Post by InnerVenom123 on Jul 7, 2011 1:11:59 GMT -5
NOTE: This Moon Knight is an altered path. Taking place directly after "Shadowland: Moon Knight" (status quo: Marc is married to Marlene, he's turned down all his other personas (Steven Grant for money aside) so he can serve Khonshu as his true self, and in this story, he has his fan-favorite moon powers! Amped! Oh, and he's..... insane. But not in a dumb way. In a scary way. But it's Looney-Mooney, so let's just dig right in!)
WARNING: GRAPHIC VIOLENCE (And coming from me that's saying something).
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Page 1
Panel 1:
Show the American Museum Of Natural History (located in NYC) It’s night, a FULL MOON is out.
CAPTION: American Museum Of Natural History, New York City, 3AM
Panel 2:
Show a large jewel shaped like a crescent moon protected in a large glass container. Show several lasers around the case and the jewel, enough that it would be very difficult for anyone to manage to steal it (but still doable if say, lowered from above via grapple wire).
Panel 3:
Show a laser pointer cut a hole through the glass in a circular motion.
Panel 4:
Show a white gloved hand (skin-tight gloves that run up the arm, part of a bigger costume) reaching through the now circular hole in the protection glass.
UNKNOWN THIEF: Come on…
Page 2
Panel 1:
Show a skylight on the roof of the museum. There’s a backpack on the roof and a grapple hook connected to a pane of the skylight.
CAPTION(Moon Knight): My name was Jake Lockley.
Panel 2:
Show a silver/white boot (Moon Knight’s) kick the backpack down into the open skylight.
CAPTION(Moon Knight): My name was, and at times, still is, Steven Grant.
Panel 3:
Show the backpack falling down through the skylight into the main museum area, toward a grid of laser wire.
CAPTION(Moon Knight): As of two hours ago, it was Marc Spector.
CAPTION(Moon Knight): But then, my God called upon me.
Panel 4:
Show the backpack on the ground, among the laser beams, the few that it touched are glowing especially red (as if to say “These are the ones that got touched, the crooks are near here!”).
SFX: WHEE WOO WHEE WOOO WHEE WOO WHEE WOO
CAPTION(Moon Knight): An artifact that he covets above many. Endangered by a common thief.
Panel 5:
Show the white-clad thief turning around hanging from her grapple wire, looking at her bag. She has a white tight outfit, which goes up and around her hair and down to her hairline and over her ears, just that color and that’s all. She also has a belt on her waist with a few bits of tech (grapple guns and pouches). She hasn’t grabbed the jewel yet.
SFX: WHEEE WOO WHEE WOO WHEE WOO
WHITE CLAD THIEF: Oh @#%#!!!!
Panel 6:
Show Moon Knight’s hands bringing a crescent dart close to the grapple wire, cutting it.
SFX: CHK
SFX: WHEE WOO WHEE WOO
CAPTION(Moon Knight): Naturally, whoever this is, I’m about to--
KHONSHU(From off panel): Hang her from her small intestine.
MOON KNIGHT: Of course.
Page 3
Panel 1:
Show the white clad thief slamming into the ground.
SFX: WHEE WOO WHEE WOO
WHITE CLAD THIEF: NGH--!!
WHITE CALD THIEF: WHO THE HELL--
Panel 2:
Show from under her as she looks up at the skylight. Moon Knight is jumping down, grabbing both ends of his cape and making the crescent shape of it obvious. His fists have metal spiked knuckles (ala Moon Knight from “The Bottom” story).
SFX: WHEE WOO WHEE WOO
WHITE CLAD THIEF: Oh, mother@#%#er!!!
Panel 3:
Show from behind Moon Knight as he lands, her bag a few feet in front of him, herself a few feet behind.
SFX: WHEE WOO WHEE WOO
MOON KNIGHT: And who, exactly, are you?
WHITE CLAD THIEF: The name’s WHITE CAT—but I know you--
Panel 4:
Show Moon Knight’s face. He’s got a crescent dart in hand.
SFX: WHEE WOO WHEE WOO
WHITE CAT(from off panel): YOU’RE MOON KNIGHT!
MOON KNIGHT: Congratulations. I’m gonna go ahead and assume you’re an idiot.
KHONSHU: In the olden days, cats were worshipped.
KHONSHU: I @#%^#Ing hate cats.
