Post by InnerVenom123 on Jul 11, 2011 21:21:08 GMT -5
Page 1
Panel 1:
Side view. Anti-Venom flying backward in the air from the blast of hot air that Pyre gave off.
PYRE: RUINED—MY—LIFE!!!!!
Panel 2:
Show Anti-Venom smashing violently into the hood of a car. There’s a woman inside who’s screaming.
SFX: CRASHKT
ANTI-VENOM: RGH--!
Panel 3:
Show Pyre aiming his arms toward us (off panel at Anti-Venom). Pyre’s giving off so much heat that he’s melting the concrete he’s standing on.
PYRE: NOTHING can withstand THIS MUCH heat!!!
Panel 4:
Show Anti-Venom’s eyes, he’s looking shocked.
ANTI-VENOM: THAT MUCH HEAT COULD WIPE OUT THE ENTIRE BLOCK!!
Page 2
Panel 1:
Side view of Pyre firing a large beam of red light (pure heat) that expands outward toward anything in its path.
SFX: CHOOM
PYRE: DON’T—CARE!!!
Panel 2:
Back view of Anti-Venom standing on top of the car as the flash of red light envelops him. Anti-Venom’s tendrils are ripping through the air in multiple directions. The woman is looking at the driver’s side window and the skin is literally melting off of her face in globs.
SFX: FRRRROOOMMMMMMM
ANTI-VENOM: GRRRAAAHHH!!!!
Panel 3:
Side view of Pyre’s face. He’s gritting his teeth and his eyes are glowing more than ever.
PYRE: BURN—DAMMIT—BURN!!!!
Panel 4:
Side view of Anti-Venom’s face. His head is rocked back and he’s yelling out. There’s no visible effect on the suit.
ANTI-VENOM: NEVER!!!
Page 3
BIG IMAGE:
Show an aerial view of the block. Anything past where Anti-Venom was standing is melting partially and on fire. This goes on for a considerable distance. There are various melted corpses in the streets. Anti-Venom was standing on a street past F.E.A.S.T, so there wasn’t a concentrated beam of destruction hitting it or any building in front.
ANTI-VENOM: Oh my God….
Page 4
Panel 1:
Side view of Anti-Venom’s face. He’s looking straight horizontal at Pyre(off panel).
ANTI-VENOM: This…
ANTI-VENOM: These deaths…. This devastation….
ANTI-VENOM: All these innocents…(small text)
Panel 2:
Show a front view of Pyre. He’s got his arms back and they’re charging with heat energy.
PYRE: YOUR FAULT!!
Panel 3:
Side view. Pyre is running toward Anti-Venom.
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): He knows it won’t hurt me… but I know that feeling.
Panel 4:
Show a front view of Anti-Venom. Tendrils are lashing out from his shoulders and back, toward us (off panel Pyre).
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): That unending HATE that surpasses logical decisions.
Page 5
Panel 1:
Show Pyre’s right hand in a fist, with a white tendril wrapped around it.
SFX: SSHWIK
PYRE: HEY--!!
Panel 2:
Side view of Pyre. One of Anti-Venom’s tendrils is splitting into five different ends and injecting into his chest.
SFX: SHUK SHUK SHUK SHUK
ANTI-VENOM: This ends NOW.
PYRE: LET—GO!!
Panel 3:
Show Pyre’s left hand grabbing for the tendrils in his chest. His glow is diminishing.
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): I could take my natural role one step further, as I have before.
Panel 4:
Show a white tendril wrapping around his left wrist and yanking back.
PYRE: AGH!
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): I could put him down. So he can’t hurt anyone ever again.
Page 6
Panel 1:
Show Pyre’s knees slamming into the partially melted concrete.
PYRE: It… hurts…
Panel 2:
Show from behind Pyre. Pyre has his head down, Anti-Venom’s looking up and at him.
ANTI-VENOM: Don’t make it worse, then.
Panel 3:
Side view of Pyre’s face. He’s looking up. There’s a double image just in front, of Eddie’s face from his days as Venom, as they both shout out in pain in unison.
PYRE: I’LL KILL YOU!! I PROMISE YOU!!
Panel 4:
Show side view of Anti-Venom’s face.
