Post by InnerVenom123 on Jul 4, 2011 19:54:56 GMT -5
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Page 1
Panel 1:
Show a large, dark alleyway. There’s an entry to the outside street and we can see the bright outer city from here.
Panel 2:
Show a skinhead (built huge – wife beater and jeans, tennis shoes) running down the alley, entering from the bright outside, with absolute terror in his eyes.
SKINHEAD: --GAHH!!
Page 2
Panel 1:
Show the bright outside entryway blocked by a large black van.
CAPTION(Punisher): I missed this.
Panel 2:
Extreme close up on the van’s door opening. There’s a white glove pulling it open from the inside.
CAPTION(Punisher): The solitude.
Panel 3:
Back view from the skinhead. He’s pushed up against a wall and standing on a crate, smashing his fists into a big window blocked off by many wooden planks.
CAPTION(Punisher): The silence, void of the ideals of a younger generation.
SFX: WHACK
SFX: WHACK
SKINHEAD: C’MON! C’MON!!!
Page 3
Panel 1:
Show the inside of some warehouse. (It has large metal shelves stacked with random boxes and all sorts of junk – it’s some kind of storage facility).
CAPTION(Punisher): Have a good life, Henry.
Panel 2:
Show the same view, but now a large hole forms as the skinhead breaks his way through the wooden planks and the window and into the place. Glass and broken chunks of wood fall down with him. He’s terrified.
SFX: KKRSSH
SKINHEAD: AHH!!
Panel 3:
Show the skinhead on the ground and looking up and off panel (at the window – some light shines in on his face). He’s still in mortal terror.
SKINHEAD: GHH-
Panel 4:
Show the skinhead getting up and rushing off panel, even though there are glass shards and splinters in his exposed skin.
SKINHEAD: --NGGH!!
Page 4
Panel 1:
Show the outside, where the Skinhead was bashing on the window. Point us toward a large door that is just a few feet away from the window (the skinhead didn’t notice out of panic). Don’t show Punisher here.
CAPTION(Punisher): Leave me to deal with your dimwitted associates.
Panel 2:
Show a side view of the door flying open, a white colored boot kicking it in.
SFX: WHUD
Page 5
Panel 1:
Show the camera looking at the large shelved area, and a door swung open, light shining in.
Panel 2:
Show the skinhead running down a long alley, the door behind him is shut (the one he just ran out of).
SKINHEAD: C’MONC’MONC’MON--
Panel 3:
Show a front view of the door, but with darkness inside. A white skull shows, as does the rest of Punisher’s outfit, minus the face. (It’s the same getup from the “Dark Reign” run).
Page 6
Panel 1:
Close up on the upper body of the skinhead. Show the skinhead turning his head back.
SKINHEAD: OH--
Panel 2:
Extreme close up on the skinhead’s skull as the bullet flies in.
SFX: BLAM
Panel 3:
Extreme close up on the skinhead’s skull as the bullet flies out.
SFX: SHKKULLKK
Page 7
Panel 1:
Show The Punisher standing over the corpse, looking down with disgust.
PUNISHER: …
CAPTION(Punisher): That old feeling returns.
Panel 2:
Close up of Punisher’s hand grabbing another pistol.
Panel 3:
Show the door behind Punisher burst open as several thugs of all different varieties run out with different weapons.
CAPTION(Punisher): Captain Castle’s platoon was ambushed once.
CAPTION(Punisher): It didn’t end well.
Page 8
BIG IMAGE:
Punisher firing at us with twin pistols, multiple times.
SFX: BLAM
SFX: BLAM
SFX: BLAM
SFX: BLAM
SFX: BLAM
SFX: BLAM
SFX: BLAM
SFX: BLAM
Page 9
Panel 1:
Show the thugs piled on top of each other, bleeding and twisted and mangled. All kill shots (head or chest).
CAPTION(Punisher): Lost a few men on our side. First KIAs.
CAPTION(Punisher): Took a ’60 to the snipers. Just me.
Panel 2:
Side view of Frank looking at the pile of corpses.
CAPTION(Punisher): This is nothing by comparison.
Page 10
Panel 1:
Show Punisher bending forward in pain, as if he has a loud noise going off in his ear.
SFX: SSCCCCRRR
CAPTION(Punisher): The hell--
Panel 2:
Show Punisher nearly on the ground, using a hand to support himself.
CAPTION(Punisher): Son of a--
COMM LINK(static bubble coming from his ear): I’m amazed you still wear this thing.
Panel 3:
Close up of Punisher’s face.
COMM LINK: Old habits die hard, I guess.
PUNISHER: Who the hell is this?
Page 11
Panel 1:
Show Punisher standing straight and walking into the warehouse.
COMM LINK: A friend.
