Post by InnerVenom123 on Jul 7, 2011 16:17:39 GMT -5
(WARNING: GRAPHIC VIOLENCE (coming from me, that's saying something)).
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Page 1
Panel 1:
Show the interior of Marc Spector’s mansion. The living room.
CAPTION(Marlene): It can get so cold here.
Panel 2:
Show Marlene sitting up in bed. The spot next to her is empty.
CAPTION(Marlene): So…
Panel 3:
Show Marlene looking over at the empty spot.
CAPTION(Marlene): … empty.
Page 2
BIG IMAGE:
Show an alleyway in the dark. Moon Knight is slamming a drug dealer’s face into a brick wall, he has him by the back of the head, making the impact worse. The drug dealer’s face is not visible, we can see the side of his head as it smashes into the wall. Moon Knight still has his spiked knuckles.
SFX: BRKSHHT
CAPTION(Marlene): He used to tell me when he’d leave.
Page 3
Panel 1:
Show Moon Knight pulling the thug back from the wall by his shoulder. The drug dealer’s face is still not visible.
CAPTION(Marlene): Things were different…
Panel 2:
Back view of the drug dealer as Moon Knight slams his fist into his face in a right cross.
SFX: GUSHKTT
CAPTION(Marlene): In the past few weeks, he’s stopped talking about his … I almost called them “heroics” in my mind. He seemed like that’s what he wanted to be.
Panel 3:
Side view. Show Moon Knight slamming the drug dealer’s face into his chest. Blood splatters onto the outside of the drug dealer’s face.
SFX: WHSHGHK
CAPTION(Marlene): But he’s not a hero.
CAPTION(Marlene): He seemed like he was on that road… but he’s left it.
Panel 4:
Show Moon Knight’s hand reach for a crescent dart on his belt.
CAPTION(Marlene): But he’s back to his old way, so…
Panel 5:
Show Khonshu’s glowing, red eyes.
CAPTION(Marlene): It’s more like a religion.
Page 4
Panel 1:
Show the entire alley. Moon Knight is showing his back and cape as he walks out. His fists are covered in blood. Show the drug dealer. His face is mutilated beyond recognition. There’s an oversized crescent dart through his throat, curving up to his face. The other end of this crescent dart is going through the back of his throat and into the brick wall, pinning his body there. Blood is gushing out from his throat.
DRUG DEALER: gushkt….gsh…ahhk…..
Panel 2:
Show a close up of Moon Knight’s chest. It’s all covered in blood, with an oval shaped stain of blood (the imprint of the drug dealer’s face), and it’s covering his crescent shaped logo/symbol.
CAPTION(Marlene): He’s fired Samuels and Greta.
CAPTION(Marlene): He hasn’t talked to Jean Paul in weeks…
Panel 3:
Show a front view of Moon Knight. He’s standing in front of some neon lit place, because it’s shining off of the blood all over his chest in that way. Show the shadow of Khonshu behind him. The most we can make out of Khonshu is his glowing red eyes.
Panel 4:
Side view of Moon Knight’s face. Khonshu’s beak/mouth is jutting out just a bit past Moon Knight’s head so we can see it, as Khonshu is leaning in so he can speak.
KHONSHU: This place REEKS of hatred and bile…
KHONSHU: There’s MUCH vengeance to be had.
Panel 5:
Close up of Moon Knight’s hand. It’s in a fist, still covered in blood.
Page 5
Panel 1:
Show the interior of a biker bar. Just a bunch of bikers having a time.
CAPTION(Marlene): It’s like…
Panel 2:
Show the interior of the biker bar. The front door bursts into pieces, with Moon Knight’s fist breaking through. All the bikers and the lone bartender look toward the front door in shock.
SFX: BRSHKT
CAPTION(Marlene): It’s like he’s drifting away from everyone.
Panel 3:
Show a biker (fat guy with a cueball head) with a cuestick approaching Moon Knight.
CAPTION(Marlene): Except me.
Panel 4:
Show Moon Knight grabbing fat-biker-cueball by the shoulder and slamming his head into the cold edge of the bar, splitting his skull in two, sending blood out.
