin is leapfrogging Anti-Venom, having his hand on Anti-Venom’s head and throwing his body over Anti-Venom, so that in the next panel he can land behind him. Toxin still has one hand on his side.
TOXIN: This “parasite” is still just a toddler by human terms!
CAPTION(Pat): I realize that Toxin may be a monster… but he’s a child nonetheless. Not a human child by any means. But still a child.
Page 3
Panel 1:
Show a front view of Toxin crouching on the ground and glaring toward us (Anti-Venom).
TOXIN: Stay the hell away from me.
CAPTION(Toxin Symbiote): His touch … like acid… need time to heal…
CAPTION(Pat): A few months ago, I would have gladly let this Anti-Venom guy “cure” me. Not anymore. Dammit Patrick. You don’t just enjoy this thing anymore.
CAPTION(Pat): You NEED it.
Panel 2:
Show Anti-Venom turned around and smiling wide.
ANTI-VENOM: HA! HAHA! A CHILD?
ANTI-VENOM: Is THAT what it pretends to be for you?
Panel 3:
Show Anti-Venom turn around all the way and form a face full of anger, drooling a bit by his snarling mouth.
ANTI-VENOM: When I was infected, it told me it was a kindred spirit. A friend when I had no others.
ANTI-VENOM: Disgusting liars. ALL OF THEM.
Panel 4:
Show Anti-Venom hold out his arms. Tendrils lash out from his sides and his fingers become tendrils and lash out as well.
ANTI-VENOM: YOU—a public servant—should KNOW better! That thing is just a PARASITE! Nothing more! I’M HELPING YOU!
Page 4
Panel 1:
A side view of Toxin arching his back as multiple tendrils impale his chest, sizzling and glowing at the puncture points.
TOXIN: GRAWWWWWWWWWWWWWRRR!!!!!
SFX: PSSSSSSSSSSSSHHHHHH
Panel 2:
Give us an underfoot view of Iron-Wrath hovering above with jet boosters on his armor’s feet.
SFX: RRRRSHHHH
Panel 3:
A view of the entire scene from slightly above, Iron-Wrath landed and standing, pointed toward Anti-Venom. Anti-Venom looking over at Iron-Wrath oddly (Anti-Venom is closer to Toxin now, but his tendrils are still doing the work on Toxin rather than a straight up grapple fight), Toxin struggles under the tendrils.
ANTI-VENOM: Who the--?!
IRON-WRATH: Hello, Mr. Brock.
Panel 4:
View from behind Anti-Venom as he looks toward Jenna.
ANTI-VENOM: Jenna! Get out of here!
JENNA: O-okay!
Page 5
Panel 1:
Front view of Iron-Wrath aiming his giant plasma-cannon arm at us. It’s glowing green in the center of the barrel.
IRON-WRATH: I am IRON-WRATH, and I represent THE SUPREME JURY.
IRON-WRATH: You are to die, Mr. Brock.
Panel 2:
Anti-Venom looking down at Toxin, who still struggles with the tendrils.
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): Should I use this creature as a shield?
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): NO! Not a creature! Not a monster! A MAN! A VERY sick man!
Panel 3:
Show Anti-Venom tossing Toxin out of the way as Iron-Wrath’s cannon fires off a large, green plasma shot toward Anti-Venom.
SFX: BOOSH
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): STOP THINKING LIKE THAT!
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): I’m the GOOD GUY!! The HERO!
Panel 4:
Show Toxin smashing into a brick wall, creating a large dent, tossing trash aside. There are now wounds from Anti-Venom’s touch.
SFX: WHAM
CAPTION(Toxin Symbiote): Pppaaatrrrrriiiccccckkk…
CAPTION(Toxin Symbiote): Eeevverythinng—hurrrrtsss…
CAPTION(Pat): Can’t do anything—too much pain.
Page 6
Panel 1:
Upperbody close up of Iron-Wrath, who is holding his chainsaw arm up. It’s buzzing and very, very active.
SFX: BBRRRRZZZZZZZ
IRON-WRATH: Heh heh heh…
Panel 2:
Show Anti-Venom tossed into the pavement, his body strewn out, and his suit tossed around him in a splattered mess, partially covering most of him. In the same fashion that he reacted as classic Venom when a sonic blast hit him.
EDDIE: Ugh… what—
EDDIE: What hit me?
Panel 3:
View from behind Eddie as he looks up, holding himself up, toward Iron-Wrath, who is walking toward him.
IRON-WRATH: Crafted by Orwell’s paid staff of technicians. A “Super-Venom” cannon. It’s a plasma cannon charged by a crystalized core of the Super-Venom compound that Norman Osborn invented a few months back.
IRON-WRATH: When it fires, a bit of the crystal is sacrificed, and put into the shot; firing shards in every shot.
Panel 4:
Show a flashback shot of Gargan-Venom in his Ven-Orpion costume grappling with Anti-Venom from “New Ways To Die”.
CAPTION(IRON-WRATH): Surely you remember the “Super-Venom”?
(Caption is there to quote text from Iron-Wrath)
Page 7
Panel 1:
Front view of Anti-Venom fully formed again, firing webbing from both hands off panel (at Iron-Wrath).