Page 4
Panel 1:
Show Moon Knight tossing a crescent dart off panel (at White Cat).
SFX: WHEE WOO WHEE WOO
MOON KNIGHT: Those who steal--
Panel 2:
Show White Cat shoving her open palmed hands in front of her face just in time for the crescent dart to impale her right hand through the center.
SFX: SHKK
SFX: WHEE WOO WHEE WOO
MOON KNIGHT: Pay the price tenfold!
WHITE CAT: GHAGGHHH!!!!
Panel 3:
Show White Cat’s hand reaching for a grapple gun strapped to her left hip.
SFX: WHEE WOO WHEE WOO
WHITE CAT: @#%#ing LUNATIC!!!
CAPTION(Moon Knight): Giving myself to Khonshu was the best decision I ever made.
Panel 4:
Show White Cat aiming her gun out and firing a grapple line with a sharp looking hook at the end, with her left hand.
SFX: WHEE WOO WHEE WOO
WHITE CAT: GET AWAY FROM ME!!!
CAPTION(Moon Knight): I don’t even remember why I had any problem with it before.
Page 5
Panel 1:
Show underfoot of Moon Knight, grabbing the grapple line (the point just past the hook) with his right hand. The Moon is full and showing above via the open skylight (symbolism that Khonshu is powering him).
SFX: WHEE WOO WHEE WOO
CAPTION(Moon Knight): I’m faster.
MOON KNIGHT: No. You attempted to steal from him.
Panel 2:
Side view of Moon Knight. He’s yanking the entire line back with his one hand. He’s bathed in red and white light (from the alarms and from the moon).
SFX: WHEE WOO WHEE WOO
CAPTION(Moon Knight): I’m stronger.
Panel 3:
Same view of Moon Knight. Except now he has his left hand out in a fist. White Cat’s face is in mid-air, just about to hit the cold spikes.
SFX: WHEE WOO WHEE WOO
CAPTION(Moon Knight): And all around…
Panel 4:
Moon Knight’s face, he’s enraged and looking right at us (and off panel at White Cat as her face meets the spiked knuckle glove).
SFX: GSHKTT
(BIG LETTERING)
CAPTION(Moon Knight): I’m better.
Page 6
Panel 1:
Show Moon Knight’s boots. He’s stepping forward and there’s a bit of a strain as he’s holding something and dragging it off panel (White Cat’s body). The floor here isn’t like the interior of the museum. It’s on the rooftop.
CAPTION: 30 MINUTES LATER
CAPTION(Moon Knight): I would always repeat it to myself. “I wear white so the bad guys can see me coming”. I have a new expression now. Khonshu thought of it.
Panel 2:
Show the ends of Moon Knight’s boot, show White Cat’s face, utterly mutilated beyond recognition (as if Moon Knight cut it up a lot more via some more punches with his spiked knuckles).
Panel 3:
Show an overhead view of the rooftop. Moon Knight has the corpse by the leg with his right hand.
CAPTION(Moon Knight): “I wear white so the bad guys can see the blood easier.”
Panel 4:
Show an overtheshoulder view of Moon Knight looking down at the now closed skylight, the backpack is next to it (disheveled).
CAPTION(Moon Knight): Guard came in, shut the alarm off, found me.
KHONSHU: And you did good. Didn’t kill him, but… he won’t ever walk again.
Page 7
Panel 1:
Show an over the shoulder view of Moon Knight looking down at White Cat. White Cat’s face is turned over, not showing. There’s blood all under her and over her body.
Panel 2:
Show that same view, except now Moon Knight is holding a crescent dart, and he has his other hand on the back of White Cat’s head.
Panel 3:
Show Moon Knight crouched, moving his arms off panel on the corpse with the crescent dart. Khonshu stands behind him. Khonshu is menacing and dark, his appearance is like that of a giant bird with no feathers and black skin, red eyes and a cloaked body.
KHONSHU: Her throat, too. Get her throat.
MOON KNIGHT: As you wish.
SFX: SHKK GSHKKT GUSHKKT
Page 8
Panel 1:
Show Marc Spector sitting at a large and tidy breakfast table, with a big plate of half finished eggs and bacon. He’s in the middle of eating and looks happy. His wife, Marlene Alraune, is sitting on the side of the table next to him and drinking coffee. They’re both in pajamas/morning clothes. The kitchen is glorious and worthy of a mansion (because Marc lives in one).