SFX: GUSHKTT
BARTENDER(from off panel): JESUS @#%#ING CHRIST!!!
CAPTION(Marlene): But even then, he’s starting to disappear at this time of night…
Page 6
Panel 1:
Show Moon Knight’s hand grabbing the cuestick’s fat end (the place you’re supposed to grab it).
KHONSHU: The bartender lives.
MOON KNIGHT: As you--
Panel 2:
Show the whole bar. Moon Knight smacks the short end of the stick into the bartender’s head. The cuestick breaks from the impact, and the bartender is sent smacked into the side of the bar.
SFX: WHACK
MOON KNIGHT: --command!
CAPTION(Marlene): I wish he’d come home…
Panel 3:
Show three of the thugs rushing at Moon Knight. One has a tire iron, the other has another cuestick, and the other has a knife.
KHONSHU: Take these slow. I’m especially hungry.
CAPTION(Marlene): No sense in staying up, worrying, though.
Panel 4:
Show Moon Knight holding both ends of the broken cuestick in his hands. The sharp ends pointing inward (toward the middle of the pane) like he’s wielding knives in his mind.
MOON KNIGHT: My pleasure.
Page 7
Panel 1:
Show a side view of the scene. The first biker with a tire iron runs closest to Moon Knight, raising it up like he’s going to strike Moon Knight. Show Moon Knight shoving BOTH sharp ends of the cuestick through this biker’s open mouth, with the ends poking out of the back of his head.
SFX: SHUK
BIKER: GUGGHHH--!!
CAPTION(Marlene): Might as well….>yawn<….go back to sleep….
Panel 2:
Show a front view of Moon Knight. Moon Knight is tossing that biker to the right and off panel (holding a grip on his body by the cuestick pieces shoved in the biker’s skull).
Panel 3:
Show Moon Knight’s hand grabbing a crescent dart from his belt, normalsized.
Panel 4:
Show the two remaining bikers frozen in fear, not stepping forward or back.
Panel 5:
Show that crescent dart expand into a wide, thin version.
SFX: CHK
Page 8
Panel 1:
Show from the perspective of Moon Knight. Moon Knight’s arm is out, and he’s holding the wide crescent dart sideways. The crescent’s ends are firing out, with wires launching after those sharp ends, toward the wall behind both of the bikers.
SFX: BOOSHKT
Panel 2:
Show Moon Knight’s face from the neck and shoulders up as he looks over to the left and off panel at the bar and the stock of various drinks. The bartender is passed out behind the bar.
Panel 3:
Show Moon Knight’s fingers wrapping around a bottle of whiskey.
Page 9
BIG IMAGE:
Show a view that catches Moon Knight, and the two biker thugs. The two biker thugs are stuck to the wall from the wires and the crescent, and they’re huddled together. Show Moon Knight smashing the bottle of whiskey across the face of the biker on the right.
SFX: CRAKSHT
MOON KNIGHT: Know why I’m here?
BIKER ON THE RIGHT: NGAH!!
BIKER ON THE LEFT: GAHH!!! @#%ING S@#% MAN!! JESUS!
Page 10
Panel 1:
Show a front view of Moon Knight. He has the end of the whiskey bottle that isn’t smashed, the handle. It has jagged edges from where the rest of the bottle was smashed.
BIKER LEFT: JESUS! JESUS! JESUS!
MOON KNIGHT: STOP CRYING.
Panel 2:
Show a side view of the biker on the left’s face. Moon Knight is jamming the jagged glass into his forehead. Shards are falling down along with bits of skin and blood. (Moon Knight is going slow).
MOON KNIGHT: I haven’t even STARTED yet.
BIKER LEFT: AGGGH!!!!!
SFX: GSHKKK
Panel 3:
Show Moon Knight looking at the bar again. Focus on an empty shot glass, with Moon Knight in the background looking at it.
MOON KNIGHT: You need to relax. Frank Donahue.
Panel 4:
Show Moon Knight close to the shot glass now, picking it up.
MOON KNIGHT: Hit and run. One dead. Still on the loose, huh?