SFX: PLIP (Anti-Venom’s webbing)
ANTI-VENOM: Thanks for the explanation, gave me enough time to recover!
Panel 2:
Show Iron-Wrath using his chainsaw to slice through the webbing.
SFX: BBBBBBBBBBBBBBZZZZZZRRRRR
IRON-WRATH: Good confetti.
Panel 3:
Show Iron-Wrath aiming his plasma cannon at Anti-Venom (side view of the two of them), and the cannon’s end glowing green.
SFX: BBBBRRRRRR
Page 8
Panel 1:
Toxin(still hurt and in his Carnage-like form) tackles into Iron-Wrath from the side as Iron-Wrath fires off a shot from the cannon, it flies up and off panel (away from Anti-Venom).
TOXIN: First the OTHER SYMBIOTES and now YOU?!
Panel 2:
Show Toxin webbing up Iron-Wrath while on top of his toppled body.
SFX: PLISH
TOXIN: GRAWR!!!
CAPTION(Pat): Have to take this idiot down. Can’t let him kill Anti-Venom.
CAPTION(Toxin Symbiote): THAT will be OUR doing, not this goon’s…
CAPTION(Pat): You healed fast..
CAPTION(Toxin Symbiote): The pain went away, your anger fueled my healing process. Won’t last forever… use it…
Panel 3:
Same view, but with Iron-Wrath literally smacking Toxin aside with the barrel of the plasma cannon.
SFX: WHUD
IRON-WRATH: OFF OF ME!
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): OTHER symbiotes?
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): Think, Eddie. Who else was there?
Panel 4:
Front view of Iron-Wrath getting up, show Anti-Venom fast approaching from behind (running, not webslinging or anything).
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): DONNA! Yes, I remember!
ANTI-VENOM: Orwell Taylor sent you, huh?!
Page 9
Panel 1:
Show Iron-Wrath in the middle of turning around, Anti-Venom slamming his fist into Iron-Wrath’s head (faceplate).
SFX: WHUD
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): I’ll cure her AND TOXIN!
Panel 2:
Show Iron-Wrath fallen over, Anti-Venom standing over him.
ANTI-VENOM: Tell him to get better thugs next time!
ANTI-VENOM: I’ve changed, for the better! Tell him that, too!
Panel 3:
Show Anti-Venom’s fingers diving down toward the faceplate, looking very sharp.
ANTI-VENOM: AFTER I RIP OFF YOUR FACE!
Panel 4:
Toxin standing up and holding his hand out.
TOXIN: Don’t KILL him!
Page 10
Panel 1:
Show Anti-Venom ripping off Iron-Wrath’s mask.
SFX: CLANK
ANTI-VENOM: And let him DESTROY me with his POISON!?
ANTI-VENOM: I DON’T THINK SO--
JENNA: EDDIE!!!! (From off panel)
Panel 2:
View from behind Anti-Venom’s shoulder. He’s looking over at Jenna, who is standing at knifepoint. BLADEMASTER has a sword to her throat, keeping her still.
JENNA: P-please..
Panel 3:
Close up of Jenna, Blademaster peeking his head out from behind her hair.
BLADEMASTER: Hey, Brock.
BLADEMASTER: I’m new to this game. Tell your friends about me.
BLADEMASTER: The name--
Panel 4:
Show a sword ripping up out of Jenna’s chest, blood spurting out.
SFX: SHUK
BLADEMASTER: --IS BLADEMASTER!
Page 11
Panel 1:
Close up of Anti-Venom’s reaction. It’s the most hateful and angry expression conceivable. The VENOM in Anti-Venom is clearly showing here.
ANTI-VENOM: GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGRRRRRRRRR
Panel 2:
Pan out from previous panel to show Anti-Venom’s body has doubled in size, all muscle, and he’s running toward us (Blademaster) with his tongue flying out.
ANTI-VENOM: RRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR
Panel 3:
Show from behind Blademaster; Blademaster has his arm up defensively. Anti-Venom is right in front of him, but still running; Anti-Venom has his arms up and behind his head, and he looks like he’s going to slam both of his fists down onto Blademaster and crush him. Jenna is on the ground, clutching her chest, which is bleeding profusely.
ANTI-VENOM: RRRRRRRRRRRAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Panel 4:
Show the same shot, but with a bright light where Blademaster was just seconds ago; he was teleported away.
ANTI-VENOM: AAAARRRGGHH!!
ANTI-VENOM: WHERE?! WHERE?!
Page 12
Panel 1:
Close up of Jenna’s bloodied hand being held up.
JENNA(From off panel): E..Eddie….
Panel 2:
Show Anti-Venom on his knees next to the bleeding Jenna. Eddie’s face is showing, the suit isn’t covering his head.
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): My angel…
Panel 3:
Same shot, but now tendrils from the Anti-Venom suit are injecting themselves into Jenna’s chest area. The areas where they hit glow slightly.
SFX: PSSSHHH
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): Have to make her better again.
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): She’s my angel.
Panel 4:
Show Toxin standing somewhere behind the scene of Anti-Venom and Jenna.
CAPTION(Toxin Symbiote): Pat… run.
CAPTION(Toxin Symbiote): He’s distracted….