COMM LINK: Just like Henry. But better.
Panel 2:
Side view of Punisher walking through the place.
PUNISHER: That so?
COMM LINK: I get it—you’re more likely to trust…
COMM LINK: Well, you don’t trust anyone.
Panel 3:
Show the alley and Punisher walking through it.
PUNISHER: Get to the point.
COMM LINK: There’s gonna be a gathering tonight.
Page 12
Panel 1:
Punisher stopped in the alley, listening intently.
PUNISHER: …
COMM LINK: Got your interest, eh?
Panel 2:
Same view.
COMM LINK: That’s right. A big gathering. All of the city’s biggest, non meta-super crime lords.
COMM LINK: Minus Fisk, of course.
Panel 3:
Show Punisher stepping into the van.
PUNISHER: And you know this how?
COMM LINK: I’ve got ears in high places.
COMM LINK: You can call me Auger.
Page 13
Panel 1:
Punisher sitting in the back of the van at his chair (where there’s a small computer and all variety of junk lying around).
PUNISHER: Good to know.
PUNISHER: If this is a lie, I’ll find you.
Panel 2:
Close up of Punisher’s face.
AUGER (same static bubble): I know, I know.
AUGER: Do your thing, Frank. I’ve just sent the coordinates to your computer.
AUGER: Auger out.
Page 14
Panel 1:
Show Frank looking at some hero/villain tech (Whiplash whip – Cap shield – Iron Man glove – Hawkeye bow, some goblin bombs – all modded to look like they belong in his arsenal)
CAPTION(Punisher): I’m almost out of this type of ammo.
CAPTION(Punisher): ….
Panel 2:
Show Punisher getting in the driver’s seat.
CAPTION(Punisher): No sense in letting it sit there.
Page 15
BIG IMAGE:
Show a shadowed figure sitting in a chair across from MR. NEGATIVE and three Inner Demon bodyguards (their faces are shadowed – we know two are male and one is female (one male being bulked, the other is relatively slim)) along with Spot.
AUGER: Congratulations, Mr. Negative.
AUGER: Within 24 hours, you will have a LOT less competition.
AUGER: Now, about our deal?
MR. NEGATIVE: I’m impressed. But curious. Who will be the first?
AUGER: How about….
AUGER: Carnage.
~To Be Continued~
(DON'T MAKE ANY MONEY - SOME CHARACTERS ARE OF MY OWN CREATION)
Page 1
Panel 1:
Show a large, dark alleyway. There’s an entry to the outside street and we can see the bright outer city from here.
Panel 2:
Show a skinhead (built huge – wife beater and jeans, tennis shoes) running down the alley, entering from the bright outside, with absolute terror in his eyes.
SKINHEAD: --GAHH!!
Page 2
Panel 1:
Show the bright outside entryway blocked by a large black van.
CAPTION(Punisher): I missed this.
Panel 2:
Extreme close up on the van’s door opening. There’s a white glove pulling it open from the inside.
CAPTION(Punisher): The solitude.
Panel 3:
Back view from the skinhead. He’s pushed up against a wall and standing on a crate, smashing his fists into a big window blocked off by many wooden planks.
CAPTION(Punisher): The silence, void of the ideals of a younger generation.
SFX: WHACK
SFX: WHACK
SKINHEAD: C’MON! C’MON!!!
Page 3
Panel 1:
Show the inside of some warehouse. (It has large metal shelves stacked with random boxes and all sorts of junk – it’s some kind of storage facility).
CAPTION(Punisher): Have a good life, Henry.
Panel 2:
Show the same view, but now a large hole forms as the skinhead breaks his way through the wooden planks and the window and into the place. Glass and broken chunks of wood fall down with him. He’s terrified.
SFX: KKRSSH
SKINHEAD: AHH!!
Panel 3:
Show the skinhead on the ground and looking up and off panel (at the window – some light shines in on his face). He’s still in mortal terror.
SKINHEAD: GHH-
Panel 4:
Show the skinhead getting up and rushing off panel, even though there are glass shards and splinters in his exposed skin.
SKINHEAD: --NGGH!!
Page 4
Panel 1:
Show the outside, where the Skinhead was bashing on the window. Point us toward a large door that is just a few feet away from the window (the skinhead didn’t notice out of panic). Don’t show Punisher here.
CAPTION(Punisher): Leave me to deal with your dimwitted associates.
Panel 2:
Show a side view of the door flying open, a white colored boot kicking it in.
SFX: WHUD
Page 5
Panel 1:
Show the camera looking at the large shelved area, and a door swung open, light shining in.
Panel 2:
Show the skinhead running down a long alley, the door behind him is shut (the one he just ran out of).