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): But then, that’d defeat the purpose of redemption. Especially in this case.
Panel 5:
Show the hole in F.E.A.S.T’s wall. Jenna is peeking out to watch.
CAPTION(Scream Symbiote): Watch.. days long…follow after siblings die…
CAPTION(Scream Symbiote): follow many days…
CAPTION(Scream Symbiote): Siblings dead… girl afraid, confused…
CAPTION(Scream Symbiote): Siblings dead…get….revenge….
Page 7
Panel 1:
Show from behind Jenna. Jenna is peeking up from behind some chunks of the wall. On the ceiling, the yellow glob watches her, the Scream symbiote.
CAPTION(Scream Symbiote): Perfect…host…
JENNA: E-eddie? Did you FIX IT yet?
Panel 2:
Show a side view of Anti-Venom’s face, in the background we see Jenna watching, and Anti-Venom is partially looking over at her.
ANTI-VENOM: Everything’s fine, Jenna. I’m stopping hi--
Panel 3:
Show Jenna. The Scream symbiote is slithering down, shaping itself like a creeping yellow hand with gangly fingers. As if it’s going to grab her, literally.
CAPTION(Scream Symbiote): Yessssss…..
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): NO!!!
ANTI-VENOM: JENNA!!!
Page 8
Panel 1:
Show from underfoot from Jenna. She’s looking up, and it’s too late. The Scream symbiote is morphing around her skull.
JENNA: MMHHH!!!!
ANTI-VENOM(from off panel): NO!!!!
Panel 2:
Show Pyre wrapped in Anti-Venom’s tendrils, still glowing.
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): SO CLOSE! IF I LET GO OF HIM, HIS POWER WILL COME BACK AND--
Panel 3:
Show Jenna, more than halfway covered by the Scream symbiote.
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): BUT—BUT JENNA--
JENNA: AAAIEEEEE!!!!!
Page 9
Panel 1:
Show Anti-Venom’s tendrils keeping a hold on Pyre as Anti-Venom runs toward Jenna. Jenna looks like a female shaped blob of yellow and red.
ANTI-VENOM: GET OFF OF HER!!
Panel 2:
Show Scream’s face forming on Jenna’s head.
SFX: HSSSSSSSS
SCREAM: GGETT AWAY FFRROMM HOSTT!!
Panel 3:
Show Anti-Venom’s face as Scream’s fist uppercuts him.
SFX: WHAM
Panel 4:
Show Anti-Venom flying back a long distance, his tendrils snapping from Pyre, and the ones on Pyre melting.
ANTI-VENOM: NO!!
Page 10
BIG IMAGE:
Show Scream stepping out from the F.E.A.S.T wreckage, looking the same as she always did, her hair tendrils with sharpened ends slithering about.
SFX: HSSSSSSSS
SCREAM: YOUUU KILLED OUURRR SIBBBLINNGGSSS!!!
SCREAM: OURRR JOB!!!
-- NEXT SEGMENT –
Page 11
Panel 1:
Show the interior of the NYPD (an office that’s just for paperwork).
CAPTION(Patrick): I’ve been lucky to get a job back at the NYPD…
Panel 2:
Show a cubicle.
CAPTION(Patrick): Not the one I intended, but it’s a start.
Panel 3:
Show a nametag attached to the outside wall. “HELLO, MY NAME IS: PATRICK MULLIGAN”.
CAPTION(Patrick): Before I know it, I’ll be back on the streets again… one big problem though.
Page 12
Panel 1:
Back view of Patrick sitting at his computer and typing up something. His prosthetic arm rests at his side.
CAPTION(Patrick): I’ve been asking around about the voice. Trying to see if it’s actually Toxin, or just some kind of … I don’t know, reaction.
Panel 2:
Show the computer. It’s got a medical site and a bunch of stuff about schizophrenia.
CAPTION(Patrick): The results haven’t been very good.
Panel 3:
Show another window popping up, it has results about Post Traumatic Stress Disorder.
CAPTION(Patrick): This isn’t much better…
Page 13
Panel 1:
Show Patrick’s left hand, it’s stopped moving.
CAPTION(Patrick): What the--
CAPTION(Patrick): --can’t feel my hand--
CAPTION(Toxin): Pat…let me in…
Panel 2:
Show Patrick’s eyes. Shocked.