Page 13
Panel 1:
Aerial view of Toxin web/tendril slinging away from the scene. His wounds are healing, and he still looks hurt. His symbiotic eyes are partially see-through, and we can see Patrick’s distraught, human eyes.
SFX: PLISH (web/tendril swinging)
CAPTION(Pat): Get away from him.
CAPTION(Pat): Get as far as possible.
CAPTION(Pat): Toxin’s pain… I can feel it.
Panel 2:
Show Toxin swinging toward Hybrid’s apartment, a sheer coincidence upon everything else that’s happened.
CAPTION: A FEW MINUTES LATER
SFX: PLISH
CAPTION(Pat): There. Stop there.
Panel 3:
Show Toxin landing onto the outside patio of Hybrid’s apartment (it’s a balcony since the apartment is above ground level). Toxin lands in the signature spider-pose crouch. There’s a sliding door that leads into the apartment.
CAPTION(Pat): Feel like I’ve been stabbed… dozens of times.
Panel 4:
Show Toxin fall onto his back. The sliding door opens, and an angry Scream is holding it open. She’s looking down at Hybrid with the eyes of a predator.
CAPTION(Pat): Hope the occupants… don’t see…
Page 14
Panel 1:
Show Anti-Venom in a web made out of his tendrils and webbing inside of a (clearly abandoned) apartment building. He’s hovering over Jenna, who’s laying on a dirty, brown couch. Anti’s tendrils are still “plugged in” to her chest, and he’s focusing on her, trying to heal her as best he can. But he also shows frustration.
ANTI-VENOM: Dammit, Jenna… dammit.
ANTI-VENOM: I-I need you… you’re so badly damaged…
Panel 2:
Close up of Anti-Venom’s face.
ANTI-VENOM: I need my angel…
ANTI-VENOM: I don’t want to listen to the devil again. Please, Jenna.
Panel 3:
Close up of Jenna, her eyes closed, her face stained with her own blood.
ANTI-VENOM: Jenna…
Page 15
Panel 1:
Close up of Toxin, with a yellow and red clawed hand around his throat. His head is shoved up against a wall. His eyes are see-through, and we see Pat’s panic. Yellow hair tendrils slither around the hand.
CAPTION(Pat): Toxin’s been quiet since he told me to flee…
CAPTION(Pat): But I don’t have time to worry about him. The symbiote still covers me.
SCREAM(From off panel): So, that RED LUNATIC had a SPAWN, huh?
Panel 2:
Show a front full body view of Scream from Toxin’s POV. The entire inside of the apartment is absolutely TRASHED, a huge fight took place here.
SCREAM: I already put my siblings down for a wee nap…. And RIGHT when I was about to finish it!
SCREAM: Isn’t that a SHAME? Now I have to kill FIVE babies instead of FOUR!
Panel 3:
View from behind Scream, as Toxin socks her in the face with a right hook. His symbiotic eyes are showing anger. Scream’s hair flails about as usual.
SFX: WHAM
CAPTION(Pat): I’m drained on every level possible. And I still have one good hit left in me.
Page 16
Panel 1:
Show Toxin leaning against the wall, looking down at Scream. Scream is sitting up on the floor, her hands in a grip with claws, she’s looking as if she’s just about to jump up and strike back with a vengeance.
SCREAM: GOOD SHOT, for a TADPOLE.
(from off panel) HYBRID: Hey, sis—
Panel 2:
Show Hybrid tossing a couch at Scream, right as Scream is standing in front of the weakened Toxin.
HYBRID: You didn’t finish US yet!
Panel 3:
Hybrid a few feet away from Toxin but closer, glaring at him.
CAPTION(Scott): Every single fiber of my being told me to flee from this guy today. Now it’s getting worse. A screaming in my head. All four of them.
Panel 4:
Toxin looking toward the sliding door, now shattered, and the balcony, now destroyed.
TOXIN: Good… she’s gone..
TOXIN: For now. (small text)
Page 17
Panel 1:
Shot of just Hybrid. Show two swords cut through Hybrid’s arms, slicing them off. His eyes are wide and he looks as if he’s screaming under the symbiote, his head raised.
SFX: SHK
SFX: SHK
CAPTION(Scott): In the storm of voices, my danger sense didn’t tell me--
HYBRID: GAARRRGGH!!!
Panel 2:
View from behind Hybrid. Blademaster stands there.
BLADEMASTER: You’re all priorities now against the mission.
BLADEMASTER: Eddie Brock’s going to die, of course. But you freaks first.
Panel 3:
Side view of Blademaster jamming a large sword that juts out from his forearm into Hybrid’s back, and it is ripping out of Hybrid’s abs.
SFX: SHUK
Page 18
Panel 1:
Close up/pan above Hybrid, as he looks down at the sword stabbing through him.
HYBRID: I—I fffeeel...ittt…..
Panel 2:
Close up of Hybrid’s face. Blademaster putting his head next to Hybrid’s.
BLADEMASTER: It’s a sonic sword.
BLADEMASTER: That feeling is your organs being liquefied.
Panel 3:
Show Blademaster rip the sword out of Hybrid and partially step back.
CAPTION(Scott): I..