MARLENE: Let’s check the news?
MARC: Sure.
Panel 2:
Show Marlene with the remote and pointing off panel. Marc is taking a bite of bacon or something casual.
Panel 3:
Show Marlene’s face. She’s got a look of shock and disgust.
MARLENE: Marc….
Page 9
Panel 1:
Show Marc looking up from sipping his coffee to see Marlene pointing at the TV.
Panel 2:
Show from behind Marc as he looks at the TV mounted onto the wall, a big plasma screen/HD tv setup. The most we can make out is “BREAKING NEWS”.
MARC: …
Panel 3:
Show a close up of the TV. It shows a report with a picture of many gathered around the entrance of the American Museum Of Natural History. “BODY DISCOVERED HANGING BY INTESTINE OUTSIDE OF FRONT ENTRANCE”.
MARLENE(From off panel): M-marc…
Page 10
Panel 1:
Show a close up of the bottom part of the TV. A ticker shows: “CRESCENT SHAPE CARVED INTO THE THROAT – CRESCENT SHAPED OBJECTS FOUND AT THE SCENE”.
Panel 2:
Show Marlene looking at Marc with a dire look on her face.
Panel 3:
Close up of the TV ticker again. “MOON KNIGHT IS THE MAIN SUSPECT”.
Panel 4:
Show a side view of Marc’s face as he looks up at the TV.
MARLENE(From off panel): Marc… did you…
Panel 5:
Show Marc looking at us (at Marlene off panel).
MARC: No, of course not, honey.
MARC: It must be some kind of sick imitator.
Page 11
Panel 1:
Show the roof of the museum from that night (what we were focusing on earlier). It’s an over the top view of Moon Knight holding something soft and red and wet in his hand.
Panel 2:
Close up of White Cat’s neck, which is sliced open, and bleeding, gushing blood.
KHONSHU: You still hide your transformation from that woman. Why?
MOON KNIGHT: I love her.
Panel 3:
Show the same view of White Cat’s neck. Except now that soft and warm and wet object, her small intestine, is being wrapped around her throat by Moon Knight’s hand.
MOON KNIGHT: I love her more than anything, except you. But she wouldn’t accept this. She would abandon me.
KHONSHU: …
KHONSHU: So long as you spill blood for me, I don’t care.
Panel 4:
Show Moon Knight, covered in blood, holding two crescent darts – one in each hand.
MOON KNIGHT: Thank you.
Page 12
Panel 1:
Show Moon Knight’s hand jamming the first crescent dart into a solid pipe which is sticking out of the roof. Around the pipe is White Cat’s small intestine, which he’s jamming the crescent dart through (to impale through the pipe to hold steady).
SFX: GSHKT
Panel 2:
Show Moon Knight sitting over White Cat’s body and jamming a crescent dart into her midsection (shadowed if artist feels its too gruesome to show), with Khonshu standing behind him, looming in the background menacingly.
SFX: GUKSHT
KHONSHU: I can be a kind and gracious God, should you serve me well.
Panel 3:
Show Moon Knight standing, and tossing the body over the edge of the roof.
MOON KNIGHT: Hgh!
Page 13
Panel 1:
Flashback to the present. Show Marlene getting up, taking Marc’s plate with her.
MARC: Thank you.
MARLENE: No problem…
Panel 2:
Show Marc looking at the TV. Behind the shoulder view. The TV is showing a file photo of Moon Knight fighting The Thunderbolts (Osborn’s Civil War team).
Page 14
Panel 1:
Show a large group autopsy on White Cat’s body with several prepared doctors, with one doctor puking in a bucket at the side of the body.
CAPTION(Moon Knight): There was a time, when I would have thought something different instead of what I’m thinking now.
Panel 2:
Show Marc looking over at Marlene endearingly.
CAPTION(Moon Knight): I would have wondered, “How could you, Marc Spector? How could you lie to the woman you love like that, without any guilt?”
Panel 3:
Show Marc looking at the TV.
CAPTION(Moon Knight): But now, all I wonder is…
Page 15
BIG IMAGE:
Show Marc sitting at the table. Marlene has left the room. Khonshu is standing over him, with his hands on his shoulders, as if he’s a parental, guiding figure.