SKINHEAD: C’MONC’MONC’MON--
Panel 3:
Show a front view of the door, but with darkness inside. A white skull shows, as does the rest of Punisher’s outfit, minus the face. (It’s the same getup from the “Dark Reign” run).
Page 6
Panel 1:
Close up on the upper body of the skinhead. Show the skinhead turning his head back.
SKINHEAD: OH--
Panel 2:
Extreme close up on the skinhead’s skull as the bullet flies in.
SFX: BLAM
Panel 3:
Extreme close up on the skinhead’s skull as the bullet flies out.
SFX: SHKKULLKK
Page 7
Panel 1:
Show The Punisher standing over the corpse, looking down with disgust.
PUNISHER: …
CAPTION(Punisher): That old feeling returns.
Panel 2:
Close up of Punisher’s hand grabbing another pistol.
Panel 3:
Show the door behind Punisher burst open as several thugs of all different varieties run out with different weapons.
CAPTION(Punisher): Captain Castle’s platoon was ambushed once.
CAPTION(Punisher): It didn’t end well.
Page 8
BIG IMAGE:
Punisher firing at us with twin pistols, multiple times.
SFX: BLAM
SFX: BLAM
SFX: BLAM
SFX: BLAM
SFX: BLAM
SFX: BLAM
SFX: BLAM
SFX: BLAM
Page 9
Panel 1:
Show the thugs piled on top of each other, bleeding and twisted and mangled. All kill shots (head or chest).
CAPTION(Punisher): Lost a few men on our side. First KIAs.
CAPTION(Punisher): Took a ’60 to the snipers. Just me.
Panel 2:
Side view of Frank looking at the pile of corpses.
CAPTION(Punisher): This is nothing by comparison.
Page 10
Panel 1:
Show Punisher bending forward in pain, as if he has a loud noise going off in his ear.
SFX: SSCCCCRRR
CAPTION(Punisher): The hell--
Panel 2:
Show Punisher nearly on the ground, using a hand to support himself.
CAPTION(Punisher): Son of a--
COMM LINK(static bubble coming from his ear): I’m amazed you still wear this thing.
Panel 3:
Close up of Punisher’s face.
COMM LINK: Old habits die hard, I guess.
PUNISHER: Who the hell is this?
Page 11
Panel 1:
Show Punisher standing straight and walking into the warehouse.
COMM LINK: A friend.
COMM LINK: Just like Henry. But better.
Panel 2:
Side view of Punisher walking through the place.
PUNISHER: That so?
COMM LINK: I get it—you’re more likely to trust…
COMM LINK: Well, you don’t trust anyone.
Panel 3:
Show the alley and Punisher walking through it.
PUNISHER: Get to the point.
COMM LINK: There’s gonna be a gathering tonight.
Page 12
Panel 1:
Punisher stopped in the alley, listening intently.
PUNISHER: …
COMM LINK: Got your interest, eh?
Panel 2:
Same view.
COMM LINK: That’s right. A big gathering. All of the city’s biggest, non meta-super crime lords.
COMM LINK: Minus Fisk, of course.
Panel 3:
Show Punisher stepping into the van.
PUNISHER: And you know this how?
COMM LINK: I’ve got ears in high places.
COMM LINK: You can call me Auger.
Page 13
Panel 1:
Punisher sitting in the back of the van at his chair (where there’s a small computer and all variety of junk lying around).
PUNISHER: Good to know.
PUNISHER: If this is a lie, I’ll find you.
Panel 2:
Close up of Punisher’s face.
AUGER (same static bubble): I know, I know.
AUGER: Do your thing, Frank. I’ve just sent the coordinates to your computer.
AUGER: Auger out.
Page 14
Panel 1:
Show Frank looking at some hero/villain tech (Whiplash whip – Cap shield – Iron Man glove – Hawkeye bow, some goblin bombs – all modded to look like they belong in his arsenal)
CAPTION(Punisher): I’m almost out of this type of ammo.
CAPTION(Punisher): ….
Panel 2:
Show Punisher getting in the driver’s seat.
CAPTION(Punisher): No sense in letting it sit there.
Page 15
BIG IMAGE:
Show a shadowed figure sitting in a chair across from MR. NEGATIVE and three Inner Demon bodyguards (their faces are shadowed – we know two are male and one is female (one male being bulked, the other is relatively slim)) along with Spot.
AUGER: Congratulations, Mr. Negative.
AUGER: Within 24 hours, you will have a LOT less competition.
AUGER: Now, about our deal?
MR. NEGATIVE: I’m impressed. But curious. Who will be the first?
AUGER: How about….
AUGER: Carnage.
~To Be Continued~
(DON'T MAKE ANY MONEY - SOME CHARACTERS ARE OF MY OWN CREATION)