CAPTION(Scott): The voices…
CAPTION(Scott): The voices have stopped… I can’t hear….anything….
SFX: SHHK
Page 19
Panel 1:
Show Blademaster toss Hybrid aside and running toward Toxin. Toxin’s surprised and he’s defensive.
CAPTION(Hybrid): I….can’t feel….anything…..
CAPTION(Hybrid): …
BLADEMASTER: Next!
Panel 2:
Big image of Blademaster slicing off Toxin’s right arm (Toxin’s right, not our right). Toxin’s expression is one of shock and pain. He wasn’t ready for this.
SFX: SHHK
TOXIN: AGGHH!!!!
Page 20
Panel 1:
Close up of Toxin’s claws grabbing onto Blademaster’s left arm.
CAPTION(Pat): Pain--
CAPTION(Pat): Indescribable--
CAPTION(Pat): Animal instincts merge with an alien brutality--
Panel 2:
Show the same view but Toxin’s claws ripping through Blademaster’s arm. Literally crushing his arm and ripping it off with the claws. Bone and gore rip out of the light armor.
SFX: GSHHKK
CAPTION(Pat): Cause as much pain as possible--
CAPTION(Pat): Do NOT let up, Patrick Mulligan--
CAPTION(Pat): THIS MAN STOLE YOUR RIGHT ARM!!!
Panel 3:
Blademaster’s shocked face.
BLADEMASTER: AAAAAAAGHHH!!!!
Page 21
Panel 1:
Show Toxin tossing Blademaster’s dismembered and mutilated arm behind him, Toxin is appearing energized (by Patrick’s will alone) and has his more Carnage like form.
TOXIN: GRAWWWWRR!!
Panel 2:
Blademaster panicked smacking his fist into his chest.
SFX: CLICK
BLADEMASTER: ST-STAY--
BLADEMASTER: STAY AWAY!!
Panel 3:
Show Toxin tackling an empty spot, along with a slight outline of where Blademaster once was.
TOXIN: ARGGH!!! DAMMIT!
Page 22
Panel 1:
Scream slinging back in.
SCREAM: What the hell!?
Panel 2:
Scream sticking to the ceiling and looking down at Toxin. Toxin looks up at her, as a new, dark green tendril forms for his arm, forming claws like it used to be. It’s not complete, but its getting there.
SCREAM: The Hybrid… my siblings! Are they--
TOXIN: Dead. Yeah… every last one. The man, too.
Panel 3:
Toxin looking at his new tendril arm, which is still forming. His symbiote eyes are see-through, and we see Pat’s eyes.
SCREAM(Off panel): YOU did this?!
TOXIN: No… someone else.
TOXIN: They want to kill both of us now. I ripped his arm off before he could do much more. Then he teleported away.
Page 23
Panel 1:
Close up of Scream’s facial expression changing to one of concern.
CAPTION(Scream Symbiote): Only matter of time flee… the one thousandth will unleash his--
CAPTION(Donna): We’re being hunted.
CAPTION(Donna Schizo Voice): Strength.. in numbers…
CAPTION(Donna): You don’t mean--?
Panel 2:
Scream dropped down in front of Toxin in the iconic spider drop pose that Spider-man and Venom use.
SCREAM: One thousandth… I’ve got an idea…
(off panel) TOXIN: It’s Toxin.
Panel 3:
Close up of Scream’s face.
SCREAM: Well, TOXIN..
Panel 4:
Scream wrapping her arms around Toxin’s throat and kicking her leg back; if she was bi-polar, this is happy Scream. Toxin’s a bit surprised at this.
SCREAM: What say we JOIN FORCES?
CAPTION(Pat): …. What choice do I have?
~To Be Continued~
(NO PROFIT MADE - SOME CHARACTERS ARE OF MY OWN INVENTION)
Page 1
Panel 1:
Ground level view of Anti-Venom smashing Toxin’s face into the pavement, tendrils from Anti-Venom wrapping around Toxin and impaling into him. Anti-Venom is clearly snarling and being quite vicious, as his touch burns at Toxin, every tendril that punctures Toxin makes the punctures glow. Toxin is still in his raged out form.
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): More of my past comes to haunt me.
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): Come to hurt my precious angel.
CAPTION(Toxin Symbiote): PATRRRIIIIICKKK HEEELLLP MEEEEEE
CAPTION(Toxin Symbiote): PATRICK HELP IT BURNSSS
SFX: PSSSSHHHHH
Panel 2:
Close up of Anti-Venom, show his face and then down to his neck.
ANTI-VENOM: I won’t let YOU or ANYONE touch her! DO YOU UNDERSTAND ME?!
ANTI-VENOM: You sickening diseased MONSTER!
TOXIN(From off panel): I WASN’T GOING TO--
Panel 3:
Show Toxin give Anti-Venom an uppercut, and Anti-Venom being pushed back and off by the blow.
SFX: WHAM
Panel 4:
Show Anti-Venom a few feet back from Toxin, sitting up (the blow knocked him down), he’s rubbing his mouth with his arm (in the way a person would if they just got punched in the nose).
ANTI-VENOM: You’re a STRONG one…
ANTI-VENOM: Wait. YES. I remember you. The SPAWN OF CARNAGE!