FRANK(BIKER ON THE LEFT): P-puh-please…. Please……
Panel 5:
Show Moon Knight’s hand reaching for a crescent dart.
Page 11
Panel 1:
Show Moon Knight walking out from the bar. Even more of his costume is stained with blood. Arms and head and waist included.
CAPTION: FIVE MINUTES LATER
Panel 2:
Show Moon Knight getting into a limo in the driver’s seat. Just the driver’s seat, not the entire front of the car.
Panel 3:
Show the entire front of the car. Khonshu is sitting in the passenger seat.
KHONSHU: You did good.
MOON KNIGHT: I live for your praise.
Page 12
Panel 1:
Show a side view of Khonshu sitting in his seat. His head is looking right at us (off panel and at Moon Knight).
KHONSHU: There’s something I must tell you.
Panel 2:
Show the car on some dirt road leading into a forest. It’s moving along just fine.
Panel 3:
Show the car driving toward Marc Spector’s new mansion. Located in a secluded area in a suburban residence. (In Brooklyn or around).
Page 13
Panel 1:
Show the car parked in the front drive way of the mansion (one of those fancy full circle driveways with a fountain in the middle).
Panel 2:
Side view. Show Moon Knight walking inside the living room. He’s a small figure in a large mansion’s living room.
Panel 3:
Back view. Show Marc holding his bloodied “vestments”(the costume) in a t-shirt and boxers in a single room, with no windows and only one door. In front of Marc is a large statue – the statue of Khonshu.
Panel 4:
Side view. Marc places the vestments at the feet of the statue as if giving an offering.
Panel 5:
Show the statue’s eyes glowing blue.
KHONSHU: Such good work you do…
KHONSHU: Rest.
Page 14
Panel 1:
Show Marc walking away from a door that is quickly sealed by a secret metal door (like an elevator) and then wall that closes around that.
KHONSHU: But do not forget my warning.
Panel 2:
Side view. Marc walking up the stairs toward his bedroom.
CAPTION(Moon Knight): And I never do. I spend the rest of the night thinking of it.
Panel 3:
Over view above the bedroom. Show Marc in bed next to Marlene. He’s looking up at the ceiling with his eyes wide open.
Page 15
Panel 1:
Show earlier in the car. Show Moon Knight driving while looking toward Khonshu.
MOON KNIGHT: What is it?
Panel 2:
Show Khonshu’s red, piercing eyes.
KHONSHU: On the night of the RED MOON…
Panel 3:
Show Khonshu’s face, side view as he delivers his cryptic warning.
KHONSHU: Jake Lockley, Steven Grant, and Marc Spector will die.
Page 16
Panel 1:
Back to the present. Show Marc’s eyes.
CAPTION(Moon Knight): “On the night of the RED MOON…”
Panel 2:
Show a large cemetery.
Panel 3:
Show a close up on a grave that is wrecked open. A tombstone tossed over to the side.
“HERE LIES – Carson Knowles. RIP.”
Page 17
Panel 1:
Show a large set of red eyes (mammal – not reptile) in utter darkness.
Panel 2:
Side view. Show a young woman walking her dog down a sidewalk (medium sized dog – not a poodle and not a great dane).
Panel 3:
Show the dog barking at an alley, at darkness.
SFX: GRRRR
SFX: ARK ARK ARK ARK
YOUNG WOMAN: Hey--! Hey stop it!
Page 18
Panel 1:
Front view of her and the dog. She’s trying to pull the dog back by its leash.
SFX: GRRR
YOUNG WOMAN: Bad! Stop it!!
Panel 2:
Back view of her. She’s looking at the darkness. There are two red eyes.
SFX: GRRRRRRRRRRRR….. (Big lettering, the source is whatever the eyes belong to)
YOUNG WOMAN: ….
Panel 3:
Show the dog backing off, whining to get away.
SFX: REE REE REE
YOUNG WOMAN: Ohmygodohmygod…
Page 19
Panel 1:
Side view. Show the young woman, frozen in fright. Her hand has let go of the leash.
Panel 2:
Side view. A large, shadowed creature (not too large – about 10 feet tall max) bites down into her side.