CAPTION(Moon Knight): Who prays for vengeance tonight, and how can I answer those prayers?
--
~To Be Continued~
(I DON'T MAKE MONEY FROM THIS - SOME CHARACTERS ARE OF MY OWN INVENTION (WHITE CAT))
WARNING: GRAPHIC VIOLENCE (And coming from me that's saying something).
--
Page 1
Panel 1:
Show the American Museum Of Natural History (located in NYC) It’s night, a FULL MOON is out.
CAPTION: American Museum Of Natural History, New York City, 3AM
Panel 2:
Show a large jewel shaped like a crescent moon protected in a large glass container. Show several lasers around the case and the jewel, enough that it would be very difficult for anyone to manage to steal it (but still doable if say, lowered from above via grapple wire).
Panel 3:
Show a laser pointer cut a hole through the glass in a circular motion.
Panel 4:
Show a white gloved hand (skin-tight gloves that run up the arm, part of a bigger costume) reaching through the now circular hole in the protection glass.
UNKNOWN THIEF: Come on…
Page 2
Panel 1:
Show a skylight on the roof of the museum. There’s a backpack on the roof and a grapple hook connected to a pane of the skylight.
CAPTION(Moon Knight): My name was Jake Lockley.
Panel 2:
Show a silver/white boot (Moon Knight’s) kick the backpack down into the open skylight.
CAPTION(Moon Knight): My name was, and at times, still is, Steven Grant.
Panel 3:
Show the backpack falling down through the skylight into the main museum area, toward a grid of laser wire.
CAPTION(Moon Knight): As of two hours ago, it was Marc Spector.
CAPTION(Moon Knight): But then, my God called upon me.
Panel 4:
Show the backpack on the ground, among the laser beams, the few that it touched are glowing especially red (as if to say “These are the ones that got touched, the crooks are near here!”).
SFX: WHEE WOO WHEE WOOO WHEE WOO WHEE WOO
CAPTION(Moon Knight): An artifact that he covets above many. Endangered by a common thief.
Panel 5:
Show the white-clad thief turning around hanging from her grapple wire, looking at her bag. She has a white tight outfit, which goes up and around her hair and down to her hairline and over her ears, just that color and that’s all. She also has a belt on her waist with a few bits of tech (grapple guns and pouches). She hasn’t grabbed the jewel yet.
SFX: WHEEE WOO WHEE WOO WHEE WOO
WHITE CLAD THIEF: Oh @#%#!!!!
Panel 6:
Show Moon Knight’s hands bringing a crescent dart close to the grapple wire, cutting it.
SFX: CHK
SFX: WHEE WOO WHEE WOO
CAPTION(Moon Knight): Naturally, whoever this is, I’m about to--
KHONSHU(From off panel): Hang her from her small intestine.
MOON KNIGHT: Of course.
Page 3
Panel 1:
Show the white clad thief slamming into the ground.
SFX: WHEE WOO WHEE WOO
WHITE CLAD THIEF: NGH--!!
WHITE CALD THIEF: WHO THE HELL--
Panel 2:
Show from under her as she looks up at the skylight. Moon Knight is jumping down, grabbing both ends of his cape and making the crescent shape of it obvious. His fists have metal spiked knuckles (ala Moon Knight from “The Bottom” story).
SFX: WHEE WOO WHEE WOO
WHITE CLAD THIEF: Oh, mother@#%#er!!!
Panel 3:
Show from behind Moon Knight as he lands, her bag a few feet in front of him, herself a few feet behind.
SFX: WHEE WOO WHEE WOO
MOON KNIGHT: And who, exactly, are you?
WHITE CLAD THIEF: The name’s WHITE CAT—but I know you--
Panel 4:
Show Moon Knight’s face. He’s got a crescent dart in hand.
SFX: WHEE WOO WHEE WOO
WHITE CAT(from off panel): YOU’RE MOON KNIGHT!
MOON KNIGHT: Congratulations. I’m gonna go ahead and assume you’re an idiot.
KHONSHU: In the olden days, cats were worshipped.
KHONSHU: I @#%^#Ing hate cats.
Page 4
Panel 1:
Show Moon Knight tossing a crescent dart off panel (at White Cat).
SFX: WHEE WOO WHEE WOO
MOON KNIGHT: Those who steal--
Panel 2:
Show White Cat shoving her open palmed hands in front of her face just in time for the crescent dart to impale her right hand through the center.