ANTI-VENOM: When I was POSSESSED and SICK, I named you TOXIN!
Page 2
Panel 1:
A view behind Toxin as he looks at Anti-Venom (Anti-Venom is standing up and slightly hunched over, his tendrils are whishing around, ready to lash out at any second toward Toxin, he’s a bit spiky (like a pissed off dog)). Toxin’s body is leaking green and red fluid from the impact points of Anti-Venom’s tendrils, and he has his arm at his side trying to cover some of it up; he looks REALLY hurt. Toxin is in his more Carnage-like state, where he still has his symbiotic mouth, but his bulk has decreased to a far more human size (he has to conserve energy to heal).
TOXIN: You…
TOXIN: You used to be VENOM. Attacked me in that graveyard, during the funeral…
CAPTION(Toxin Symbiote): Run Patrick… please… it hurrrtssss…
Panel 2:
Give us a view behind Anti-Venom’s shoulder as he looks over at Jenna. Jenna is standing behind a telephone pole (or a dumpster or something, artist’s choice) and she looks afraid.
Panel 3:
Front view of Anti-Venom as he runs toward us (Toxin).
ANTI-VENOM: I’ve CHANGED! I’m the CURE to that PARASITE that’s controlling you!
ANTI-VENOM: And YOU’RE the one ATTACKING INNOCENTS LIKE JENNA!
Panel 4:
Give a side view of Anti-Venom running at Toxin. Anti-Venom has multiple tendrils rushing toward Toxin. But Toxin is leapfrogging Anti-Venom, having his hand on Anti-Venom’s head and throwing his body over Anti-Venom, so that in the next panel he can land behind him. Toxin still has one hand on his side.
TOXIN: This “parasite” is still just a toddler by human terms!
CAPTION(Pat): I realize that Toxin may be a monster… but he’s a child nonetheless. Not a human child by any means. But still a child.
Page 3
Panel 1:
Show a front view of Toxin crouching on the ground and glaring toward us (Anti-Venom).
TOXIN: Stay the hell away from me.
CAPTION(Toxin Symbiote): His touch … like acid… need time to heal…
CAPTION(Pat): A few months ago, I would have gladly let this Anti-Venom guy “cure” me. Not anymore. Dammit Patrick. You don’t just enjoy this thing anymore.
CAPTION(Pat): You NEED it.
Panel 2:
Show Anti-Venom turned around and smiling wide.
ANTI-VENOM: HA! HAHA! A CHILD?
ANTI-VENOM: Is THAT what it pretends to be for you?
Panel 3:
Show Anti-Venom turn around all the way and form a face full of anger, drooling a bit by his snarling mouth.
ANTI-VENOM: When I was infected, it told me it was a kindred spirit. A friend when I had no others.
ANTI-VENOM: Disgusting liars. ALL OF THEM.
Panel 4:
Show Anti-Venom hold out his arms. Tendrils lash out from his sides and his fingers become tendrils and lash out as well.
ANTI-VENOM: YOU—a public servant—should KNOW better! That thing is just a PARASITE! Nothing more! I’M HELPING YOU!
Page 4
Panel 1:
A side view of Toxin arching his back as multiple tendrils impale his chest, sizzling and glowing at the puncture points.
TOXIN: GRAWWWWWWWWWWWWWRRR!!!!!
SFX: PSSSSSSSSSSSSHHHHHH
Panel 2:
Give us an underfoot view of Iron-Wrath hovering above with jet boosters on his armor’s feet.
SFX: RRRRSHHHH
Panel 3:
A view of the entire scene from slightly above, Iron-Wrath landed and standing, pointed toward Anti-Venom. Anti-Venom looking over at Iron-Wrath oddly (Anti-Venom is closer to Toxin now, but his tendrils are still doing the work on Toxin rather than a straight up grapple fight), Toxin struggles under the tendrils.
ANTI-VENOM: Who the--?!
IRON-WRATH: Hello, Mr. Brock.
Panel 4:
View from behind Anti-Venom as he looks toward Jenna.
ANTI-VENOM: Jenna! Get out of here!
JENNA: O-okay!
Page 5
Panel 1:
Front view of Iron-Wrath aiming his giant plasma-cannon arm at us. It’s glowing green in the center of the barrel.
IRON-WRATH: I am IRON-WRATH, and I represent THE SUPREME JURY.
IRON-WRATH: You are to die, Mr. Brock.
Panel 2:
Anti-Venom looking down at Toxin, who still struggles with the tendrils.
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): Should I use this creature as a shield?
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): NO! Not a creature! Not a monster! A MAN! A VERY sick man!
Panel 3:
Show Anti-Venom tossing Toxin out of the way as Iron-Wrath’s cannon fires off a large, green plasma shot toward Anti-Venom.
SFX: BOOSH
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): STOP THINKING LIKE THAT!
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): I’m the GOOD GUY!! The HERO!
Panel 4:
Show Toxin smashing into a brick wall, creating a large dent, tossing trash aside. There are now wounds from Anti-Venom’s touch.
SFX: WHAM
CAPTION(Toxin Symbiote): Pppaaatrrrrriiiccccckkk…
CAPTION(Toxin Symbiote): Eeevverythinng—hurrrrtsss…
CAPTION(Pat): Can’t do anything—too much pain.