SFX: GGSHHHKTTT
YOUNG WOMAN: OHGODOHGODOHGOD--
Panel 3:
Side view. She’s gone. The dog is running away.
Page 20
BIG IMAGE:
Show WEREWOLF BY NIGHT ripping apart the woman’s abdomen, tearing flesh off of her. His eyes are still glowing. He’s feral beyond belief. We can see him because of a shoddy little street light just above him wired to the wall.
SFX: RRRRRSSH
Page 21
Panel 1:
Show another set of red eyes from the end of the alley in complete darkness.
SHADOWED FIGURE: Sit.
Panel 2:
Show Werewolf By Night complying, still chewing on the bone of the victim.
Page 22
Panel 1:
Show BLACK SPECTRE walking out from the shadows. He’s got all his gear and equipment from his last appearance, and he’s “dirty” (he’s been buried this entire time).
BLACK SPECTRE: Next time, just one bite.
Panel 2:
Show Werewolf By Night’s face, snarling at Black Spectre.
WERWOLF BY NIGHT: GRRR….
Panel 3:
Show Black Spectre’s eyes squinting.
BLACK SPECTRE: Pain.
Panel 4:
Show Werewolf By Night holding his head with both hands and claws, whining in agony.
WEREWOLF BY NIGHT: HNN—HNN—HNNN!!!!
Panel 5:
Show Black Spectre’s face again.
BLACK SPECTRE: Ease.
Page 23
Panel 1:
Show Werewolf By Night looking over at Black Spectre.
WERWOLF BY NIGHT: Hrrr….
Panel 2:
Show Black Spectre walking back into the shadows.
BLACK SPECTRE: Next time, one bite.
Panel 3:
Side view of Black Spectre walking into shadow. All we can see is the front of him (his red eyes) and the back of his outfit (fully lit).
BLACK SPECTRE: We need an outbreak.
BLACK SPECTRE: Not a massacre.
Panel 4:
Black.
KHONSHU: Jake Lockley, Steven Grant, and Marc Spector will die.
~To Be Continued~
(MAKE NO MONEY OFF OF THIS)
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Page 1
Panel 1:
Show the interior of Marc Spector’s mansion. The living room.
CAPTION(Marlene): It can get so cold here.
Panel 2:
Show Marlene sitting up in bed. The spot next to her is empty.
CAPTION(Marlene): So…
Panel 3:
Show Marlene looking over at the empty spot.
CAPTION(Marlene): … empty.
Page 2
BIG IMAGE:
Show an alleyway in the dark. Moon Knight is slamming a drug dealer’s face into a brick wall, he has him by the back of the head, making the impact worse. The drug dealer’s face is not visible, we can see the side of his head as it smashes into the wall. Moon Knight still has his spiked knuckles.
SFX: BRKSHHT
CAPTION(Marlene): He used to tell me when he’d leave.
Page 3
Panel 1:
Show Moon Knight pulling the thug back from the wall by his shoulder. The drug dealer’s face is still not visible.
CAPTION(Marlene): Things were different…
Panel 2:
Back view of the drug dealer as Moon Knight slams his fist into his face in a right cross.
SFX: GUSHKTT
CAPTION(Marlene): In the past few weeks, he’s stopped talking about his … I almost called them “heroics” in my mind. He seemed like that’s what he wanted to be.
Panel 3:
Side view. Show Moon Knight slamming the drug dealer’s face into his chest. Blood splatters onto the outside of the drug dealer’s face.
SFX: WHSHGHK
CAPTION(Marlene): But he’s not a hero.
CAPTION(Marlene): He seemed like he was on that road… but he’s left it.
Panel 4:
Show Moon Knight’s hand reach for a crescent dart on his belt.
CAPTION(Marlene): But he’s back to his old way, so…
Panel 5:
Show Khonshu’s glowing, red eyes.
CAPTION(Marlene): It’s more like a religion.
Page 4
Panel 1:
Show the entire alley. Moon Knight is showing his back and cape as he walks out. His fists are covered in blood. Show the drug dealer. His face is mutilated beyond recognition. There’s an oversized crescent dart through his throat, curving up to his face. The other end of this crescent dart is going through the back of his throat and into the brick wall, pinning his body there. Blood is gushing out from his throat.