PATRICK: But…but you’re already in… (small text)
Panel 3:
Show Patrick’s hand, still not moving.
CAPTION(Toxin): Mental link severed, because of Anti-Venom…
Page 14
Panel 1:
Side view of Patrick’s face. He looks panicked.
CAPTION(Toxin): Need…. Your PERMISSION to join again….
Panel 2:
Show Patrick looking down at his hand. The fingertips are starting to flow over with green.
Panel 3:
Show Patrick looking at his right side, toward his prosthetic. Something green is slithering out from his clothes in that spot.
CAPTION(Toxin): I can wait all day, Patrick…freeze your body here…
Page 15
Panel 1:
Show the outside of the NYPD.
Panel 2:
Show the same scene, except several cops are aiming their guns out toward one direction (coming from off panel, ground level).
Panel 3:
Show a large, metal suited figure with a large metal right arm and a metal skeletal left arm. His faceplate/helmet is shaped to form around the human head and make it a bit bigger and more skeletal, the theme of his armor is like that, with lots of ribbing. His eyes glow red, there’s no mouth piece like an Iron Man suit. He’s holding his left hand out, and the ends are sparking orange.
METAL SUITED FIGURE: Please, get out of my way.
Page 16
Panel 1:
Side view of several NYPD officers, aiming their guns at him.
OFFICER ONE: PUT YOUR HAND DOWN!!
Panel 2:
Show his faceplate.
METAL SUITED FIGURE: No.
Panel 3:
Show his left hand’s fingertips exploding outward.
OFFICER: I SAID, GET DOWN!!!
METAL SUITED FIGURE: And I said--
Page 17
BIG IMAGE:
Show orange whips extend from each fingertip, slamming into five different officers and visibly electrifying them.
SFX: BZZZZZZRRRRR
METAL SUITED FIGURE: --No.
Page 18
Panel 1:
Show the front lobby of the inside of the NYPD. Several officers are smashing through the glass.
SFX: CRSSHKT
SFX: BRSSHKT
Panel 2:
Show the metal suited figure walking through the door.
SFX: BRSHKT
Panel 3:
Side view of the metal suited figure. He’s running through a wall.
SFX: BRSHKT
SFX: BOOSHKT
METAL SUITED FIGURE: PATRICK MULLIGAN!!!
Page 19
Panel 1:
Show Patrick looking around confused in his chair.
SFX: BOOSHKT
PATRICK: DO YOU HEAR THAT?!
Panel 2:
Show from behind Patrick, his chair is turned to face the opening of the cubicle.
CAPTION(Toxin): Patrick… let me in…. I can help… I can feel things you can’t. You’re going to need me.
Panel 3:
Same view, but the wall is exploding out, the metal suited figure standing there.
METAL SUITED FIGURE: THERE YOU ARE!
METAL SUITED FIGURE: My name is IRON VENGEANCE--
Page 20
Panel 1:
Side view of Patrick’s mouth.
CAPTION(Patrick): YES! COME BACK!!
IRON VENGEANCE: YOU KILLED VLADIMIR ALEKSEEV, CODENAMED IRON WRATH--
Panel 2:
Show Patrick’s arm sleeve on his right rip off, along with his prosthetic, as a new, green tendril arm erupts.
SFX: SSHRK
CAPTION(Patrick): Oh, how I forgot…
IRON VENGEANCE: -- MY FATHER!!
Panel 3:
Show Patrick’s face, half covered by Toxin.
CAPTION(Patrick): How good this feels…
CAPTION(Patrick): Please, forgive me…
Panel 4:
Show Iron Vengeance’s faceplate.
CAPTION(Toxin): Of course, Patrick…
IRON VENGEANCE: Now, I will KILL YOU, TOXIN!!
Panel 5:
Show Toxin in a Spider-man pose in his chair. He’s in his Carnage-like form, with claws and visible teeth and fangs and a Venom-y tongue sprouted from his jaws. His right arm, the tendril arm, is pure green, while everything else is normal.
TOXIN: I doubt it.