Page 6
Panel 1:
Upperbody close up of Iron-Wrath, who is holding his chainsaw arm up. It’s buzzing and very, very active.
SFX: BBRRRRZZZZZZZ
IRON-WRATH: Heh heh heh…
Panel 2:
Show Anti-Venom tossed into the pavement, his body strewn out, and his suit tossed around him in a splattered mess, partially covering most of him. In the same fashion that he reacted as classic Venom when a sonic blast hit him.
EDDIE: Ugh… what—
EDDIE: What hit me?
Panel 3:
View from behind Eddie as he looks up, holding himself up, toward Iron-Wrath, who is walking toward him.
IRON-WRATH: Crafted by Orwell’s paid staff of technicians. A “Super-Venom” cannon. It’s a plasma cannon charged by a crystalized core of the Super-Venom compound that Norman Osborn invented a few months back.
IRON-WRATH: When it fires, a bit of the crystal is sacrificed, and put into the shot; firing shards in every shot.
Panel 4:
Show a flashback shot of Gargan-Venom in his Ven-Orpion costume grappling with Anti-Venom from “New Ways To Die”.
CAPTION(IRON-WRATH): Surely you remember the “Super-Venom”?
(Caption is there to quote text from Iron-Wrath)
Page 7
Panel 1:
Front view of Anti-Venom fully formed again, firing webbing from both hands off panel (at Iron-Wrath).
SFX: PLIP (Anti-Venom’s webbing)
ANTI-VENOM: Thanks for the explanation, gave me enough time to recover!
Panel 2:
Show Iron-Wrath using his chainsaw to slice through the webbing.
SFX: BBBBBBBBBBBBBBZZZZZZRRRRR
IRON-WRATH: Good confetti.
Panel 3:
Show Iron-Wrath aiming his plasma cannon at Anti-Venom (side view of the two of them), and the cannon’s end glowing green.
SFX: BBBBRRRRRR
Page 8
Panel 1:
Toxin(still hurt and in his Carnage-like form) tackles into Iron-Wrath from the side as Iron-Wrath fires off a shot from the cannon, it flies up and off panel (away from Anti-Venom).
TOXIN: First the OTHER SYMBIOTES and now YOU?!
Panel 2:
Show Toxin webbing up Iron-Wrath while on top of his toppled body.
SFX: PLISH
TOXIN: GRAWR!!!
CAPTION(Pat): Have to take this idiot down. Can’t let him kill Anti-Venom.
CAPTION(Toxin Symbiote): THAT will be OUR doing, not this goon’s…
CAPTION(Pat): You healed fast..
CAPTION(Toxin Symbiote): The pain went away, your anger fueled my healing process. Won’t last forever… use it…
Panel 3:
Same view, but with Iron-Wrath literally smacking Toxin aside with the barrel of the plasma cannon.
SFX: WHUD
IRON-WRATH: OFF OF ME!
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): OTHER symbiotes?
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): Think, Eddie. Who else was there?
Panel 4:
Front view of Iron-Wrath getting up, show Anti-Venom fast approaching from behind (running, not webslinging or anything).
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): DONNA! Yes, I remember!
ANTI-VENOM: Orwell Taylor sent you, huh?!
Page 9
Panel 1:
Show Iron-Wrath in the middle of turning around, Anti-Venom slamming his fist into Iron-Wrath’s head (faceplate).
SFX: WHUD
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): I’ll cure her AND TOXIN!
Panel 2:
Show Iron-Wrath fallen over, Anti-Venom standing over him.
ANTI-VENOM: Tell him to get better thugs next time!
ANTI-VENOM: I’ve changed, for the better! Tell him that, too!
Panel 3:
Show Anti-Venom’s fingers diving down toward the faceplate, looking very sharp.
ANTI-VENOM: AFTER I RIP OFF YOUR FACE!
Panel 4:
Toxin standing up and holding his hand out.
TOXIN: Don’t KILL him!
Page 10
Panel 1:
Show Anti-Venom ripping off Iron-Wrath’s mask.
SFX: CLANK
ANTI-VENOM: And let him DESTROY me with his POISON!?
ANTI-VENOM: I DON’T THINK SO--
JENNA: EDDIE!!!! (From off panel)
Panel 2:
View from behind Anti-Venom’s shoulder. He’s looking over at Jenna, who is standing at knifepoint. BLADEMASTER has a sword to her throat, keeping her still.
JENNA: P-please..
Panel 3:
Close up of Jenna, Blademaster peeking his head out from behind her hair.
BLADEMASTER: Hey, Brock.
BLADEMASTER: I’m new to this game. Tell your friends about me.
BLADEMASTER: The name--
Panel 4:
Show a sword ripping up out of Jenna’s chest, blood spurting out.
SFX: SHUK
BLADEMASTER: --IS BLADEMASTER!
Page 11
Panel 1:
Close up of Anti-Venom’s reaction. It’s the most hateful and angry expression conceivable. The VENOM in Anti-Venom is clearly showing here.