DRUG DEALER: gushkt….gsh…ahhk…..
Panel 2:
Show a close up of Moon Knight’s chest. It’s all covered in blood, with an oval shaped stain of blood (the imprint of the drug dealer’s face), and it’s covering his crescent shaped logo/symbol.
CAPTION(Marlene): He’s fired Samuels and Greta.
CAPTION(Marlene): He hasn’t talked to Jean Paul in weeks…
Panel 3:
Show a front view of Moon Knight. He’s standing in front of some neon lit place, because it’s shining off of the blood all over his chest in that way. Show the shadow of Khonshu behind him. The most we can make out of Khonshu is his glowing red eyes.
Panel 4:
Side view of Moon Knight’s face. Khonshu’s beak/mouth is jutting out just a bit past Moon Knight’s head so we can see it, as Khonshu is leaning in so he can speak.
KHONSHU: This place REEKS of hatred and bile…
KHONSHU: There’s MUCH vengeance to be had.
Panel 5:
Close up of Moon Knight’s hand. It’s in a fist, still covered in blood.
Page 5
Panel 1:
Show the interior of a biker bar. Just a bunch of bikers having a time.
CAPTION(Marlene): It’s like…
Panel 2:
Show the interior of the biker bar. The front door bursts into pieces, with Moon Knight’s fist breaking through. All the bikers and the lone bartender look toward the front door in shock.
SFX: BRSHKT
CAPTION(Marlene): It’s like he’s drifting away from everyone.
Panel 3:
Show a biker (fat guy with a cueball head) with a cuestick approaching Moon Knight.
CAPTION(Marlene): Except me.
Panel 4:
Show Moon Knight grabbing fat-biker-cueball by the shoulder and slamming his head into the cold edge of the bar, splitting his skull in two, sending blood out.
SFX: GUSHKTT
BARTENDER(from off panel): JESUS @#%#ING CHRIST!!!
CAPTION(Marlene): But even then, he’s starting to disappear at this time of night…
Page 6
Panel 1:
Show Moon Knight’s hand grabbing the cuestick’s fat end (the place you’re supposed to grab it).
KHONSHU: The bartender lives.
MOON KNIGHT: As you--
Panel 2:
Show the whole bar. Moon Knight smacks the short end of the stick into the bartender’s head. The cuestick breaks from the impact, and the bartender is sent smacked into the side of the bar.
SFX: WHACK
MOON KNIGHT: --command!
CAPTION(Marlene): I wish he’d come home…
Panel 3:
Show three of the thugs rushing at Moon Knight. One has a tire iron, the other has another cuestick, and the other has a knife.
KHONSHU: Take these slow. I’m especially hungry.
CAPTION(Marlene): No sense in staying up, worrying, though.
Panel 4:
Show Moon Knight holding both ends of the broken cuestick in his hands. The sharp ends pointing inward (toward the middle of the pane) like he’s wielding knives in his mind.
MOON KNIGHT: My pleasure.
Page 7
Panel 1:
Show a side view of the scene. The first biker with a tire iron runs closest to Moon Knight, raising it up like he’s going to strike Moon Knight. Show Moon Knight shoving BOTH sharp ends of the cuestick through this biker’s open mouth, with the ends poking out of the back of his head.
SFX: SHUK
BIKER: GUGGHHH--!!
CAPTION(Marlene): Might as well….>yawn<….go back to sleep….
Panel 2:
Show a front view of Moon Knight. Moon Knight is tossing that biker to the right and off panel (holding a grip on his body by the cuestick pieces shoved in the biker’s skull).
Panel 3:
Show Moon Knight’s hand grabbing a crescent dart from his belt, normalsized.
Panel 4:
Show the two remaining bikers frozen in fear, not stepping forward or back.
Panel 5:
Show that crescent dart expand into a wide, thin version.