--
NO MONEY MADE - SOME CHARS OF MY OWN INVENTION (IRON VENGEANCE)
Panel 1:
Side view. Anti-Venom flying backward in the air from the blast of hot air that Pyre gave off.
PYRE: RUINED—MY—LIFE!!!!!
Panel 2:
Show Anti-Venom smashing violently into the hood of a car. There’s a woman inside who’s screaming.
SFX: CRASHKT
ANTI-VENOM: RGH--!
Panel 3:
Show Pyre aiming his arms toward us (off panel at Anti-Venom). Pyre’s giving off so much heat that he’s melting the concrete he’s standing on.
PYRE: NOTHING can withstand THIS MUCH heat!!!
Panel 4:
Show Anti-Venom’s eyes, he’s looking shocked.
ANTI-VENOM: THAT MUCH HEAT COULD WIPE OUT THE ENTIRE BLOCK!!
Page 2
Panel 1:
Side view of Pyre firing a large beam of red light (pure heat) that expands outward toward anything in its path.
SFX: CHOOM
PYRE: DON’T—CARE!!!
Panel 2:
Back view of Anti-Venom standing on top of the car as the flash of red light envelops him. Anti-Venom’s tendrils are ripping through the air in multiple directions. The woman is looking at the driver’s side window and the skin is literally melting off of her face in globs.
SFX: FRRRROOOMMMMMMM
ANTI-VENOM: GRRRAAAHHH!!!!
Panel 3:
Side view of Pyre’s face. He’s gritting his teeth and his eyes are glowing more than ever.
PYRE: BURN—DAMMIT—BURN!!!!
Panel 4:
Side view of Anti-Venom’s face. His head is rocked back and he’s yelling out. There’s no visible effect on the suit.
ANTI-VENOM: NEVER!!!
Page 3
BIG IMAGE:
Show an aerial view of the block. Anything past where Anti-Venom was standing is melting partially and on fire. This goes on for a considerable distance. There are various melted corpses in the streets. Anti-Venom was standing on a street past F.E.A.S.T, so there wasn’t a concentrated beam of destruction hitting it or any building in front.
ANTI-VENOM: Oh my God….
Page 4
Panel 1:
Side view of Anti-Venom’s face. He’s looking straight horizontal at Pyre(off panel).
ANTI-VENOM: This…
ANTI-VENOM: These deaths…. This devastation….
ANTI-VENOM: All these innocents…(small text)
Panel 2:
Show a front view of Pyre. He’s got his arms back and they’re charging with heat energy.
PYRE: YOUR FAULT!!
Panel 3:
Side view. Pyre is running toward Anti-Venom.
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): He knows it won’t hurt me… but I know that feeling.
Panel 4:
Show a front view of Anti-Venom. Tendrils are lashing out from his shoulders and back, toward us (off panel Pyre).
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): That unending HATE that surpasses logical decisions.
Page 5
Panel 1:
Show Pyre’s right hand in a fist, with a white tendril wrapped around it.
SFX: SSHWIK
PYRE: HEY--!!
Panel 2:
Side view of Pyre. One of Anti-Venom’s tendrils is splitting into five different ends and injecting into his chest.
SFX: SHUK SHUK SHUK SHUK
ANTI-VENOM: This ends NOW.
PYRE: LET—GO!!
Panel 3:
Show Pyre’s left hand grabbing for the tendrils in his chest. His glow is diminishing.
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): I could take my natural role one step further, as I have before.
Panel 4:
Show a white tendril wrapping around his left wrist and yanking back.
PYRE: AGH!
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): I could put him down. So he can’t hurt anyone ever again.
Page 6
Panel 1:
Show Pyre’s knees slamming into the partially melted concrete.
PYRE: It… hurts…
Panel 2:
Show from behind Pyre. Pyre has his head down, Anti-Venom’s looking up and at him.
ANTI-VENOM: Don’t make it worse, then.
Panel 3:
Side view of Pyre’s face. He’s looking up. There’s a double image just in front, of Eddie’s face from his days as Venom, as they both shout out in pain in unison.
PYRE: I’LL KILL YOU!! I PROMISE YOU!!
Panel 4:
Show side view of Anti-Venom’s face.
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): But then, that’d defeat the purpose of redemption. Especially in this case.