SFX: SHKK
SFX: WHEE WOO WHEE WOO
MOON KNIGHT: Pay the price tenfold!
WHITE CAT: GHAGGHHH!!!!
Panel 3:
Show White Cat’s hand reaching for a grapple gun strapped to her left hip.
SFX: WHEE WOO WHEE WOO
WHITE CAT: @#%#ing LUNATIC!!!
CAPTION(Moon Knight): Giving myself to Khonshu was the best decision I ever made.
Panel 4:
Show White Cat aiming her gun out and firing a grapple line with a sharp looking hook at the end, with her left hand.
SFX: WHEE WOO WHEE WOO
WHITE CAT: GET AWAY FROM ME!!!
CAPTION(Moon Knight): I don’t even remember why I had any problem with it before.
Page 5
Panel 1:
Show underfoot of Moon Knight, grabbing the grapple line (the point just past the hook) with his right hand. The Moon is full and showing above via the open skylight (symbolism that Khonshu is powering him).
SFX: WHEE WOO WHEE WOO
CAPTION(Moon Knight): I’m faster.
MOON KNIGHT: No. You attempted to steal from him.
Panel 2:
Side view of Moon Knight. He’s yanking the entire line back with his one hand. He’s bathed in red and white light (from the alarms and from the moon).
SFX: WHEE WOO WHEE WOO
CAPTION(Moon Knight): I’m stronger.
Panel 3:
Same view of Moon Knight. Except now he has his left hand out in a fist. White Cat’s face is in mid-air, just about to hit the cold spikes.
SFX: WHEE WOO WHEE WOO
CAPTION(Moon Knight): And all around…
Panel 4:
Moon Knight’s face, he’s enraged and looking right at us (and off panel at White Cat as her face meets the spiked knuckle glove).
SFX: GSHKTT
(BIG LETTERING)
CAPTION(Moon Knight): I’m better.
Page 6
Panel 1:
Show Moon Knight’s boots. He’s stepping forward and there’s a bit of a strain as he’s holding something and dragging it off panel (White Cat’s body). The floor here isn’t like the interior of the museum. It’s on the rooftop.
CAPTION: 30 MINUTES LATER
CAPTION(Moon Knight): I would always repeat it to myself. “I wear white so the bad guys can see me coming”. I have a new expression now. Khonshu thought of it.
Panel 2:
Show the ends of Moon Knight’s boot, show White Cat’s face, utterly mutilated beyond recognition (as if Moon Knight cut it up a lot more via some more punches with his spiked knuckles).
Panel 3:
Show an overhead view of the rooftop. Moon Knight has the corpse by the leg with his right hand.
CAPTION(Moon Knight): “I wear white so the bad guys can see the blood easier.”
Panel 4:
Show an overtheshoulder view of Moon Knight looking down at the now closed skylight, the backpack is next to it (disheveled).
CAPTION(Moon Knight): Guard came in, shut the alarm off, found me.
KHONSHU: And you did good. Didn’t kill him, but… he won’t ever walk again.
Page 7
Panel 1:
Show an over the shoulder view of Moon Knight looking down at White Cat. White Cat’s face is turned over, not showing. There’s blood all under her and over her body.
Panel 2:
Show that same view, except now Moon Knight is holding a crescent dart, and he has his other hand on the back of White Cat’s head.
Panel 3:
Show Moon Knight crouched, moving his arms off panel on the corpse with the crescent dart. Khonshu stands behind him. Khonshu is menacing and dark, his appearance is like that of a giant bird with no feathers and black skin, red eyes and a cloaked body.
KHONSHU: Her throat, too. Get her throat.
MOON KNIGHT: As you wish.
SFX: SHKK GSHKKT GUSHKKT
Page 8
Panel 1:
Show Marc Spector sitting at a large and tidy breakfast table, with a big plate of half finished eggs and bacon. He’s in the middle of eating and looks happy. His wife, Marlene Alraune, is sitting on the side of the table next to him and drinking coffee. They’re both in pajamas/morning clothes. The kitchen is glorious and worthy of a mansion (because Marc lives in one).
MARLENE: Let’s check the news?
MARC: Sure.
Panel 2:
Show Marlene with the remote and pointing off panel. Marc is taking a bite of bacon or something casual.