SFX: CHK
Page 8
Panel 1:
Show from the perspective of Moon Knight. Moon Knight’s arm is out, and he’s holding the wide crescent dart sideways. The crescent’s ends are firing out, with wires launching after those sharp ends, toward the wall behind both of the bikers.
SFX: BOOSHKT
Panel 2:
Show Moon Knight’s face from the neck and shoulders up as he looks over to the left and off panel at the bar and the stock of various drinks. The bartender is passed out behind the bar.
Panel 3:
Show Moon Knight’s fingers wrapping around a bottle of whiskey.
Page 9
BIG IMAGE:
Show a view that catches Moon Knight, and the two biker thugs. The two biker thugs are stuck to the wall from the wires and the crescent, and they’re huddled together. Show Moon Knight smashing the bottle of whiskey across the face of the biker on the right.
SFX: CRAKSHT
MOON KNIGHT: Know why I’m here?
BIKER ON THE RIGHT: NGAH!!
BIKER ON THE LEFT: GAHH!!! @#%ING S@#% MAN!! JESUS!
Page 10
Panel 1:
Show a front view of Moon Knight. He has the end of the whiskey bottle that isn’t smashed, the handle. It has jagged edges from where the rest of the bottle was smashed.
BIKER LEFT: JESUS! JESUS! JESUS!
MOON KNIGHT: STOP CRYING.
Panel 2:
Show a side view of the biker on the left’s face. Moon Knight is jamming the jagged glass into his forehead. Shards are falling down along with bits of skin and blood. (Moon Knight is going slow).
MOON KNIGHT: I haven’t even STARTED yet.
BIKER LEFT: AGGGH!!!!!
SFX: GSHKKK
Panel 3:
Show Moon Knight looking at the bar again. Focus on an empty shot glass, with Moon Knight in the background looking at it.
MOON KNIGHT: You need to relax. Frank Donahue.
Panel 4:
Show Moon Knight close to the shot glass now, picking it up.
MOON KNIGHT: Hit and run. One dead. Still on the loose, huh?
FRANK(BIKER ON THE LEFT): P-puh-please…. Please……
Panel 5:
Show Moon Knight’s hand reaching for a crescent dart.
Page 11
Panel 1:
Show Moon Knight walking out from the bar. Even more of his costume is stained with blood. Arms and head and waist included.
CAPTION: FIVE MINUTES LATER
Panel 2:
Show Moon Knight getting into a limo in the driver’s seat. Just the driver’s seat, not the entire front of the car.
Panel 3:
Show the entire front of the car. Khonshu is sitting in the passenger seat.
KHONSHU: You did good.
MOON KNIGHT: I live for your praise.
Page 12
Panel 1:
Show a side view of Khonshu sitting in his seat. His head is looking right at us (off panel and at Moon Knight).
KHONSHU: There’s something I must tell you.
Panel 2:
Show the car on some dirt road leading into a forest. It’s moving along just fine.
Panel 3:
Show the car driving toward Marc Spector’s new mansion. Located in a secluded area in a suburban residence. (In Brooklyn or around).
Page 13
Panel 1:
Show the car parked in the front drive way of the mansion (one of those fancy full circle driveways with a fountain in the middle).
Panel 2:
Side view. Show Moon Knight walking inside the living room. He’s a small figure in a large mansion’s living room.
Panel 3:
Back view. Show Marc holding his bloodied “vestments”(the costume) in a t-shirt and boxers in a single room, with no windows and only one door. In front of Marc is a large statue – the statue of Khonshu.
Panel 4:
Side view. Marc places the vestments at the feet of the statue as if giving an offering.
Panel 5:
Show the statue’s eyes glowing blue.
KHONSHU: Such good work you do…
KHONSHU: Rest.
Page 14
Panel 1:
Show Marc walking away from a door that is quickly sealed by a secret metal door (like an elevator) and then wall that closes around that.
KHONSHU: But do not forget my warning.
Panel 2:
Side view. Marc walking up the stairs toward his bedroom.
CAPTION(Moon Knight): And I never do. I spend the rest of the night thinking of it.
Panel 3:
Over view above the bedroom. Show Marc in bed next to Marlene. He’s looking up at the ceiling with his eyes wide open.