Panel 5:
Show the hole in F.E.A.S.T’s wall. Jenna is peeking out to watch.
CAPTION(Scream Symbiote): Watch.. days long…follow after siblings die…
CAPTION(Scream Symbiote): follow many days…
CAPTION(Scream Symbiote): Siblings dead… girl afraid, confused…
CAPTION(Scream Symbiote): Siblings dead…get….revenge….
Page 7
Panel 1:
Show from behind Jenna. Jenna is peeking up from behind some chunks of the wall. On the ceiling, the yellow glob watches her, the Scream symbiote.
CAPTION(Scream Symbiote): Perfect…host…
JENNA: E-eddie? Did you FIX IT yet?
Panel 2:
Show a side view of Anti-Venom’s face, in the background we see Jenna watching, and Anti-Venom is partially looking over at her.
ANTI-VENOM: Everything’s fine, Jenna. I’m stopping hi--
Panel 3:
Show Jenna. The Scream symbiote is slithering down, shaping itself like a creeping yellow hand with gangly fingers. As if it’s going to grab her, literally.
CAPTION(Scream Symbiote): Yessssss…..
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): NO!!!
ANTI-VENOM: JENNA!!!
Page 8
Panel 1:
Show from underfoot from Jenna. She’s looking up, and it’s too late. The Scream symbiote is morphing around her skull.
JENNA: MMHHH!!!!
ANTI-VENOM(from off panel): NO!!!!
Panel 2:
Show Pyre wrapped in Anti-Venom’s tendrils, still glowing.
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): SO CLOSE! IF I LET GO OF HIM, HIS POWER WILL COME BACK AND--
Panel 3:
Show Jenna, more than halfway covered by the Scream symbiote.
CAPTION(Anti-Venom): BUT—BUT JENNA--
JENNA: AAAIEEEEE!!!!!
Page 9
Panel 1:
Show Anti-Venom’s tendrils keeping a hold on Pyre as Anti-Venom runs toward Jenna. Jenna looks like a female shaped blob of yellow and red.
ANTI-VENOM: GET OFF OF HER!!
Panel 2:
Show Scream’s face forming on Jenna’s head.
SFX: HSSSSSSSS
SCREAM: GGETT AWAY FFRROMM HOSTT!!
Panel 3:
Show Anti-Venom’s face as Scream’s fist uppercuts him.
SFX: WHAM
Panel 4:
Show Anti-Venom flying back a long distance, his tendrils snapping from Pyre, and the ones on Pyre melting.
ANTI-VENOM: NO!!
Page 10
BIG IMAGE:
Show Scream stepping out from the F.E.A.S.T wreckage, looking the same as she always did, her hair tendrils with sharpened ends slithering about.
SFX: HSSSSSSSS
SCREAM: YOUUU KILLED OUURRR SIBBBLINNGGSSS!!!
SCREAM: OURRR JOB!!!
-- NEXT SEGMENT –
Page 11
Panel 1:
Show the interior of the NYPD (an office that’s just for paperwork).
CAPTION(Patrick): I’ve been lucky to get a job back at the NYPD…
Panel 2:
Show a cubicle.
CAPTION(Patrick): Not the one I intended, but it’s a start.
Panel 3:
Show a nametag attached to the outside wall. “HELLO, MY NAME IS: PATRICK MULLIGAN”.
CAPTION(Patrick): Before I know it, I’ll be back on the streets again… one big problem though.
Page 12
Panel 1:
Back view of Patrick sitting at his computer and typing up something. His prosthetic arm rests at his side.
CAPTION(Patrick): I’ve been asking around about the voice. Trying to see if it’s actually Toxin, or just some kind of … I don’t know, reaction.
Panel 2:
Show the computer. It’s got a medical site and a bunch of stuff about schizophrenia.
CAPTION(Patrick): The results haven’t been very good.
Panel 3:
Show another window popping up, it has results about Post Traumatic Stress Disorder.
CAPTION(Patrick): This isn’t much better…
Page 13
Panel 1:
Show Patrick’s left hand, it’s stopped moving.
CAPTION(Patrick): What the--
CAPTION(Patrick): --can’t feel my hand--
CAPTION(Toxin): Pat…let me in…
Panel 2:
Show Patrick’s eyes. Shocked.