ANTI-VENOM: GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGRRRRRRRRR
Panel 2:
Pan out from previous panel to show Anti-Venom’s body has doubled in size, all muscle, and he’s running toward us (Blademaster) with his tongue flying out.
ANTI-VENOM: RRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR
Panel 3:
Show from behind Blademaster; Blademaster has his arm up defensively. Anti-Venom is right in front of him, but still running; Anti-Venom has his arms up and behind his head, and he looks like he’s going to slam both of his fists down onto Blademaster and crush him. Jenna is on the ground, clutching her chest, which is bleeding profusely.
ANTI-VENOM: RRRRRRRRRRRAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Panel 4:
Show the same shot, but with a bright light where Blademaster was just seconds ago; he was teleported away.
ANTI-VENOM: AAAARRRGGHH!!
ANTI-VENOM: WHERE?! WHERE?!
Page 12
Panel 1:
Close up of Jenna’s bloodied hand being held up.
JENNA(From off panel): E..Eddie….
Panel 2:
Show Anti-Venom on his knees next to the bleeding Jenna. Eddie’s face is showing, the suit isn’t covering his head.
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): My angel…
Panel 3:
Same shot, but now tendrils from the Anti-Venom suit are injecting themselves into Jenna’s chest area. The areas where they hit glow slightly.
SFX: PSSSHHH
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): Have to make her better again.
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): She’s my angel.
Panel 4:
Show Toxin standing somewhere behind the scene of Anti-Venom and Jenna.
CAPTION(Toxin Symbiote): Pat… run.
CAPTION(Toxin Symbiote): He’s distracted….
Page 13
Panel 1:
Aerial view of Toxin web/tendril slinging away from the scene. His wounds are healing, and he still looks hurt. His symbiotic eyes are partially see-through, and we can see Patrick’s distraught, human eyes.
SFX: PLISH (web/tendril swinging)
CAPTION(Pat): Get away from him.
CAPTION(Pat): Get as far as possible.
CAPTION(Pat): Toxin’s pain… I can feel it.
Panel 2:
Show Toxin swinging toward Hybrid’s apartment, a sheer coincidence upon everything else that’s happened.
CAPTION: A FEW MINUTES LATER
SFX: PLISH
CAPTION(Pat): There. Stop there.
Panel 3:
Show Toxin landing onto the outside patio of Hybrid’s apartment (it’s a balcony since the apartment is above ground level). Toxin lands in the signature spider-pose crouch. There’s a sliding door that leads into the apartment.
CAPTION(Pat): Feel like I’ve been stabbed… dozens of times.
Panel 4:
Show Toxin fall onto his back. The sliding door opens, and an angry Scream is holding it open. She’s looking down at Hybrid with the eyes of a predator.
CAPTION(Pat): Hope the occupants… don’t see…
Page 14
Panel 1:
Show Anti-Venom in a web made out of his tendrils and webbing inside of a (clearly abandoned) apartment building. He’s hovering over Jenna, who’s laying on a dirty, brown couch. Anti’s tendrils are still “plugged in” to her chest, and he’s focusing on her, trying to heal her as best he can. But he also shows frustration.
ANTI-VENOM: Dammit, Jenna… dammit.
ANTI-VENOM: I-I need you… you’re so badly damaged…
Panel 2:
Close up of Anti-Venom’s face.
ANTI-VENOM: I need my angel…
ANTI-VENOM: I don’t want to listen to the devil again. Please, Jenna.
Panel 3:
Close up of Jenna, her eyes closed, her face stained with her own blood.
ANTI-VENOM: Jenna…
Page 15
Panel 1:
Close up of Toxin, with a yellow and red clawed hand around his throat. His head is shoved up against a wall. His eyes are see-through, and we see Pat’s panic. Yellow hair tendrils slither around the hand.
CAPTION(Pat): Toxin’s been quiet since he told me to flee…
CAPTION(Pat): But I don’t have time to worry about him. The symbiote still covers me.
SCREAM(From off panel): So, that RED LUNATIC had a SPAWN, huh?
Panel 2:
Show a front full body view of Scream from Toxin’s POV. The entire inside of the apartment is absolutely TRASHED, a huge fight took place here.
SCREAM: I already put my siblings down for a wee nap…. And RIGHT when I was about to finish it!
SCREAM: Isn’t that a SHAME? Now I have to kill FIVE babies instead of FOUR!
Panel 3:
View from behind Scream, as Toxin socks her in the face with a right hook. His symbiotic eyes are showing anger. Scream’s hair flails about as usual.
SFX: WHAM
CAPTION(Pat): I’m drained on every level possible. And I still have one good hit left in me.
Page 16
Panel 1:
Show Toxin leaning against the wall, looking down at Scream. Scream is sitting up on the floor, her hands in a grip with claws, she’s looking as if she’s just about to jump up and strike back with a vengeance.
SCREAM: GOOD SHOT, for a TADPOLE.
(from off panel) HYBRID: Hey, sis—
Panel 2:
Show Hybrid tossing a couch at Scream, right as Scream is standing in front of the weakened Toxin.
HYBRID: You didn’t finish US yet!
Panel 3:
Hybrid a few feet away from Toxin but closer, glaring at him.