Page 15
Panel 1:
Show earlier in the car. Show Moon Knight driving while looking toward Khonshu.
MOON KNIGHT: What is it?
Panel 2:
Show Khonshu’s red, piercing eyes.
KHONSHU: On the night of the RED MOON…
Panel 3:
Show Khonshu’s face, side view as he delivers his cryptic warning.
KHONSHU: Jake Lockley, Steven Grant, and Marc Spector will die.
Page 16
Panel 1:
Back to the present. Show Marc’s eyes.
CAPTION(Moon Knight): “On the night of the RED MOON…”
Panel 2:
Show a large cemetery.
Panel 3:
Show a close up on a grave that is wrecked open. A tombstone tossed over to the side.
“HERE LIES – Carson Knowles. RIP.”
Page 17
Panel 1:
Show a large set of red eyes (mammal – not reptile) in utter darkness.
Panel 2:
Side view. Show a young woman walking her dog down a sidewalk (medium sized dog – not a poodle and not a great dane).
Panel 3:
Show the dog barking at an alley, at darkness.
SFX: GRRRR
SFX: ARK ARK ARK ARK
YOUNG WOMAN: Hey--! Hey stop it!
Page 18
Panel 1:
Front view of her and the dog. She’s trying to pull the dog back by its leash.
SFX: GRRR
YOUNG WOMAN: Bad! Stop it!!
Panel 2:
Back view of her. She’s looking at the darkness. There are two red eyes.
SFX: GRRRRRRRRRRRR….. (Big lettering, the source is whatever the eyes belong to)
YOUNG WOMAN: ….
Panel 3:
Show the dog backing off, whining to get away.
SFX: REE REE REE
YOUNG WOMAN: Ohmygodohmygod…
Page 19
Panel 1:
Side view. Show the young woman, frozen in fright. Her hand has let go of the leash.
Panel 2:
Side view. A large, shadowed creature (not too large – about 10 feet tall max) bites down into her side.
SFX: GGSHHHKTTT
YOUNG WOMAN: OHGODOHGODOHGOD--
Panel 3:
Side view. She’s gone. The dog is running away.
Page 20
BIG IMAGE:
Show WEREWOLF BY NIGHT ripping apart the woman’s abdomen, tearing flesh off of her. His eyes are still glowing. He’s feral beyond belief. We can see him because of a shoddy little street light just above him wired to the wall.
SFX: RRRRRSSH
Page 21
Panel 1:
Show another set of red eyes from the end of the alley in complete darkness.
SHADOWED FIGURE: Sit.
Panel 2:
Show Werewolf By Night complying, still chewing on the bone of the victim.
Page 22
Panel 1:
Show BLACK SPECTRE walking out from the shadows. He’s got all his gear and equipment from his last appearance, and he’s “dirty” (he’s been buried this entire time).
BLACK SPECTRE: Next time, just one bite.
Panel 2:
Show Werewolf By Night’s face, snarling at Black Spectre.
WERWOLF BY NIGHT: GRRR….
Panel 3:
Show Black Spectre’s eyes squinting.
BLACK SPECTRE: Pain.
Panel 4:
Show Werewolf By Night holding his head with both hands and claws, whining in agony.
WEREWOLF BY NIGHT: HNN—HNN—HNNN!!!!
Panel 5:
Show Black Spectre’s face again.
BLACK SPECTRE: Ease.
Page 23
Panel 1:
Show Werewolf By Night looking over at Black Spectre.
WERWOLF BY NIGHT: Hrrr….
Panel 2:
Show Black Spectre walking back into the shadows.
BLACK SPECTRE: Next time, one bite.
Panel 3:
Side view of Black Spectre walking into shadow. All we can see is the front of him (his red eyes) and the back of his outfit (fully lit).
BLACK SPECTRE: We need an outbreak.
BLACK SPECTRE: Not a massacre.
Panel 4:
Black.
KHONSHU: Jake Lockley, Steven Grant, and Marc Spector will die.
~To Be Continued~
(MAKE NO MONEY OFF OF THIS)
(But really, I appreciate it!)