Panel 3:
Show Marlene’s face. She’s got a look of shock and disgust.
MARLENE: Marc….
Page 9
Panel 1:
Show Marc looking up from sipping his coffee to see Marlene pointing at the TV.
Panel 2:
Show from behind Marc as he looks at the TV mounted onto the wall, a big plasma screen/HD tv setup. The most we can make out is “BREAKING NEWS”.
MARC: …
Panel 3:
Show a close up of the TV. It shows a report with a picture of many gathered around the entrance of the American Museum Of Natural History. “BODY DISCOVERED HANGING BY INTESTINE OUTSIDE OF FRONT ENTRANCE”.
MARLENE(From off panel): M-marc…
Page 10
Panel 1:
Show a close up of the bottom part of the TV. A ticker shows: “CRESCENT SHAPE CARVED INTO THE THROAT – CRESCENT SHAPED OBJECTS FOUND AT THE SCENE”.
Panel 2:
Show Marlene looking at Marc with a dire look on her face.
Panel 3:
Close up of the TV ticker again. “MOON KNIGHT IS THE MAIN SUSPECT”.
Panel 4:
Show a side view of Marc’s face as he looks up at the TV.
MARLENE(From off panel): Marc… did you…
Panel 5:
Show Marc looking at us (at Marlene off panel).
MARC: No, of course not, honey.
MARC: It must be some kind of sick imitator.
Page 11
Panel 1:
Show the roof of the museum from that night (what we were focusing on earlier). It’s an over the top view of Moon Knight holding something soft and red and wet in his hand.
Panel 2:
Close up of White Cat’s neck, which is sliced open, and bleeding, gushing blood.
KHONSHU: You still hide your transformation from that woman. Why?
MOON KNIGHT: I love her.
Panel 3:
Show the same view of White Cat’s neck. Except now that soft and warm and wet object, her small intestine, is being wrapped around her throat by Moon Knight’s hand.
MOON KNIGHT: I love her more than anything, except you. But she wouldn’t accept this. She would abandon me.
KHONSHU: …
KHONSHU: So long as you spill blood for me, I don’t care.
Panel 4:
Show Moon Knight, covered in blood, holding two crescent darts – one in each hand.
MOON KNIGHT: Thank you.
Page 12
Panel 1:
Show Moon Knight’s hand jamming the first crescent dart into a solid pipe which is sticking out of the roof. Around the pipe is White Cat’s small intestine, which he’s jamming the crescent dart through (to impale through the pipe to hold steady).
SFX: GSHKT
Panel 2:
Show Moon Knight sitting over White Cat’s body and jamming a crescent dart into her midsection (shadowed if artist feels its too gruesome to show), with Khonshu standing behind him, looming in the background menacingly.
SFX: GUKSHT
KHONSHU: I can be a kind and gracious God, should you serve me well.
Panel 3:
Show Moon Knight standing, and tossing the body over the edge of the roof.
MOON KNIGHT: Hgh!
Page 13
Panel 1:
Flashback to the present. Show Marlene getting up, taking Marc’s plate with her.
MARC: Thank you.
MARLENE: No problem…
Panel 2:
Show Marc looking at the TV. Behind the shoulder view. The TV is showing a file photo of Moon Knight fighting The Thunderbolts (Osborn’s Civil War team).
Page 14
Panel 1:
Show a large group autopsy on White Cat’s body with several prepared doctors, with one doctor puking in a bucket at the side of the body.
CAPTION(Moon Knight): There was a time, when I would have thought something different instead of what I’m thinking now.
Panel 2:
Show Marc looking over at Marlene endearingly.
CAPTION(Moon Knight): I would have wondered, “How could you, Marc Spector? How could you lie to the woman you love like that, without any guilt?”
Panel 3:
Show Marc looking at the TV.
CAPTION(Moon Knight): But now, all I wonder is…
Page 15
BIG IMAGE:
Show Marc sitting at the table. Marlene has left the room. Khonshu is standing over him, with his hands on his shoulders, as if he’s a parental, guiding figure.
CAPTION(Moon Knight): Who prays for vengeance tonight, and how can I answer those prayers?
--
~To Be Continued~
(I DON'T MAKE MONEY FROM THIS - SOME CHARACTERS ARE OF MY OWN INVENTION (WHITE CAT))