PATRICK: But…but you’re already in… (small text)
Panel 3:
Show Patrick’s hand, still not moving.
CAPTION(Toxin): Mental link severed, because of Anti-Venom…
Page 14
Panel 1:
Side view of Patrick’s face. He looks panicked.
CAPTION(Toxin): Need…. Your PERMISSION to join again….
Panel 2:
Show Patrick looking down at his hand. The fingertips are starting to flow over with green.
Panel 3:
Show Patrick looking at his right side, toward his prosthetic. Something green is slithering out from his clothes in that spot.
CAPTION(Toxin): I can wait all day, Patrick…freeze your body here…
Page 15
Panel 1:
Show the outside of the NYPD.
Panel 2:
Show the same scene, except several cops are aiming their guns out toward one direction (coming from off panel, ground level).
Panel 3:
Show a large, metal suited figure with a large metal right arm and a metal skeletal left arm. His faceplate/helmet is shaped to form around the human head and make it a bit bigger and more skeletal, the theme of his armor is like that, with lots of ribbing. His eyes glow red, there’s no mouth piece like an Iron Man suit. He’s holding his left hand out, and the ends are sparking orange.
METAL SUITED FIGURE: Please, get out of my way.
Page 16
Panel 1:
Side view of several NYPD officers, aiming their guns at him.
OFFICER ONE: PUT YOUR HAND DOWN!!
Panel 2:
Show his faceplate.
METAL SUITED FIGURE: No.
Panel 3:
Show his left hand’s fingertips exploding outward.
OFFICER: I SAID, GET DOWN!!!
METAL SUITED FIGURE: And I said--
Page 17
BIG IMAGE:
Show orange whips extend from each fingertip, slamming into five different officers and visibly electrifying them.
SFX: BZZZZZZRRRRR
METAL SUITED FIGURE: --No.
Page 18
Panel 1:
Show the front lobby of the inside of the NYPD. Several officers are smashing through the glass.
SFX: CRSSHKT
SFX: BRSSHKT
Panel 2:
Show the metal suited figure walking through the door.
SFX: BRSHKT
Panel 3:
Side view of the metal suited figure. He’s running through a wall.
SFX: BRSHKT
SFX: BOOSHKT
METAL SUITED FIGURE: PATRICK MULLIGAN!!!
Page 19
Panel 1:
Show Patrick looking around confused in his chair.
SFX: BOOSHKT
PATRICK: DO YOU HEAR THAT?!
Panel 2:
Show from behind Patrick, his chair is turned to face the opening of the cubicle.
CAPTION(Toxin): Patrick… let me in…. I can help… I can feel things you can’t. You’re going to need me.
Panel 3:
Same view, but the wall is exploding out, the metal suited figure standing there.
METAL SUITED FIGURE: THERE YOU ARE!
METAL SUITED FIGURE: My name is IRON VENGEANCE--
Page 20
Panel 1:
Side view of Patrick’s mouth.
CAPTION(Patrick): YES! COME BACK!!
IRON VENGEANCE: YOU KILLED VLADIMIR ALEKSEEV, CODENAMED IRON WRATH--
Panel 2:
Show Patrick’s arm sleeve on his right rip off, along with his prosthetic, as a new, green tendril arm erupts.
SFX: SSHRK
CAPTION(Patrick): Oh, how I forgot…
IRON VENGEANCE: -- MY FATHER!!
Panel 3:
Show Patrick’s face, half covered by Toxin.
CAPTION(Patrick): How good this feels…
CAPTION(Patrick): Please, forgive me…
Panel 4:
Show Iron Vengeance’s faceplate.
CAPTION(Toxin): Of course, Patrick…
IRON VENGEANCE: Now, I will KILL YOU, TOXIN!!
Panel 5:
Show Toxin in a Spider-man pose in his chair. He’s in his Carnage-like form, with claws and visible teeth and fangs and a Venom-y tongue sprouted from his jaws. His right arm, the tendril arm, is pure green, while everything else is normal.
TOXIN: I doubt it.
--
NO MONEY MADE - SOME CHARS OF MY OWN INVENTION (IRON VENGEANCE)