CAPTION(Scott): Every single fiber of my being told me to flee from this guy today. Now it’s getting worse. A screaming in my head. All four of them.
Panel 4:
Toxin looking toward the sliding door, now shattered, and the balcony, now destroyed.
TOXIN: Good… she’s gone..
TOXIN: For now. (small text)
Page 17
Panel 1:
Shot of just Hybrid. Show two swords cut through Hybrid’s arms, slicing them off. His eyes are wide and he looks as if he’s screaming under the symbiote, his head raised.
SFX: SHK
SFX: SHK
CAPTION(Scott): In the storm of voices, my danger sense didn’t tell me--
HYBRID: GAARRRGGH!!!
Panel 2:
View from behind Hybrid. Blademaster stands there.
BLADEMASTER: You’re all priorities now against the mission.
BLADEMASTER: Eddie Brock’s going to die, of course. But you freaks first.
Panel 3:
Side view of Blademaster jamming a large sword that juts out from his forearm into Hybrid’s back, and it is ripping out of Hybrid’s abs.
SFX: SHUK
Page 18
Panel 1:
Close up/pan above Hybrid, as he looks down at the sword stabbing through him.
HYBRID: I—I fffeeel...ittt…..
Panel 2:
Close up of Hybrid’s face. Blademaster putting his head next to Hybrid’s.
BLADEMASTER: It’s a sonic sword.
BLADEMASTER: That feeling is your organs being liquefied.
Panel 3:
Show Blademaster rip the sword out of Hybrid and partially step back.
CAPTION(Scott): I..
CAPTION(Scott): The voices…
CAPTION(Scott): The voices have stopped… I can’t hear….anything….
SFX: SHHK
Page 19
Panel 1:
Show Blademaster toss Hybrid aside and running toward Toxin. Toxin’s surprised and he’s defensive.
CAPTION(Hybrid): I….can’t feel….anything…..
CAPTION(Hybrid): …
BLADEMASTER: Next!
Panel 2:
Big image of Blademaster slicing off Toxin’s right arm (Toxin’s right, not our right). Toxin’s expression is one of shock and pain. He wasn’t ready for this.
SFX: SHHK
TOXIN: AGGHH!!!!
Page 20
Panel 1:
Close up of Toxin’s claws grabbing onto Blademaster’s left arm.
CAPTION(Pat): Pain--
CAPTION(Pat): Indescribable--
CAPTION(Pat): Animal instincts merge with an alien brutality--
Panel 2:
Show the same view but Toxin’s claws ripping through Blademaster’s arm. Literally crushing his arm and ripping it off with the claws. Bone and gore rip out of the light armor.
SFX: GSHHKK
CAPTION(Pat): Cause as much pain as possible--
CAPTION(Pat): Do NOT let up, Patrick Mulligan--
CAPTION(Pat): THIS MAN STOLE YOUR RIGHT ARM!!!
Panel 3:
Blademaster’s shocked face.
BLADEMASTER: AAAAAAAGHHH!!!!
Page 21
Panel 1:
Show Toxin tossing Blademaster’s dismembered and mutilated arm behind him, Toxin is appearing energized (by Patrick’s will alone) and has his more Carnage like form.
TOXIN: GRAWWWWRR!!
Panel 2:
Blademaster panicked smacking his fist into his chest.
SFX: CLICK
BLADEMASTER: ST-STAY--
BLADEMASTER: STAY AWAY!!
Panel 3:
Show Toxin tackling an empty spot, along with a slight outline of where Blademaster once was.
TOXIN: ARGGH!!! DAMMIT!
Page 22
Panel 1:
Scream slinging back in.
SCREAM: What the hell!?
Panel 2:
Scream sticking to the ceiling and looking down at Toxin. Toxin looks up at her, as a new, dark green tendril forms for his arm, forming claws like it used to be. It’s not complete, but its getting there.
SCREAM: The Hybrid… my siblings! Are they--
TOXIN: Dead. Yeah… every last one. The man, too.
Panel 3:
Toxin looking at his new tendril arm, which is still forming. His symbiote eyes are see-through, and we see Pat’s eyes.
SCREAM(Off panel): YOU did this?!
TOXIN: No… someone else.
TOXIN: They want to kill both of us now. I ripped his arm off before he could do much more. Then he teleported away.
Page 23
Panel 1:
Close up of Scream’s facial expression changing to one of concern.
CAPTION(Scream Symbiote): Only matter of time flee… the one thousandth will unleash his--
CAPTION(Donna): We’re being hunted.
CAPTION(Donna Schizo Voice): Strength.. in numbers…
CAPTION(Donna): You don’t mean--?
Panel 2:
Scream dropped down in front of Toxin in the iconic spider drop pose that Spider-man and Venom use.
SCREAM: One thousandth… I’ve got an idea…
(off panel) TOXIN: It’s Toxin.
Panel 3:
Close up of Scream’s face.
SCREAM: Well, TOXIN..
Panel 4:
Scream wrapping her arms around Toxin’s throat and kicking her leg back; if she was bi-polar, this is happy Scream. Toxin’s a bit surprised at this.
SCREAM: What say we JOIN FORCES?
CAPTION(Pat): …. What choice do I have?
~To Be Continued~
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